The Evil Senior Sister Clings to Me

I thought it was pretty good when I first started watching it. The Japanese light flavor is quite strong. At first I thought it was similar to "A Young Pig-Headed Boy Will Not Dream of a Bunny Girl Senpai". Although the second female lead (Ko Aikawa) is a bit twisted, at least the male protagonist is sober. Only later did I realize that I was wrong, just like when I met Chun Ai and saw that the result was ntr, it was exactly the same. If you have mental mysophobia, don't read it (I didn't tell you that you have distorted views) Well, I stayed up late to read Chapter 77, which dissuaded me from overestimating the male protagonist's bottom line. I took it for granted 😵🥱

The second one is Fujiwara. This one also makes me feel a little speechless. She used to like a certain member of Yukiyo's family (male), and then all the Yukiyo family died except her. It seemed to be related to Yukiyo, so she hated Yukiyo and wanted to make her a loner. Then the Fujimura teacher liked Yukiyo. In order to isolate Yukiyo, she took the initiative to get engaged to Fujimura. This is also the reason why she later approached the protagonist (note: this person seems to be the same as others) She has lived there before, and there are traces of male life in the family, but the first time it belongs to the protagonist, but the progress of the relationship with others is not described) She can even go to bed with the protagonist in order to isolate Yukiyo. Of course, some of it must be because she likes the protagonist, but she still has feelings for Yukiyo's family in her heart. This one gives me the feeling that she will do anything to isolate Yukiyo, including selling her body, which is quite outrageous.

I started reading Chapter One Hundred and Seventy-Nine, and I suddenly discovered a phenomenon before reading. Why does the author like to use sentences like "if..." As chapter titles

Starting today, there will be two updates every day. Spending a few minutes reading as a pastime in your spare time is the greatest support for this book. The new book issue has a small number of words. The author is a handicapped player, so I hope you can understand. Above.

Just finished reading the first few chapters. It actually feels pretty good. Although there are many places that are not clearly explained, I personally understand that this is a kind of blank space. As long as it is grasped well, it will have great charm. What attracts me more is that the protagonist described by the author has an online IQ. It is not clear what his character is, but the fact that the protagonist is not mentally retarded is already very rare. One of the more serious problems is that the characters and events in the first few chapters are too dense, to the point of discouraging them from quitting. I personally think that for the opening chapters, one or two conflict events for less than five main characters are enough. However, in the first few chapters of this book, we can't even count the characters on ten fingers, and there are endless major events. This is extremely inappropriate to put at the beginning. I hope the author can make changes.

This book is relatively slow-burning, and many things need to be read later to be clear. Of course, I know that many readers don't like slow-burning things and just want to be happy at a glance, but the author cannot write such things. Writing and reading are two-way choices. There is nothing that everyone likes. However, it is quite excessive to use your imagination to criticize my work without watching the plot and knowing nothing. It's okay to find faults, but please be thoughtful.

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The underground rat people can only highlight their existence on the Internet. One or two random sentences ruin someone's work. I can only say that there are so many rats online now that there is no room for them in the sewers.

There are too many plots in this Aikawa, I really can't stand it anymore

I have been reading light novels for a long time, and I have never seen a supporting character that feels like this. Either the author has created a new genre, or the writing method has been eliminated.

There is something wrong with this author's mind, and he shaped the characters of the protagonist and others like this. What kind of abnormal growth environment did I go through to become like this? This author directly rewarded him, he was born like this. It really makes people jealous, why can the protagonist be so happy?

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I would like to ask if that elementary school student is being raised as a daughter-type heroine, or if she is really being raised as a daughter. The former is great, but the latter is recommended with less plot 😎

I have only read Chapter 79, and I probably understand the core problem behind the lack of results in this book. The author's plot is very good, and the character logic is basically smooth. According to the writing time, it should be able to reach the end of Nikgaru Tokyo Love Story. So, why is the exit index only lv1? It's probably not that I was buried, because I was one of the first people to subscribe to Lianyou. Excellent works have been praised. The million-word word count + interesting plot and characters have no views. There must be something wrong with the direction. Let's take Lianyou as an example. Lianyou's popularity is largely due to the two extremely stunning female protagonists. Crow obviously has a certain preference for R Sang, so for a period of time in the early and mid-term, Meiji appeared very rarely, and then subscriptions went crazy. Then Crow hurriedly corrected his mistake, and then the teacher entered on the day of xx. His subscriptions were lost + he was sprayed, and the teacher in the back basically had no role. I say all this just to make it clear that whether it's Yukiyo-senpai's early dreaminess or Fuyutsuki-senpai's bad taste, I personally highly appreciate it. But Aikawa's plot is so boring, I didn't even expect that she was the first heroine, a boring substitute, a boring woman, with no characteristics, only pain, and indifferent atonement (?). I originally thought it would be a character like Tamamo Kaomi who, after solving Fuyutsuki-senpai's matter, would directly become invisible or detonate the twist in an extremely malicious way, and then become a female passerby. Then, I saw Chapter 79 and fell into deep thought. . The author's writing style and plot are very good, and he is quite good among the many Japanese girls I have watched. However, he did not mainly write about the two charming seniors. Instead, he wrote about Aikawa, who did not show any characteristics until Chapter 79. Emmmm It's better to have the male protagonist dance Jingle Bells. . . Looking forward to the growth of the author's next book

