
Naruto: There's Definitely Something Wrong With These Sharingan
木叶:这双写轮眼绝对有问题
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- 564k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 4y ago
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- Qidian
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It's such a waste to give the protagonist the ability to glare at someone's pregnancy. Only Uchiha Sasuke next door really needs this ability. In three years, in just three years, the Uchiha clan can be revitalized. In three years, 1,200 children will be born.
How can I put it this way? The protagonist's abilities are so impressive, but he gives people the feeling of being a piece of trash. He doesn't look like a time traveler, but like an uninformed native.
The power of staring at someone who is pregnant is simply terrifying. I seemed to see all the beautiful young women in Konoha Village becoming pregnant with the protagonist's child after being stared at by the protagonist. This is amazing. Also, during the Infinite Tsukuyomi, when the protagonist uses this illusion, all mothers in the world will be pregnant with the protagonist's child. Isn't this supreme joy?
I was given a bunch of incredible pupil skills and then didn't use them. I went up to level A by myself. If I felt that the protagonist was too strong to write, I shouldn't try to use such an invincible ability right away.
The ability is very strong, but the protagonist doesn't know how to use it. He has the pupil technique, which can solve the battle quickly, but it is too slow to show the power of the pupil technique. You can only know the strength of the pupil technique by relying on the setting.
The biggest problem of the author is that he takes the skills for granted and wrongly. The author thinks that the one-second forced control is too short and not enough time to kill. You need to learn the speed of lightning escape. The speed of throwing shuriken is too slow. Where is the slowness? Ordinary people can reach speeds of up to 50 meters per second with a 50-pound bow and arrow. Ninjas with chakra will not throw shurikens slower than this. One second of forced control and normal throwing of shurikens can kill all the fragile ones, including the Kage level. The reason why the Flying Thunder God is fast is because of teleportation. The kunai must fly first. If you don't control it, you can fight against the ninja. For readers, the speed of kunai is not the inescapable restraint of the Sharingan. It is purely for lust. The protagonist's three-eye technique can break free by glaring at anyone who is pregnant. The low-matched Amaterasu will catch fire in just one second, and it will be a big bug without cooling down. However, the author takes it for granted that this is just a slightly outstanding skill. . . . . .
The setting is very strong, the protagonist is useless, the subject matter is very novel, and the author's writing style is a bit stretched, otherwise this book will be a hit🔥
Everyone who has been rescued by the protagonist, whether it is the rope tree, the Uzumaki clan or White Fang, all have withdrawn from this book. I originally thought they would be the protagonist's help, but I was disappointed.
The enemy has a flaw, the protagonist rushes forward, eh, it's a trap, eh, I found it's a trap, eh, eh, there's another trap, eh, eh, I also found it's spicy, eh, eh, there's actually a trap, eh, eh, I found it's spicy again! This process is repeated in almost all battles, and the winning tactics are delayed and used. As mentioned above, the winning tactics are repeated 3 or 4 times. The key is that every battle is like this, so boring that one suspects a robot is writing it.
Pig's feet are a bit useless,,,, it's all about rules-based skills. It's a lot of effort to beat a Jonin,,,, then why bother with such rules-based skills?