Fierce Male God

What the hell plot? Just because of Yang Lele, you kicked your childhood sweetheart? Although I didn't read much of it later, I could tell just by looking at the chapter names that Han basically didn't appear in the later stages. I gave a reward of 200 just because I wanted to post this comment. What is the purpose of this novel? It's too poisonous. Anyway, I personally can't stand it anymore. Do whatever you want, farewell!

The emotional drama is really a bit toxic. The emotional drama is not what attracts people in this book. I don't know why I want to write about Yang Lele. Isn't it good that childhood sweethearts all go smoothly? The main focus is on the career line of the protagonist. He was almost drugged out. Every time I see Yang Lele's plot, I feel uncomfortable.

Is the recent plot toxic? The protagonist learns a bunch of Chinese martial arts or is he beaten by a little Japanese? Can't beat karate in Chuanwu? What is going on, I hope the author can improve it And the protagonist wants to make money and film, and he can also write about the Chinese film industry. What is good to write about Korean entertainment? Why should we keep writing about Korean variety shows to promote the general plot? You can also write about your own original program creation camp. Xiaohanbangzi's things don't look like they're engaging

It's a pretty good new book, but the emotional scenes are a bit exaggerated, and the description of the content and details could be improved a bit. It would be best if the author speeds up the update process.

Come on update

，，，     ，， Imagine that you have been cold-blooded. You have never had a friend except your daughter since you were a child. You two have a very good relationship. The first girl is good-looking and has a compatible personality. The two parents have a very good relationship. They live in the same city. And the first girl likes you. Although she is a little scheming, it is also because she is jealous. Just marry any good girl you meet. Doesn't this count as love? 🤔 On the other hand, the second female protagonist, after only a few days of knowing each other, she felt that the male protagonist was very manly. She made an appointment with him, hugged him, and confessed her love within a few days. If they were separated in a different place, she might have an affair with another man. After all, within a few days, she even dared to confess her love without even knowing her well. I always feel like I have a greenish tint on my head. Although this is a plot point that the author of the novel would not have done, of course it may be that I am too conservative in my thinking The male protagonist is also not good at handling relationships. He is ambiguous with the female lead and accepts her confession, which makes the female lead cry sadly. I really despise the male lead in terms of relationships. Of course, I admire some other aspects, but I won't go into details due to certain factors And this is also related to my feelings. I have been tempted by a similar green tea, so I don't like this It can only be said that it is a matter of opinion. There are a thousand Hamlets among a thousand readers, and everyone has a different opinion. However, most people prefer the female lead, which makes me happy.

In addition to the emotional drama, three female characters, childhood sweetheart Han Jiayi, Heaven-falling Yang Lele, Tang Xiuyi fell in love due to drama, and suspected manager Bai Yiyi (maybe there will be an ambiguous relationship later?), too many emotional lines, still all ambiguous

When I saw that Yang Lele, I was really stupid, what a trash book, and I still accepted her confession. She was a batch of poisonous people, and md's childhood sweetheart just didn't want it anymore. I spent two hundred points to advise everyone not to read it. It's really disgusting, purely disgusting, disgusting to the core. What I saw before I stepped on the horse was quite interesting. It poisoned me to death. What the hell are you writing about?

I jumped around and looked at it, as long as Yang Lele was really poisonous to me. I think the author takes it too much for granted. In fact, after entering high school, men and women are very sensitive to emotions, especially the male protagonist who has no one to play with. Only Han Jiayi plays with him. To be honest, no matter how dull a boy is, he can't feel that she likes him, right? If you want to say that he is that slow, then his legitimacy as the protagonist is questionable. Then either the protagonist is too shy, and here comes the problem. The protagonist is so shy, and he fell in love with another girl very quickly. The image and logic are in direct conflict. Either the male protagonist doesn't love her very much at all. Then what's the point of Han Jiayi's character being developed for so long and being specially made to be very beautiful? It's not that readers can't accept that the male protagonist is emotionally slow, but they can't accept that the protagonist is mentally retarded. If he must be portrayed as a slow person, he should be slow to everyone, so that the character's logic is clear. Of course, I am just a reader, just a suggestion. I hope that the author can first understand the logic of the protagonist when writing the next book, whether he is scum or pure.

