I Am a Dragon, Not an Evil God

You can't write about cannibals in the Alien Beast genre. In real society, cannibals are secretive. It's really funny!

There are too many inner dramas in the protagonist's mind, and it's just a lot of nonsense. We are here to watch the plot, not to watch the protagonist's nagging!

The author writes well! The killing is decisive at the beginning, which is very appetizing, but the further you write, the more common the common problem of exotic beast literature. No matter what, you will push your grandma when you see a beautiful woman. There is nothing wrong with writing so many. I am not here to see you describe women in various ways, especially the attitude of the Kang Na girl described earlier by the author who does not know what to think is very disgusting. The author should pay attention to it in the future! Also, it's disgusting that the protagonist gave his snake scales to the woman. Isn't there some trickery and magic in the world that can attack the protagonist through the medium of snake scales? What a joke! I don't know if the author set it up or simply didn't pay attention! Anyway, I personally feel uncomfortable. Of course, I, Alien Beast Ask, have seen such things too much and am particularly sensitive to it! I also hope the author will continue to work hard! Cannibalism cannot be written because of 404, but at least the protagonist must be dignified. Extraordinary people are essentially not the same race as mortals! The relationship between them is a dependence relationship. The author can pay attention to this basic point. The protagonist's mentality is still somewhat biased towards human morality. At least after experiencing the descriptions of Kang Han and others, it makes people care! Especially when the protagonist treats the bald donkey monk and says that he maintains his bottom line and will feel uncomfortable if he doesn't kill him, while you write about the protagonist's hesitation not to kill him, you also describe the monk's scream of an evil beast, especially when the monk attacks the protagonist first and then lets him go, it feels very uncomfortable. Human beings have extraordinary dimensions. The reason for thinking of bottom-line humanity is that they come from humans. However, although the protagonist was a human in his previous life, he is now a beast and is extraordinary. Based on the bottom-line humanity of humans, it is difficult to violate it. Of course, this is a common problem in novels about beasts. This is what the world is unkind and treats all things as spoiled dogs. Anyway, the author, keep up the good work!

Evil God﹒ The Dragon of the End And his human form

The more I write, the more something seems wrong. What about the previous Gou and Wudiliu? And did you forget the skill of controlling puppets? Everything becomes positive.

Isn't it a dragon? Why is it that in addition to feeling depressed, I also have to talk on the phone every time I feel depressed? It seems that my brain is not very good.

Is it that the dark heroine is not close to humanities?

The protagonist is a strange beast, an evil god, why does he have feelings for other species? Real people cannibalize people, so novels are not allowed to be written, let alone a virtual one. How does it affect the three views? It is extremely ridiculous. It would be a pity not to use a few humans to develop into high-level people. This way, there are more resources to support it, and the ideological stamp does not need to be extreme. It is confusing.

If you just wrote the plot of reincarnating into a snake, there would be nothing wrong with it. Before you wrote, you were an invincible dragon, but now that you are reincarnated, you are afraid of this, which is very awkward.

Just put it on the shelf, bullshit dragon, there are more than a hundred chapters and there is not even a shadow of a dragon. Even if you transform the snake into a dragon and add a few more species, it will be better than before.

This point is very strange. The previous chapter about civilians said that life was not good in times of stress but they could eat well. Then in life after the disaster, a large number of civilians had no food at all, and a pack of biscuits was worth grabbing (before the core area was blown up). The author can describe what kind of people are still watching the live broadcast, and the atmosphere in the live broadcast room is too joyful, and there is no trace of the current disaster era (which affects the sense of substitution a little). Although this problem has little impact, I hope the author can explain it. This is my personal opinion, and I don't know how other readers feel. I hope there are more chapters in this book, one chapter a day is not enough!

I've read more than a dozen chapters and the plot is okay, but there's too much nonsense and it's a bit watery.

I don't understand. The protagonist is obviously the reincarnation of an evil god. Shouldn't he be at the top of the food chain? Why are you so stubborn after reincarnation? The protagonist is not a snake, but a dragon. Isn't it just casual to beat those animals?

It would be great if the author could make the protagonist's temperament more stable. The rest of the writing is okay.

The main character is just one 🐍 selling dog meat with a sheep's head

Always deflated, always mentally active, the protagonist's brain also shrank after he turned into a snake. Is this interesting? Or is that attractive? Why write this? 🤔

The flamingo ate more than 50 spiritual powers and converted into 3 spiritual powers, which were eaten by a bunch of little mice. Is it reasonable and comparable to transform a drop of magic power? Is this still 100% digestible?

Can the monthly ticket financier give me a boost?

It's a bit like studio writing, but it's pretty well written.

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