Martial Arts Begins with the Big Buddha Fruit

If the author has not read One Piece, I suggest you not write it.

I feel that the writing is quite good, and the content is also good. However, the title of the book is a little different from the imagined content. The author of this book has set the golden finger of the protagonist, which is the Big Buddha Fruit in the title, to be like the one in One Piece that has quick effects. After using it, it will directly turn into Superboy and the invincible Devil Fruit. There is a big difference, more like I have obtained some talents and buffs, such as: concentration +100, growth speed +100, Buddha form: attack bonus, defense bonus, etc. Just like the author sets the fruit to give the protagonist a change in mood, I feel that the author can add some settings to the fruit at the beginning, which will also make people understand better.

Limited to free and limited to half, first time seeing you

The most annoying thing is that if the plug-in is too big, you will find various reasons to suppress the main character's writing.

Compared with the original work, the Big Buddha Fruit in this book is just the Pinduoduo version. Apart from the name, it is not the same thing at all. The reason why Devil Fruits are so valuable is because they can enable those with abilities to reach the sky in one step, and the animal-type fantasy beast species are far superior to ordinary Devil Fruits. If you have to work hard to slowly become stronger after eating a Devil Fruit, why don't the characters in One Piece not only practice domineering but also give themselves an additional weakness? Of course, it is impossible for a book with this kind of upgrade flow to make the protagonist reach the sky in one step. Because the protagonist is bound to become stronger, and the reader is unfamiliar with the entire training system, the initial level in this book is always equal to the protagonist's initial strength. Therefore, it is meaningless no matter how strong any abilities the protagonist acquires. The way the upgrade flow is written determines that these abilities acquired in the early stage can only be expected in the future at best. For readers who want to see how to gain power by developing devil fruits, my suggestion is to lower your expectations in this regard. The current writing method is very mainstream.

To be honest, such a rubbish Devil Fruit is really weird. After eating the Devil Fruit, the combat power of the pirates will increase dozens to thousands of times. In the development, they can become a mid-level and high-level person, and they can deeply develop the sinking island and shatter the continental shelf. I am speechless for the strength of the protagonist. 😓, Ordinary people in the pirates can smash mountains with their fists? Is the Warring States Period a bloodline of giants? The fruit of the protagonist is completely useless. It has only been a while since the protagonist became weak. It is the youth-infused version of the Devil Fruit!

After reading Chapter 35, to be honest, there wasn't much that attracted me. The name of the novel is Big Buddha Fruit Food. In fact, the beginning of the novel has not yet achieved the world's best Vajra Indestructible Magic Skill NB. It gave me the feeling that it is just an automatic magic skill secret book, and it is superfluous to talk about devil fruits. Xianxia is not Xianxia, ​​and everyone is different from the same person. Where is the reader's position? Let's talk about the protagonist. The protagonist just traveled through time because he was weak and worked as a hunter for a while. It can be seen that he is quite cautious. Later, he wrote that he did not want to join the sect because he was too concerned. This is actually very outrageous. When he was weak, he did not find a sect to stay with, but stayed in that broken escort agency. As far as the current situation is concerned, the income is not high, the danger is high, and he does not know how he died. I am afraid that the readers will not know that he is the protagonist. He is cautious, and there is a paragraph about why the price of freedom is higher. In short, it seems that the character positioning is not clear, and the protagonist of the plot is soy sauce.

This book is really strong. Everyone who appears now has their own goals. The president of the chamber of commerce will lose face because of the development of the chamber of commerce. Because he understands his mistakes, he will ask his elders what to do. Killing is definitely the lowest level here. The chamber of commerce must use the chamber of commerce to solve the problem. Face is the least valuable thing. Anything can be done for the continuation of the family Do you think the entanglement between merchants and bandits is that merchants give money to bandits to kill people? ? Businessmen's own private armies become bandits? ? ? How is that possible? Gather all the people with interests in the city together to form a bandit den. You want money? We give it to you! We will give you all the resources in the future, and you can become a bandit too! You want a name? Good! You are the great hero who defeated the bandits, a guest of the Chamber of Commerce, and we support you if you want to open a gym in the city! ! Are you for justice? ? ? In my bandit den, there are people from the city lord's family, all the merchants' guilds, all the gymnasiums, they are all dead, and you are just a villain who can't defeat the bandits, put down the stone gate and escape alone! We are the righteous! This is the real tangle between businessmen and bandits!

The Big Buddha Fruit in the title of the book cannot be said to be selling sheep's head to dog meat. It can only be said to be pure talent + explosive skills. Where is the development of Devil Fruit?

The writing is great, the story is top-notch, the characters are well drawn, and there are various sentences that are not obscure or superficial scattered here and there. It is not a pure white text, it has a certain depth, but it is not difficult to read. I like it very much! I also hope that friends who came in because of the Big Buddha Fruit can be more patient and tolerant. Read the story first, and the settings will be added over time.

