I Became the Golden Finger of the Natives

This book is very interesting to me. I hope the author can keep writing it and stop writing about it. To be honest, there are really few books like this and no one reads it. I looked for it three years ago and found it, but I only found two similar books, one of which was about 200,000 words. It is a complete book with more than 1.5 Million words, but the writing in the latter part is too bad, the meaning of the whole book is confusing, and the words do not convey the meaning. Now I finally came across a book that was almost completely to my liking. I was still very excited. I stayed up late and read the latest chapter. Therefore, I hereby hope that the author will not be a eunuch, and that it will not collapse after it is put on the shelves. I do not ask you to update it three times a day, but I only ask you to perform stably.

Author, there is a reason why your grades are not good. In the section about Piccolo the Devil, you were too self-satisfied. I skipped that paragraph and couldn't stand it at all. The writing was pretty good before, but why did I suddenly become so excited about it? The boss of the protagonist is also a poisonous point. You don't have the writing skills to handle the role of the boss well. I suggest you just don't write it, or I can't see the use of a boss at all. Because poor writing is a poisonous point. If you have time, go and change Piccolo's part. I really can't stand it. A good mastermind is a mastermind, and don't make the protagonist look like a psychopath.

After more than 30 chapters, I played a trial game and it went to one side.

The one downstairs, your statement is a bit wrong. Now the protagonist needs to develop. The prerequisite for the benefits that the protagonist can get is the death of the host. I want the host to continue to develop as you said. The premise is that the protagonist has the ability to erase, otherwise it would be impossible. You can't support someone to the point where you can't control them. That would be very tragic, and the protagonist needs to accumulate early. After you have the obliteration workers, you can raise a powerful host.

I think the author took it for granted. When I read Chapter 60 or 70, I just wanted to know who was behind the scenes. But when you came out, you were like Big Devil Piccolo and had all kinds of obscene thoughts, which made me lose interest in reading. You have selected a group of readers in the first fifty chapters, and then driven away a group of selected readers. Speechless

At first, I actually felt that the protagonist's idea was inappropriate. After all, improving the host's strength as quickly as possible can also expend energy quickly. It is considered an investment. Who knew that it would be slapped in the face so quickly and the host would die directly.

The beginning is great and amazing, the middle is okay, but the latest chapter is not that good, and it gets worse as it goes on, and updates are slow, which makes the plot completely incoherent. It looked good some time ago, but then I forgot about it after catching up on it, and I didn't feel it anymore when I played it again today.

This world can be written according to the text of the game. For example, these two people return to reality and discover that they can improve their genetic level. Then it slowly becomes popular again, and then it becomes a game for everyone. As for the final ending, it depends on how you write it? Is it to help this world clean up the monsters in the other world, or to clean it halfway and then find a new world?

It felt pretty good at first. Then the source energy point collapsed. The burial time of 1:60 was not detailed later. Then I spent a long time writing a female supporting role. Then died. Either don't write this. I wrote it over and over again, which made me very unhappy. The people being used as tools by the two planets haven't even noticed yet. I can't stand it. Slipping away

It is still recommended that there be fewer poems. Whenever you see a fighting scene or a plot, it will be very scary if the protagonist directly writes a poem. This is not a literary work. It's okay to say a few words now and then. But it gets a little boring after too much. And those characters from other books. It seems outrageous. Then I felt like it was the world of Shenwu. The writing of those mythical beasts is a bit low. With the level of the characters in this world. It feels a bit mismatched.

The idea is good, and the writing is very good in the early stage Then it becomes more routine Especially in the selection game, it is really a trick.

Trying to see if there is still a watermark

When I read Chapter 133, I felt unhappy. Why did the protagonist end up? It didn't match my initial label for the book.

Come on, the author just suffered from a lack of writing. If you write a book next time and make a stricter outline, it will be the same as a composition. The protagonist's character also needs to be well written, but the author's expression would be abrupt if he forced it a bit. The outline must be well prepared, the main line, etc. After finishing writing, the author should read it over. Even if it is slow, there is no problem, because the wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley. As long as the writing is good, the economic effect will give you the answer.

Let's not talk about plot issues, it's just an anti-piracy version that doesn't refresh for a few days. Are you anti-piracy or genuine?

Duelists are asked not to go out and hit anyone personally.

It's okay, originally, there were no results, and the author couldn't drink the northwest wind and use love to generate electricity. I personally feel that the early part of this book is still OK. This kind of world adventure novel, of course, I hope that the novels I read later will not be unfinished.

I hope the author will not be a eunuch and can read one chapter a day. Let me make a few suggestions. For newcomers and authors 1, it is recommended to start reading from the first eight chapters, and then jump directly to chapter 100. The only advantage of this book is that jumping around the world does not affect reading. The first eight let you understand the settings. There are a lot of poisonous points between chapters 8 to 100. 2 Come on, author. Don't give up. I suggest the author find some fresh and diverse inspirations, write them down when you have ideas, and then use them. You can also make sand sculptures in the game. Be fun and don't be so serious. It's okay to write after 100 chapters. 3 You can also copy the settings from the author's world. Paradoxical, just like Yang Jian's setting. Background. 4 I think this book can be reformed, it is too easy to 404. As for the development of the savior, I think this book looks messy because the protagonist does not have a clear purpose in his heart and the main line is not clear enough. 5 Add some fun stuff to rejuvenate your game, don't go the same old way of upgrading. 6 The protagonist can also be very playful in the later stage. After all, he is invincible. Find some fun ways to play. I think the boss should try to write as little as possible about pretending to be cool. From a reader's point of view, it is like a small poisonous point, which is unpleasant but not objectionable. Or give the boss a golden finger. 7 Comments can be submitted here and an opinion building will be built for the author.

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Why does it look like ghostwriting later...

This book is basically gone. It hasn't been updated for three days. I guess no one has read it.

Quite a good book. There are no loopholes that I can see, and I can justify it. I have a lot of imagination and stuff. The origin of the pillow buried in the pit and the past of Blue Star are also very curious. The jokes are also very happy and interesting. Although the emotional rendering is not adequate, I actually think the emotion can be heightened when the Federation Chairman bombs. Of course, this does not affect the excellence of this book. That's why there are so few people in the comment area. Are they all in the book club group?

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The theme is very novel, and the behind-the-scenes story is very classic. Goldfinger is a pillow that can travel to other worlds! Unlike the popular godhead openings, the planet opening is very good. The protagonist and characters from other worlds interact frequently and it is worth watching Evaluate Liangcaoben

Since you are going to put it on the shelves tomorrow, let's reward it again, and we will talk about the rest later 😏😏

Build a character building. You can write down the names you think of, and let the author use the names. As the owner of the building, I will first come up with "Wen Mingnian", "Ling Chenguang", "Coster", "Lv Yunda", "Wang Shenbo"...

This ended too quickly┻┻⁞=༎ຶ༎ຶ=⁞┻┻

Finally appeared, and when will my Qi Yan appear?

Well written, support it! The author's writing is very nice and has his own style. I especially like the quiet life in real life, ancient towns and some ancient articles written by the author.

I gave you the ticket, please give me more tickets.