I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and it can be said that I have read countless novels that make people die from poison. But even when I read novels that clearly say that they are cuckold novels, they are far more disgusting than the emotional scenes in your novel. You are the first novel to write emotional scenes that made me sick. I wish I could spend money to buy a pair of Northern Myanmar , those novels about the eyes of poor people whose eyes were gouged out and sold, why? Because this fucking novel of yours is so disgusting, I would rather bear the guilt, and I would like to have a pair of eyes that have never read your novel. Have you been hurt by your childhood sweetheart, or are you married to someone who has any regrets in your heart, so that you can write such a twisted and garbage plot?

It feels like it's better to just be with the heroine and let the cat out of the bag. This kind of writing is also ambiguous and it's very unpleasant for the senses.

Although I have fully booked it, I haven't finished watching it yet. When I saw Lele's confession, I couldn't stand it anymore. I thought it was a single heroine. To be honest, a person I have always liked since childhood accepted another person I just met next to me. I couldn't accept it. This really poisoned me 🤤

It didn't even make it to the shelves. It's probably for personal reasons. I can't stand it, and it's growing so fast. It's a bit disgusting to be confused Come on! Goodbye

To be honest, everything else I watched was okay, but this emotional scene was really uncomfortable to watch. Now I only see Yang Lele's confession. I feel really sorry for my childhood sweetheart. Childhood sweethearts are really no match for the fall from the sky, and they can't compare to someone I've known for a few days. To be honest, it's too fast. You might as well give it a little foreshadowing. I don't know what will happen to this green plum in the future, but there is a high probability that she will be with the male protagonist. Alas, don't criticize me. When reading urban novels, many female protagonists really make me feel uncomfortable.

I can't stand it anymore. That Yang Lele was a total failure. The childhood sweetheart was portrayed very well, but then Yang Lele usurped the throne directly? I don't object to your heroine's portrayal of the Heavenly Fall type, but Yang Lele's portrayal is not good either. Are childhood sweethearts really not as good as the Heavenly Fall type? Anyway, let's go through the process, I can't help it anymore, I can't watch it anymore, I say goodbye, I rewarded you with two hundred points just to tell future generations, if you don't like childhood sweethearts, it's better to fall from the sky, so I suggest you don't read it.

I will reward you with 200 points, not for anything else but to give you a few words. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, then just fucking don't write them. At the beginning, I wrote about a childhood sweetheart, and then I cherished her very much. He turned around and kissed another girl in front of others. There is basically no plot about her later on, so don't write about childhood sweethearts. Or just write well. It's so written that I'm speechless. Slip away. It's so poisonous

The protagonist's emotions are really toxic. He gave up his childhood sweetheart and got together with someone he only knew for two or three days. I don't know why, but I feel like the protagonist buying the elixir is like the author trying to suppress his fear level.

It's no longer poisonous, and I can't stand it anymore. Green plums are not as good as falling from the sky, it's so damn poisonous! I regretted everything I ordered

I haven't watched it for a long time. I felt bad when he found a girlfriend. I thought it would be better if I persisted. However, all the supporting characters disappeared. Even Qingmei had no plot. There was no other main line except boxing. It was very boring. Moreover, this kind of ambiguous relationship with a girl ended up being chased by someone he had known for a few days. It was very scumbag.

It's really disgusting. What a mess you wrote. It's really poisonous. I'll just tell you to quit and never see me again.

Thank you very much, daily guide

Maybe the author just wants to make money. If you think in this way, you will find that there is nothing wrong with it. First, lay out the word count of childhood sweethearts, then write a big poisonous point, and set a price limit of no more or no less, just to let someone buy at this price, and then scold the author. Thinking about it this way, this author is quite clever!

Quan Ding jumped to read it. The male protagonist design feels very innovative. Since the love line has been written, why does Han come out with a Yang, and he wants to accept it but not, and pulls it out from time to time to whip the corpse. It belongs. The love line is too redundant. I wasted so much pen and ink just to write a regret. Please, life is already very hard.

It's extremely poisonous, and the reward can be refunded 😓

The last one I read was barely considered a fighting novel. I forgot the title. The main character was the neon man, Qingji. Although there was a sister in the early stage, which seemed to have some meaning, it was cut off later and the protagonist himself could tell the difference. I can only say that if the author just wants to write it, there is nothing he can do about it. After all, everyone has their own persistence and opinions. But you want to gain both fame and fortune, but you don't want to follow the crowd. Sorry, for now, you don't seem to have the ability.

It's too little, it's too little. The monthly ticket has been added.

The ending was pretty good overall, but there was no follow-up to the reporter who discovered the school.

Let's get better

. . . Am I dying? ?

Did Wang Baoqiang buy the author's copyright for his new movie "The Octagonal Cage"? 🤓