I Am the Only Immortal in the World

It looks very good. It doesn't have that kind of opening where you just have a woman chattering around and pretending to be X. It's the Zhang Mansion strategy that feels a bit unsatisfactory, because the hard power is too strong, and any conspiracy and tricks are useless, but overall it is still very good. I have read some books like this before, but they all start with one or a few women walking around and pretending to be X. It is simply embarrassing, maybe in the eyes of those authors It's so cool, having beautiful women around and strong strength, and then I get so crazy that there is no plot all day long, I just keep accepting women and moaning and groaning. What's even more uncomfortable is that some of them are uncomfortable at the beginning, but in the back it is written that the protagonist runs to play tricks and has troubles with princes and the like. I really like the book The Strongest Shopkeeper in History, and then I searched for books of the same type, but there weren't many that I could read, because the protagonist they wrote was so different from the shopkeeper, and there were only three shop assistant places for the protagonist. Who would have thought that these places were not reserved for talented people, but were used to collect women and keep them around to show off, I** ****, the core of the shop owner's book is to just follow it without knowing anything, why don't you rush into the street, etc. What's even worse is that some of the protagonists' time-traveling is actually peeping on the senior sister in the shower or peeping on XXX.

Gu Pan's character is extremely poisonous. Why does a woman who has changed beyond recognition and was kicked out of a brothel pretend to be a modern and strong woman? Or is she a woman who has been trained in a brothel for a long time? I wonder why an ugly monster who can only wait for death can negotiate terms with the protagonist? Were you so brave in ancient times? Why don't you tell people the truth when you are waiting for eternal seal?!

Author, don't you have an idea why your book is not popular? I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 38. For the sake of a woman, are you going to be so cowardly? Just for a so-called premium card? The plot is so weird that you wrote it in an ancient setting, not a romance novel. Writing books doesn't make money, so I suggest you find a job.

The female characters are really a bit redundant. If you are writing a heroine, I suggest you practice more and don't be too brainless. I can't see the use of these female characters at all. The protagonist is becoming more and more popular. I feel that no one can beat Yazi. It is not fun at all. There is no behind-the-scenes gossip, and she is not strict. She wanders around all day long, and the plot is really sluggish. I don't understand what I want to do in the last few chapters. The normal protagonist has already started to study the origin of the world. The protagonist is still here looking for someone to mine. He is drunk. Is he really a modern person? He has no brain. He can't just take off and fly with some cool operations. It's too incompetent 🔨🔨🔨

Judging from the experience of these 200,000 words, not to mention fairy grass at the beginning, it was at the level of food + +. But when I got involved in a brothel, my level began to plummet. I really felt like it was a plummet. At the beginning, the protagonist still had some "fairy spirit", but as he entered the city, he became more and more kitsch. There is also the strength of the protagonist. The invincible flow is really not poisonous, and many authors have mastered it very well. Don't limit it for the sake of limitation. The sword was knocked away by a martial artist, and the force transmitted sent the weapon flying 😅 I feel that the author wanted to add some "perceptions" in the early stage, and the protagonist was portrayed in more detail. But later on, we started to rush the work and follow routines, and the quality suddenly collapsed.

I originally came here to farm and maintain my health. Really, don't always write about female protagonists, it looks embarrassing. I used to be poisoned by those harem cultivators, martial arts and the like, but when I saw this kind of plot... Well

I feel like the only way out for this type of book is home building and then going out and doing things like harvest worship. All kinds of pretense and slaps in the face are really unwelcome, not only highly toxic but also very childish.

Others are okay, mainly he is a "immortal", racking his brains to think of how to compete with mortals in a battle of wits and courage, which is too unqualified.

The latest chapter starts to poison again. How come you have been poisoning since you wrote about women? If you meet someone with extraordinary skills, would you choose to be tough? It would be nice to get some benefits from not licking him.

The creativity and writing style are quite good, but the description of the people is quite outrageous. Other writers know the protagonist's strength, and the lower-level people come to make friends with each other, and they are almost at the same level. Whoever sees the protagonist will step on him to see if he is strong. The protagonist has to use his tricks after walking a few steps. What kind of fairy is the protagonist, or is he a walking fat sheep? Others have intermittently forgotten the protagonist's strength, right? They come here to test everything. This family is also outrageous. Someone who knows that the protagonist is really capable sends his men to break into the protagonist's cave? You also want to kill the protagonist's spiritual pet. How dare you do this? Aren't you afraid that people will have the means to track you? What experience should you tell your son? If you are a high-ranking official in the imperial court, I won't say anything if a big family plays tricks on the protagonist. What kind of thing is the Zhang family in a county? The worst case scenario is reporting to the imperial court to send an army to attack the protagonist. Are you a relative of the emperor or what? What you say as a pure villain is not consistent with your identity. Why don't you quickly change to a heavyweight villain? Why don't the Zhang family in the labor-capital county compete with the protagonist and lose their status? Not to mention Gu Pan, he wanted to skip the chapter when he saw the name.