Kowloon Seizes the Direct Descendant, and I Am the Only One Who Devotes Myself to Cultivating Immortality

The writing is very good, keep up the good work! Don't be influenced by trolls🙂

It's okay at first glance, but it feels more awkward as you get to the back. First, the protagonist can save the world's refugees just after cultivating immortality? What kind of immortal can you cultivate to be so awesome? I can't even imagine how awesome you can be in the future. One punch in a fight consumes all the mana. Needless to say how much mana is needed to save the victims. Just like when I play games, my phone's battery runs out after a round of battle, but it can last for a week while listening to music and watching videos. It's obviously unreasonable. So this point is very counter-intuitive. The other one is this maid, who doesn't look like a maid at all. If you wrote it as a sister you adopted when you were a child, I think it would be better than a maid. This book has a tendency to be mindless and cool. Many things must be logical, otherwise it will not stand up to scrutiny.

Too outrageous? Other poisonous points include just playing tricks and saving the world, and just having a stupid and white protagonist who is brainless. The key point is that I read Chapter 21. The protagonist also said that he was afraid of trouble, so he let the villain's son go. He said that he would let them think he was a broom monster, so that all the villains could come over and the protagonist would not have to worry. . . Where is this protagonist playing Fantasy Westward Journey here? Turn-based, right? The villain must come, Wuyu, if others don't come, you have no legs, so you can't find it, right? That's it, the protagonist is still scolding the emperor for saying something and always compromising with the ministers. Aren't you the same? If you really have some brains and some belief in saving the world, you should directly destroy the villain and the prince. It's not like you have no strength. Speechless I watched Dou Po Shang Qiong ten years ago. No matter how routine it is, Xiao Yan is not a turn-based game. Xiao Yan actively comes to fight monsters many times.

Kowloon seizes the direct descendant? I'm afraid that the Nine Insects will seize the direct descendants.

The first few chapters are quite interesting. From the moment the emperor sent people up the mountain, he began to confer wisdom They all succeeded in cultivating immortals. To save Jiangnan, they actually planted food and asked people to send it there. If you had the ability to punch Na Zhou to death, wouldn't Jiang Nan be saved?

The male protagonist's behavior is neither decisive nor cunning. I feel that the author lacks social experience, his ideas are very idealistic, and overall he lacks excitement.

The writing is really fucking rubbish. It's not as good as a book written by a newcomer. The main character is a virgin bitch and the writing is mindless. It's rubbish. I don't recommend reading it.

Who is Sui Feng? The author honestly told you that you didn't copy this and then changed the protagonist's name

After reading the reviews and reading Baihe's recommendations, this book is destined to be a hit.

I feel this book is pretty good. It doesn't have any hint of intelligence. I really don't know what plot point the previous comment about "zhizhi" comes from. The routine is old but the description is normal and there is nothing poisonous about it. But there are also shortcomings 1. The emperor's description seems to be sophisticated, but the actual plot looks a bit silly 2. The protagonist is still very weak and yet he has no scruples in promoting his cultivation of immortality. If someone is really determined to kill him, how can one person match a force?

Departing from the theme, there are disputes over imperial power, conspiracies, and calculations; all these annoying things are being done to the protagonist, where is there any time for practice? Cultivation of immortality, cultivation of mind and other trivial matters are constantly interfering. What about the theme?

Get off my bookshelf! Two chapters have been updated in two weeks. I want to tell the eunuch directly, what's the matter with the delay? Or do you mean that when readers are not here, you can stop updating if you want, write if you want, and be eunuch if you want, and you don't want to inform readers, so you look down on us readers?

Seeing now, combined with the situation in the comment area, let me talk about my senses. The plot structure and writing style of this novel can be said to be above the passing line according to Internet standards. There is nothing particularly stupid. I can also understand the critical remarks in the comment area; The reason in my opinion is the author. The description of the protagonist's character is that of a "good guy", but I think it's not that readers don't like good guys, but they don't like the dilemma of "good guys have to be pointed at gunpoint". This feeling is exacerbated by today's realistic atmosphere and the writing style of online articles that always focuses on the protagonist. This can be seen from the various comments in the comment area. It can be seen from the perspective that most of the comments are based on worries about the protagonist's situation; Secondly, regarding the fact that the protagonist never hides his cultivation of immortality, my point of view is don't worry, I believe the author will arrange the plot. We are not the authors, and the plot or certain situations we imagine may not appear later in the novel. In the continuation of the plot, if he dares to write like this, it will be arranged later, and it won't be too late to spray him again after he has lost his temper; Finally, I followed it from the previous book. I really like the author writing the protagonist with a good person's character. Although it is a bit against the current trend, I am looking forward to writing this book. I am waiting and hoping. Come on.

You can also look at the front and what is written at the back. If you go out to the border and kill tens of thousands of people and kill a second child, you will be invincible. How can you let the barbarians play over there? The title of the book doesn't tell you anything about the theme. Just watch you and kill them randomly.

It's really disgusting. Immortal cultivators are playing these intrigues. They don't dare to kill even a traitorous minister. I'm sick.

I personally like this book, but I have been following it for a few days and I can't keep up. It's not that the writing is not good, but the content of each chapter is too little and the connection with the main plot is too weak. After the protagonist leaves the capital, if you look at the writing of these chapters, it is very boring and the content is not compact enough. Simply put, it can be explained clearly in a few sentences. It's totally unnecessary, just dump it! It's not easy to see the author's updates, but I read the content every day. How can I look forward to it? If I don't have twenty chapters to read together, it will be lonely! So I personally think it's very detrimental to further studies!

It's strange. After reading a few chapters, my eyes seemed to have problems and I couldn't see clearly. No matter how I looked at the author's homepage, I would see Lv0 as Lv4.

The logic is childish, but the writing is okay.

To be honest, I suspect that the author of the last book sold his account

I can read about ten chapters at a time and it's still manageable, but if I keep up with it, it's boring and I want to delete it.

Did you sell the account before it was put on the shelves? Were those chapters written in Heel before it was released? Wasn't it well written before? Why does the protagonist suddenly seem to be a different person?