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After reading Chapter 20, I feel that the sense of fragmentation is a bit strong, and the blank space and riddle plot are not handled very well.

How can I put it this way? I feel that the reasoning is a bit naive, and the murderer's admission was too direct.

After getting married, my husband often goes out to socialize and has less and less time to go home. Sometimes there are lipstick marks and the smell of perfume on my clothes, and I fall asleep when I get home. It turns out that married men really do change. Now when I look in the mirror, I often feel that I am old, and I can't stop thinking about things. I wanted a divorce, but I endured it for the sake of my children. If you pity me, just update more every day, write more, and don't be so short.

There is no logic, what on earth is this, suspense for the sake of suspense, completely unbearable.

Hmm... In the end, I gave up without seeing the paid chapters. The author's reply to my comment showed that he still cares about the readers' opinions, which is a good thing. Maybe it's because I didn't agree with this book. Let me tell you my opinion on abandoning the book. The writing of the first 10 chapters was a bit messy. A lot of characters were thrown away before I understood the setting of the book. When I was still thinking about the meaning of this character's appearance, the next one came in front of me, and I couldn't tell who was who. Generally, when a character appears, he should come with an incident and let the protagonist push the plot. There are also some who appear first to set up a foreshadowing and then fill in the holes, but there are so many characters here that I am afraid, it is too confusing, 2 What I don't like the most is the separation of context and scenes. There are three places that make it uncomfortable to watch. The first is the part where the male protagonist goes to the female teacher's house. The journey to the teacher's house is not described. The second is the part where the male protagonist drinks tea at the senior sister's house. The content of the chat is not written. They are drinking tea one second, and the male protagonist says he is leaving the next second. The omitted content says they chatted and were very happy, but I was confused because I didn't know what they talked about. The third and most explosive point is that the male protagonist went to Kuroda's house as a guest. The author used a flashback to write it here, but did not explain it at the beginning. That is, in the previous paragraph, he was still thinking about how to contact Kuroda, but the next paragraph succeeded. I was really numb when I read this. Even if it was later added that the male protagonist saved Kuroda's mother on the train in the morning, I still felt that it was too abrupt.

When will the next book be released? Will continue to support. This book is well written, I like Kaori very much! Come on!

The twist at the back is really unnecessary, it's just a tough job. As a romance novel, it should have been finished a long time ago. The heroine has been conquered, and I've been dragging my feet to speed up. It's enough to finish it and start a new book after the remaining holes are almost filled. At this point, you still have to finish it.

Summon Shennong😍😍😍

It's boring to eat, but it's a pity to throw it away. Generally speaking, there is no big difference from other harem light novels. I thought I could see the operation that shines before my eyes, but after seeing hundreds of chapters, it is boring. They are all people. It would be interesting if they helped Fuyuki kill his parents and make his son homeless. Finally, he told Chika that you are just a tool, and then turned around and became the single heroine to be with Yukiyo.

Author, do you want to accept Qianhua? If you accept it, I can stop the loss in time.

I still like the author's setting very much. After all, Nikkei suspense is a rare animal at the beginning, but maybe I really haven't caught the airwaves. After all, there are many people below who say it's very good. It's just my personal opinion, not an opinion. After all, I don't want to teach the author to write a book. I'm just a reader. I'm not qualified. Another uncomfortable part of this book is that besides the names of many people, they are Japanese. Nothing is rendered. After all, daily life, I think it is better to write about the daily life atmosphere of the protagonist in Japan. The name of the place where the protagonist lives has not appeared until now. It seems that as long as the name is changed back to Seris, it will not feel out of place. As for the heroine, most of the characters are quite unique, but there is nothing I particularly like. Except for the senior sister, as for those who talk about cuckolds, pure nt, the author can just leave it alone.

The next book will be about yandere. It will be popular When will you publish the new book? Or did you change the title?

After changing his body, he looked confused and confused. Never mind

Everything else is pretty good, but the part about Sayuri and Kondo makes me uncomfortable.

By the way, what is the status of the Fuyutsuki family in Japan? Looking at this expressiveness, it looks a bit like the Tokugawa family during the shogunate period, the de facto rulers of the Japanese political system.