
Naruto: There's Definitely Something Wrong With These Sharingan
木叶:这双写轮眼绝对有问题
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 564k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
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Giving this protagonist the ability to impregnate anyone he glares at is such a waste. It's Sasuke Uchiha from next door who truly needs this ability. Three years, just three years, and the Uchiha clan can be revitalized, producing 1200 offspring in three years!
To be honest, the protagonist's abilities are incredibly powerful, but he gives off a really trashy vibe. He doesn't seem like a transmigrator; he seems more like an ignorant native.
The power to make anyone pregnant just by glaring at them is terrifying! I can almost picture all the beautiful young women in Konoha getting pregnant just from the protagonist's gaze. That's amazing! And during the Infinite Tsukuyomi, when the protagonist uses this genjutsu, every woman in the entire world becomes pregnant with his child. Isn't that unparalleled pleasure?
They gave the protagonist a bunch of overpowered eye techniques but then didn't use them, just went in and did basic attacks. If you think the protagonist is too strong and difficult to write, then don't start by criticizing such invincible abilities.
The protagonist possesses powerful abilities, but doesn't know how to use them. While they have eye techniques that could quickly resolve battles, the fights are often drawn out, preventing the true power of these techniques from being fully displayed. Their strength is only revealed through the established lore.
The author's biggest problem is their extremely naive and flawed understanding of skills. They assume the one-second guaranteed strong control is too short to kill, requiring lightning release speed. The slow speed of throwing shuriken is ridiculous. An ordinary person wielding a 50-pound bow can reach speeds of around 50 meters per second; a ninja with chakra wouldn't be slower throwing shuriken.
The premise is strong, the protagonist is weak, the theme is novel, but the author's writing is somewhat lacking; otherwise, this book would definitely be a hit. 🔥
Everyone saved by the protagonist, whether it was Nawaki, the Uzumaki clan, or White Fang, all left the book. It was initially thought they would become the protagonist's allies, but they were a huge disappointment.
The enemy has a weakness, the protagonist rushes in, hey, it's a trap, hey, I found out it's a trap, hey, there's another trap, hey, I found it too, hey, there's another trap, hey, I found it again! Almost every battle repeats this process, ignoring foolproof strategies and repeatedly using the same tactics three or four times in a row. The key is that every battle is like this, so boring it makes you wonder if it was written by a robot.
The protagonist is a bit useless... He relies entirely on rule-based skills, making it incredibly difficult to even defeat a Jonin... So why bother with rule-based skills at all?