Since you want freedom, then don't crush the fruit of the ability. The author wants the protagonist to be free and not join a sect. Is capital the fruit of being crushed? It's better not to write about the fruit.

Animal-type fruits increase physical fitness, not increase physical burden. Not to mention that after being eaten by a fantasy beast species, the body will instantly change into a monster. Even a wolf can't defeat it. Are you kidding me? Don't write if you don't understand. Don't change it randomly. Write your original work well. If you try too hard, you deserve to be scolded.

If you eat the animal fruit, you can already maintain the animal form, but you have to slowly master the transformation into human form and animal form. After eating it, you will basically never consume physical energy. CP9 Kaku can be used after eating it, but I am not skilled at it.

This is not a devil fruit, this should be a golden bell, an indestructible power or something like that. It's really outrageous. Hanging a sheep's head to sell dog meat, hanging a sheep's head to sell dog meat, hanging a sheep's head to sell dog meat. Say important things three times

Don't be fooled, this is an animal type fantasy beast. The animal type is to enhance vitality, physical strength, durability and recovery. This thing just has an extra buff that quickly consumes physical energy.

It's a bit watery. The first time I ate the Devil Fruit, I could only hold on for 5 seconds. Aokiji and Akainu battle for seven days and seven nights. Please note that this is a high-intensity battle. People like the protagonist cannot last for hundreds of years. According to this calculation, the combat power of Akainu and Aokiji is tens of millions of times that of the protagonist.

The Devil Fruit is a trick in One Piece that allows ordinary people to instantly become masters, let alone a phantom beast. No matter how high the martial arts value is in this world, since you have written the Devil Fruit as a plug-in, at least it will match the level of superiority. Not to mention that after eating it, you can directly become a peerless master, at least a small master still wants it, right? Not to mention that you marked the invincible stream, but after eating it, you are basically still a weakling. Is there any point in writing this devil fruit? It's better not to write and let the protagonist get full upgrades with magical powers.

I suppressed it crazily and didn't even look at how much fruit power I could suppress. It was the same as not having it at all. This is the first time I heard that eating the fruit can make you weaker. The most ridiculous thing is that you can't maintain the form of a giant Buddha. Have you ever seen Chopper always in animal form? In daily life, he is not in the upright orc form, so why can't he maintain the ability of everyone's fruit? Oda has never done this before, the second set is really disgusting

Wow, the animal-type fruit does not increase physical strength but intensifies physical exertion. It's quite good.

After reading more than twenty chapters, I feel that there is no usage or development of Devil Fruit in the later chapters. I think the introduction could be changed.

The book is a good book, so let's change its name. If only one person has an objection to your name, it may be due to personal reasons. Many people have objections to your Big Buddha Fruit. Change it to another one. It won't affect your ability to write books and make money. Why are you holding on to it?

The animal type is originally designed to strengthen the body, but the author wrote that the giant Buddha fruit of the fantasy beast type consumes all the physical strength just by transforming? Fans or derivatives can be adapted, but it is most taboo to belittle the ability of the original work. Your approach is the same as when some authors wrote systematic novels in the past. After the protagonist drew a natural fruit and ate it, his body was unable to become elemental, which caused a large number of people who had read One Piece to abandon the book.

The author's writing is too idealistic, he feels that his talents are not appreciated, and he turns into a dragon when encountering a storm. Goldfinger wanted to open it but didn't dare to open it too big, and couldn't grasp the size. Qidian readers are too impetuous and can't stand it. When writing a book, you must first know why you are writing it. What kind of book do you want to write? It is recommended to write cool articles first to please readers and fill their stomachs. After you have money, write a novel that pleases yourself.

The world view of this book is really awesome. I don't know why it hasn't been updated. At the end, Xu Laoying was drained of his spiritual energy for 20 years. Is this a hint of the author's emotional experience back then? The love between Tang Luo and Yunxiu is the author's ideal state of love, and it looks like it was written during the period of passionate love. But then Tang Luo went outside the starry sky. He could have turned back, but he still didn't. My daughter arrived at the new planet when she was 5 years old. When she came back, she would be at least 10 years old. But the author still left some room and wrote a secret technique for the demon sage to quickly travel through the universe. But Xu Laoying's feeling is completely inexplicable. It was written before that Zhen Ping'er's eyes were full of him, and even the Tongming Sword Body could only feel love. He was sucked dry from behind. Even if he was sucked dry, this woman still wanted to kill Xu Laoying. The unfinished last chapter ends with Xu Laoying shutting himself down. It feels like the author was emotionally frustrated and fell out of love, so he wrote the character he designed during his previous love period into a bad character. 😅 What a pity. It's a very good book. I read it again after 5 years. What I wrote before is really good. The various settings are still very good even now.