I Am the Only Immortal in the World

Why are you so anxious for the heroine to appear? How many of you here want to see the development of Goldfinger MC? The heroine is not a buff template added by the author, but is almost purely a player. In the later stage (if the book is good), you can add a special mod and open a portal to other worlds. Isn't this better than the heroine? The buffs on the heroine are big or small. They are human-shaped pendants and are installed in the equipment slot. I hope Goldfinger has a more ambitious concept. I personally prefer the development of Goldfinger for this type of novel. I personally like MC. After a few months, I reproduced and moved the building complex released by the boss into the picture I created ＯＫ(ゝω´★)

At present, the protagonist's character and Gu Pan are the poisonous points of this book. It can be seen that the author wants to write well but lacks the strength. It is recommended to polish it and complete the world view later before publishing. I wish you can write better and better in the future

I think we still need to explain the protagonist's "self-preservation" ability, so that the protagonist's attitude towards others can be explained clearly.

It looks very good. It doesn't have that kind of opening where you just have a woman chattering around and pretending to be X. It's the Zhang Mansion strategy that feels a bit unsatisfactory, because the hard power is too strong, and any conspiracy and tricks are useless, but overall it is still very good. I have read some books like this before, but they all start with one or a few women walking around and pretending to be X. It is simply embarrassing, maybe in the eyes of those authors It's so cool, having beautiful women around and strong strength, and then I get so crazy that there is no plot all day long, I just keep accepting women and moaning and groaning. What's even more uncomfortable is that some of them are uncomfortable at the beginning, but in the back it is written that the protagonist runs to play tricks and has troubles with princes and the like. I really like the book The Strongest Shopkeeper in History, and then I searched for books of the same type, but there weren't many that I could read, because the protagonist they wrote was so different from the shopkeeper, and there were only three shop assistant places for the protagonist. Who would have thought that these places were not reserved for talented people, but were used to collect women and keep them around to show off, I** ****, the core of the shop owner's book is to just follow it without knowing anything, why don't you rush into the street, etc. What's even worse is that some of the protagonists' time-traveling is actually peeping on the senior sister in the shower or peeping on XXX.

Gu Pan's character is extremely poisonous. Why does a woman who has changed beyond recognition and was kicked out of a brothel pretend to be a modern and strong woman? Or is she a woman who has been trained in a brothel for a long time? I wonder why an ugly monster who can only wait for death can negotiate terms with the protagonist? Were you so brave in ancient times? Why don't you tell people the truth when you are waiting for eternal seal? !

Author, don't you have an idea why your book is not popular? I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 38. For the sake of a woman, are you going to be so cowardly? Just for a so-called premium card? The plot is so weird that you wrote it in an ancient setting, not a romance novel. Writing books doesn't make money, so I suggest you find a job.

The female characters are really a bit redundant. If you are writing a heroine, I suggest you practice more and don't be too brainless. I can't see the use of these female characters at all. The protagonist is becoming more and more popular. I feel that no one can beat Yazi. It is not fun at all. There is no behind-the-scenes gossip, and she is not strict. She wanders around all day long, and the plot is really sluggish. I don't understand what I want to do in the last few chapters. The normal protagonist has already started to study the origin of the world. The protagonist is still here looking for someone to mine. He is drunk. Is he really a modern person? He has no brain. He can't just take off and fly with some cool operations. It's too incompetent 🔨🔨🔨

Judging from the experience of these 200,000 words, not to mention fairy grass at the beginning, it was at the level of food + +. But when I got involved in a brothel, my level began to plummet. I really felt like it was a plummet. At the beginning, the protagonist still had some "fairy spirit", but as he entered the city, he became more and more kitsch. There is also the strength of the protagonist. The invincible flow is really not poisonous, and many authors have mastered it very well. Don't limit it for the sake of limitation. The sword was knocked away by a martial artist, and the force transmitted sent the weapon flying 😅 I feel that the author wanted to add some "perceptions" in the early stage, and the protagonist was portrayed in more detail. But later on, we started to rush the work and follow routines, and the quality suddenly collapsed.

I originally came here to farm and maintain my health. Really, don't always write about female protagonists, it looks embarrassing. I used to be poisoned by those harem cultivators, martial arts and the like, but when I saw this kind of plot... Well

I feel like the only way out for this type of book is home building and then going out and doing things like harvest worship. All kinds of pretense and slaps in the face are really unwelcome, not only highly toxic but also very childish.

Others are okay, mainly he is a "immortal", racking his brains to think of how to compete with mortals in a battle of wits and courage, which is too unqualified.

The latest chapter starts to poison again. How come you have been poisoning since you wrote about women? If you meet someone with extraordinary skills, would you choose to be tough? It would be nice to get some benefits from not licking him.

