Handsome Guys in Tokyo Don't Dream of Beautiful Girls

It's pretty good, the characters are well drawn. The character of the protagonist is also quite to my liking.

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How could it be possible to be so poor and weak?

I feel like the more updates the author makes, the happier I will be reading every day.

Briefly describe your viewing experience. (The first time I saw Mei) 1. Writing: I have a good experience in writing, and it has a very young feeling 2. Plot: 🍬It is still sufficient, and the daily writing is good 3. Characters: The idea of the male protagonist having a harem has been in the novel since the beginning It's very obvious, which makes me feel that the process of the male protagonist's desire to open a harem is missing, and the character changes are missing. Now I feel that the male protagonist is a bit of a scumbag (it didn't resonate). He flirts with girls in a fair and upright way, and the character of the male protagonist is not very three-dimensional at the moment. As for the female protagonist, I feel that the author has portrayed it very well (more carefully than the male protagonist). Shiratori is a little confused and cute, and Mei is arrogant and can show off. The images of the female protagonists are still relatively three-dimensional, emm, I feel that the male protagonist is not worthy of the female protagonists (at present). You can add more events later and add a climax of conflict appropriately to portray the male protagonist.

Yesterday I started reading this novel from Daily Guide with the mentality of giving it a try. It was surprisingly good. Let me briefly talk about my feelings after reading it. This is purely my subjective opinion. 1. Subjective attitude This is a novel that has the Japanese light flavor that I imagined. The content of the stories in Japanese light novels are actually very similar. How to distinguish good from bad depends on whether the narrative flow of the story and the style of writing have the flavor of Riqing. I think the author's writing skills are good and he balances the two very well. From the beginning of the novel, the suspense of how the triangular relationship between the protagonist and the two girls came to be, and the subsequent unfolding of the story are all in line with my taste. Well, Riqing, slowly unfolding is the feeling of Riqing. At the same time, the content of the story is also okay. I see that there are no poisonous points in the update, and there are no problems with the story logic. 2. Characters At present, the plot still does not involve the protagonist's childhood, and the story line about the protagonist and the teacher has not yet been drawn out. The emotional line is established, but the characters are not completely established. Except for feelings, other aspects are weak. At present, we can only see the protagonist's attitude towards beautiful girls. What about other people and his attitude and handling of things? It's not obvious. The background setting is that one's parents died when he was ten years old and he has become the present by himself. This kind of hard work and the resulting mood are not deep enough yet. They only exist in the background setting. Readers know it, but they can't feel it from the story. Other characters have the same problem. In short, this is a novel with an absolutely passable emotional line and a slight lack of characterization. However, considering that we have only written the paid chapter 27 so far, it seems to be okay. After all, it is not fully developed. There is a long chapter to make the characters more three-dimensional. Come on, author. If you maintain this quality, I will order it all.

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The new book issue is updated twice a day. Although the number of words is small, I still hope that everyone can read the latest chapter. Each new book is a seedling that needs your support to thrive. When you have time, you can leave a comment or the like. Of course, it would be best if you can vote. Thank you all. If the results can exceed expectations, there will be extra things like extra cars in the future, please. The author has never been on the newcomer list, and I really want to go there. . .

This protagonist doesn't know anything, can't do anything, and has a very weak personality. He is really a trash person. It is outrageous that a group of female protagonists like him. Only the two female protagonists, Shiratori and Amakusa, are suitable for a Japanese Asashi male protagonist like him. The other female protagonists feel too inconsistent with him.

This book was reported by someone and after it was released, the following content was modified. Sakurai Naoko does not exist. Yukina Naoko lives next door to the Sakurai family and has been close to Sakurai Ruiko since she was a child. Treated as [relative] by the latter. The identity of Shiratori Xiaoxiang is clarified. (The original identity was the same, but I was worried about being maliciously misled by some people again.) Shiratori Koka is always Shiratori Koka, and Shiratori Ayaori has never existed.

Madam, will you accept it too? If you don't accept it, this plot will feel like pure poison. I always feel inexplicably ntr

The book is good, but there are always people in the book review section who are obsessed with Lianyou. I really think Lianyou is the origin of all things, right?

The writing is quite good, the characters are well-developed, and they are not too facial like other light characters. The daily writing is very good and very comfortable to read. The only thing that made me uncomfortable was seeing the male protagonist's attitude towards Igarashi being too licking and not liking it. Although I know that this attitude should be caused by the past of the three of them, it is reasonable, but the main plot is too long, and it is a riddle type that has been kept pressed and not revealed. I tear it apart today and tear it up tomorrow. As a result, I always want to see Igarashi eat a lot but cannot, and the daily shaping does not make her particularly likable, which makes this character more and more annoying. It wears away the enthusiasm and patience of reading this book. (It's just personal preference, not poisonous)

The original name of this book: "Plan to Raise a Rich Woman in Tokyo" The reason for the name change is very complicated. . . I hope everyone can invest, vote, and so on...

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The male protagonist in the front is a bit weak, there is no explosive point, and there are too many hidden clues. He is a bit of a Riddler. It is no problem for a famous author, but you are a newcomer, you are at a disadvantage, and it is natural that you have poor results.

Now the direction of the plot is a bit confusing, the wife is pregnant?!

Izumi was originally a dedicated person, but Kiyohime felt guilty that she had stolen Ohana's man, so she asked Izumi to open a harem. Izumi reluctantly gave up on Mika in order to prevent Mika's other personality from disappearing. But the system was given by another royal flower. This plot and emotional drama is already the second most interesting after the love game in my opinion.

He is indeed a scumbag! Taking advantage of the golden finger, he attacked everywhere and wrote the harem on his face. Other novels are all due to accidents and fate, and then the male protagonist Asasi does not want to hurt anyone, so he is forced to open a harem. The protagonist who takes the initiative to start a harem is a bit perverted... As long as he doesn't trade in stocks, he can accept it. What he can't stand is the author's dirty tricks to artificially balance the stock trading.

Why does it become heavier the more I write it? It feels a bit strange😫

This is Riqing! Simple conversations, simple daily life, simple life, simple emotional frustrations, simple things that happen every day, these together make up a story about Japanese love that is not simple. This is the Japanese novel that I want to read! Come on, author! I like the style very much. (It smells like Toru Watanabe)

So did Jinguji gain the love of the male protagonist by stabbing Igarashi in the back? Then why did Igarashi give up? Seeing that I am still confused, and the system has also disappeared. Apart from increasing the ability of the male protagonist, does it have any other function? Is there any Riddler teacher who can give me some popular science? I was so dizzy when I read the novel for the first time.

I have just read dozens of chapters, and the plot of Igarashi is, how should I put it, a bit pretentious 🙂

Domestic Japanese light novels always like to use "Man'yoshu" to show literacy and so on, but I think there are many Chinese translations in "Man'yoshu" that are half ancient. It's good, but not good enough. It's not that interesting. It's better to just use ancient Chinese poetry. Anyway, the ancient Japanese also liked to write Chinese poetry.

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Emmmm Some people may like the Riddler, but I really hate the Riddler.

Recommend a book: The Super Fairy Grass Girl Arrives in the Land of No Sea

Generally speaking, I feel good, but sometimes I feel that the female characters are a bit childish, and I feel a bit tired of aesthetics after many times 🙂 Is it a bit too formulaic?