I Have a Bian Pavilion

It's not exciting, but it's a bit suffocating and depressing. Although it's not the protagonist who suffers, the rhythm of your plot is not good. It's all depressing and tragic. It's not exciting enough. Moreover, it's too long and has a lot of miscellaneous clues. As a result, the relevant plot is hardly advanced.

What did you write? Knowing there was a danger, not making preparations, and still looking for someone to die? ? ?

I read Chapter 4 and don't know what to write about.

This protagonist is really weird. He licks the heroine while killing her family, and licks the heroine while being kidnapped and killed by the heroine.

Whether or not you want to continue reading a book can actually be seen from the beginning. Many authors have a common problem. They especially like to write about the protagonist's journey from ignorance to towering trees. And this is under the premise that the writing is not strong, the concept is complex, and the plot is complicated. We all know that you want to be a blockbuster and become a god with one book, but the market determines everything. Nowadays, if the protagonist's personality is not outstanding in the early stage of a book, even if he rises in the later stage, the people who follow him will not be able to wait. You haven't realized that the most important thing about popular books is that the character of the protagonist is already established at the beginning, and only matures later on. Take this book as an example, the protagonist of a book. The protagonist was a group actor in his previous life. He must have had dreams. He must have sized up the situation and had too little vision. Then the new world must be sharp at the beginning. In this article, you emphasize that you plan to enjoy it first before growing up, and you always emphasize that you are forced to go by golden fingers. On the intellectual level, and the protagonist's own development, in the eyes of outsiders, it is purely a show-off. Everyone in the world wants to pretend, and everyone wants to be awesome. The idea was wrong from the beginning, no one will wait for you later. Is it generating electricity for love? ?

It's not as good as some TV series. It's really not exciting at all. There are quite a lot of frustrations. My beautiful sister serves a bad old man. Although he is an emperor, any man with a bit of backbone has already begun to sharpen his sword. Oh, I plan to rebel. My family has contributed a lot to this dynasty, but I started to kill donkeys and clay figures. I am still angry. I want to rebel directly, then wipe out the entire royal family, and give this bad old man the ten tortures of the Qing Dynasty.

The writing is okay, and that's not to say that the pace is too slow, but it just feels too soft. You have to throw out a few explosive bits in waves. How can you achieve results with such a soft thing?

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Poor book review area😥😥

This golden finger is simply a reminder of death. It depresses those who watch it.

There are some things that I forget even after writing them. This protagonist has no brains.