The creativity and writing style are quite good, but the description of the people is quite outrageous. Other writers know the protagonist's strength, and the lower-level people come to make friends with each other, and they are almost at the same level. Whoever sees the protagonist will step on him to see if he is strong. The protagonist has to use his tricks after walking a few steps. What kind of fairy is the protagonist, or is he a walking fat sheep? Others have intermittently forgotten the protagonist's strength, right? They come here to test everything. This family is also outrageous. Someone who knows that the protagonist is really capable sends his men to break into the protagonist's cave? You also want to kill the protagonist's spiritual pet. How dare you do this? Aren't you afraid that people will have the means to track you? What experience should you tell your son? If you are a high-ranking official in the imperial court, I won't say anything if a big family plays tricks on the protagonist. What kind of thing is the Zhang family in a county? The worst case scenario is reporting to the imperial court to send an army to attack the protagonist. Are you a relative of the emperor or what? What you say as a pure villain is not consistent with your identity. Why don't you quickly change to a heavyweight villain? Why don't the Zhang family in the labor-capital county compete with the protagonist and lose their status? Not to mention Gu Pan, he wanted to skip the chapter when he saw the name.

How dare Du Fangge, a mortal, give nicknames? It's so damn poisonous. If there are any more nicknames, I will delete the book and leave. I don't have the image of an immortal and let people give me nicknames. How can I become an immortal?

Author, I recommend you to read "This Sandbox Game Is Not Reliable". The subject matter is similar to yours in the early stage, so you can learn from it. To be honest, his writing is really good, but every time he writes at the end, it gets lost.

The three views are rubbish. The reason for killing the children at such a young age is so decisive. All the aristocratic families in the city were attacked at their doorsteps, but no one was killed.

In the early stage, the woman in the back was okay.

The author seems to have not grasped the essence. There is too little about spiritual practice, and it does not seem to be about spiritual practice. Even the element of the sandbox has been greatly compressed. All day long, he is showing off in front of people and pretending to be a slap in the face. His characteristics are not outstanding. There are too many pretense and slaps in the face, and there are too few things related to spiritual practice. What's more, women can't write books if they don't write about women. I only see that the protagonist's quality continues to decline. He is obviously already in this picture. Sinking in the Internet, the protagonist still thinks that he is very transcendent. He has been downgraded from a possible immortal to a stranger who has mastered a few magic skills. He is still the kind who is not good at learning magic. The perception of the indigenous people in the book is different from that of the readers. Those skills are regarded as magical skills by the indigenous people. In my opinion, using those skills over and over to show off will only increase the laughter. It is better to end this boring and deliberate pretending and slap in the face quickly and go find practice. The summary is that there are too few elements, whether it is a fairy tale or a sandbox, but some urban harem harem novels have too strong a look and feel. These messes make the novel mediocre and inferior, or it can be said to be on the same level as an urban harem pretending to be a matryoshka doll, or it can really innovate and make a difference. It all depends on what the author thinks.

This Du Fangge is so incomprehensible, the trouble comes to the protagonist, the protagonist fights off the organization after he falls into a coma, and then provokes the organization, the protagonist then brings back his skills to support the protagonist, and then this person bosses the protagonist and takes charge of this place. Is the male version of Good Guy Gu Pan? I really don't understand this arrangement.

A comprehensive evaluation: The first thirty or so chapters are quite well written, with good writing style and plot. However, Gu Pan was too poisonous as soon as it came out, and the following chapters felt not as good as the previous ones. I couldn't stand it anymore. Gu Pan was too poisonous, so I ran away first.

Posted specifically as a reward. I can only say that this book is really low. It portrays the image of a master in the beginning, and the plot in the later stage is probably like this: There is a woman who is a brothel owner, gets sick, and is kicked out. The servant of the protagonist takes pity on her and gives her a job, but there is no repayment. The protagonist says that she is sick and must live in the protagonist's house. This kind of plot. . . . . . To put it simply, it is a novel without brains. See these two pictures of mine for details.

"This Northern Song Dynasty is a bit weird" "I can make everything" "This sandbox game is unreliable" I hope the author can write something similar to MC Goldfinger well

Didn't he die in a car accident?•᷄ࡇ•᷅

This book has so many flaws that I can't complain about it. I wish I could go in and give the protagonist a few slaps to wake him up! 😆😆😆

The overall idea is okay, but the arrangement of the heroine's scenes is too deliberate and inexplicable. For example, Princess Mingyue only met her twice and fell in love with her. This is really too deliberate. The author has never been in love or anything. Originally, the male protagonist was the only immortal, but the immortality and beauty were not reflected. Originally, you could just arrange the heroine's scenes as a mascot or something like that, but she was included in the harem? I also vomited after watching it.

It hasn't been updated in 27 days. It seems that I'm a eunuch. I'd like to say something about it. I'm sorry to have asked for leave for the latest chapter.

I have seen a movie about Goldfinger before, which also traveled back in time to ancient times. The protagonist pretended to be an immortal and preached immortality and immortal magic. He used the power of a country to collect supplies from the whole country. In the end, he simply let a prince rebel and created a new emperor. In the end, the people were in dire straits and a lot of refugees revolted. The protagonist goes down with a lot of NTA, and the whole army is annihilated.

There are other similar good books, including The Northern Song Dynasty next door, both of which are seedlings.

All I can say is that the female protagonist is in deep water and I can't grasp it. Don't write about a female protagonist. It's not like you can't write without one. Most of the books I've read about female protagonists, such as leisurely farming, are pretty cool.

Happy New Year to all my friends who are still following this book!