The Young Monk Devoted Himself to Returning to Secular Life

Not bad, the author has strong writing skills, except for the emotional scenes. But poor writing of emotional scenes is not a fatal problem. Looking at the terrifying resurgence of Ghost Eye Yang Jian, his poor female character skills. It's not just relying on the superb plot to become a best-selling god. I think this book has that potential. Very strong. The problem with the author's emotional drama is that the characters are too stereotyped, such as Bai Suzhen. The character she left through her film and television works is too flat and too strong, making it difficult for the author to elaborate on some interactive details to enrich the love relationship. Currently, there are various arrangements, various rescues, some blushes, some soft whispers, and the knee pillows begin to stick together. It feels like fate has arrived, and it seems that we don't need to talk and can fall in love. The suggestion I give is that I hope the author can break through the stereotype of Bai Suzhen's flat film and television image. Use the protagonist as the close perspective of the people around you to write some ordinary interactions, not the kind of blushing, heart-beating, rescue arranged by God. At present, Xiao Qingxuanjizi's interactions are richer than Bai Suzhen's. I hope the author will continue to work hard and learn from some authors who specialize in writing about daily love affairs. They are really good at making love.

I originally thought he was a free-spirited monk who had broken the precepts, but he turned into a holy mother in the middle of the process. I thought I would try my best to save him if I could, but I would take it lightly if I couldn't save him. I didn't expect to risk my life and death for a few mortals. Too poisonous

I want to read articles about monks who truly possess great wisdom, intelligence, wisdom and kindness. They were monks who cultivated themselves as Buddhas since they were young. They are not like the many peddlers who break the precepts and return to secular life in various ways since they became monks. It is not interesting at all.

It has already collapsed since Lingshan, and the subsequent plot has been going downhill. The author just jumped out of the routine and jumped again. The author may think that readers like this kind of flower monk more, but I can only say that you really don't understand readers, so let's go.

The section of Lingshan Mountain jumped. The Buddha nature in front of me was gone. Just like Lan Ke, his fairy spirit is gone.

The subject matter is interesting, but the plot is not very good. The restrictions on breaking the precepts are too great, which makes people speechless. If you are afraid of the master, don't break the precepts. You have broken so many, do you think Fahai is a fool? Other people have great magic power, but they are not fools. If you want to break the precepts, it is better to break the precepts openly and openly. You don't want to be both responsible and established at the same time.

Let me give you my opinion. The most taboo thing about monk novels is to have a female protagonist. Originally, people came to read monk novels. You want to have a female protagonist? Wouldn't it be better if I just read the novel about cultivating immortals? Isn't the plot of the heroine there better? Secondly, if you are bent on returning to the secular world, breaking the precepts will depend on the circumstances. At the very least, the sexual precept must not be broken or have before you return to the secular world. How does it look like you, a monk with great magic power, have a vase heroine? Even if you want to break it, you have to do it after you return to secular life and have the skills and resources to cultivate immortality. Otherwise, you will live for hundreds or thousands of years, and the heroine will be 40 and 50 years old. To sum up, why should I read your book when a monk has a woman? It's just a matter of isolation. Isn't he interesting in fairy tales or fantasy harem novels? Why should you, a monk, lead a heroine?

As for the monk, let's just leave the heroine alone. It's easy to write the heroine of a fairy tale as a vase or a burden, not to mention that the protagonist is a monk.

Since he is a monk, he should write about what a monk should do. If he just uses the name of a monk to write contrast, it would be boring.

The opening chapter is a catheter, I want to report it when I see it

I'm from another world, take a seat first and then I'll be the elder 😜

Lingsu knocked on the door for no reason, beat Xiaobai, and the protagonist let him go. Is that the end? Bullied in vain? Just kidding

There is also a portrait next door that is exactly the same as this one. The name is that if you break the precepts under Fa Hai, you will become stronger.

I'm a bit confused about why the protagonist is so persistent in being reincarnated, and why he is so confident that Meng Po Soup won't have any effect on him? Others have said that even if you awaken after reincarnation, you may lose your memory. Besides, is he so sure that after dying once, the golden finger of his system will not disappear? In case the system is bound to the body, the reincarnation will not be directly cool.

The claw that came from another world

Chapter 150: I haven't broken my sexual precepts yet. I am neither a life-or-death friend nor a reckless hero...

The original god of herding, I hope the author will not be harmonized this time.

I specially made a comment to make a comment. The system article should be withdrawn. I'm leaving anyway.

That's fucking outrageous. Why do so many people not like spending money to read books? It's gone as soon as they're written. Who would be happy to let them go?

Author, you should clear up the comment section. A group of people who have not subscribed to any books are giving advice all day long, and it is a mess. It would be fine if what he said was reasonable, but at first glance it was all trivial and quoted out of context.

I won't be reading your novels anymore. There are two books in total, All Eunuchs. What do you think?

What's going on? Why aren't there any more updates?

I feel like someone else has changed the writing since Chapter 222. Did the author buy it? It doesn't feel like a book at all

Can you be responsible for the people who believe in you?

I will leave this book on the bookshelf waiting for you. Come back and update it as soon as you think about it. No matter what the reason is, you should insist on it. Regardless of others, you should have an explanation even for yourself.

Author Author, do you want to read what you are writing? Just pretend that the test of entering Lingshan mentioned above does not exist? How did you get to Lingshan with this kind of mentality?

Come on, I have a problem after reading more than 200 chapters of comments. What's going on?

The writing is good, but the biggest problem is the update. But if you want quality, you can't ask for 10,000 words a day.

It's quite outrageous and disappointing. I felt something was wrong in December last year, but I didn't expect it to end. . . . What I wrote earlier is really good. Forget it, I'll put it on the bookshelf and wait and see.

No longer updated? Damn it, it's rare to seriously think about raising a book at the starting point