Ask About Longevity

The most common fairy tale routine, the ever-changing protagonist has a destiny, and after passing through the secret book, he becomes an enemy because of the destiny. What follows is that the protagonist grows up in adversity, defeats the enemy bit by bit, fulfills the destiny, and the protagonist also gets what he wants.

The writing is quite good, but it's not refreshing enough and feels very frustrating.

The writing is good, but it's not my type.

The writing is very good, but I always feel frustrated and panicked. I feel that the protagonist often has no initiative when encountering problems and can only passively accept the damage. This is the author's way of promoting the plot. I can only say that it is very uncomfortable to watch.

When we met for the first time, we didn't know anything and became sworn friends 😅

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I would like to give some suggestions. The protagonist can make him a bit more of a dick, like Lan Ke Qiyuan. The protagonist is from Earth and knows some saints' classics. Even when he was weak in the early stage, he was able to show his saints in front of people. You, the protagonist, are originally the ceiling of Earth's monasticism. It's unreasonable to be chased and beaten all the way through.

Taiyi saved Ku Tianzun, and you borrowed Master Tongtian's hand to make you have three flowers on your head... Niubi

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What type of person is not a mortal? Just pull it.

This routine is too old! For example, I ate snacks for 10 years and then got tired of them and switched to different snacks for five years! Do you think I should eat that

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Your writing style is really superb. Why didn't you sign the contract?