I Can Enter the World of Immortals

Is the author a loser in real life? After writing for a while at the beginning, I got involved with some beautiful class monitor. Is it interesting?

After reading Chapter 47, there are several questions about the male protagonist. The introduction of a classmate in the article: The male protagonist is the monitor of the first class of the Faculty of Arts of Longcheng University. He is a top student, is good at sports, and is the beauty of the whole school. He has comprehensive moral, intellectual and physical development, and his emotional intelligence is also quite good. In addition to the fact that his original family has no money, this is the seed of a winner in life. 1. How did the male protagonist do so poorly before time travel? First, he did not continue his studies to go to graduate school, let alone have no money to study. At the level of Longcheng University in the book, the annual scholarship (National Award + Academy Award + other awards) during the male protagonist's undergraduate period starts at least 40,000 yuan, so he cannot be short of money. Second, without detention, the male protagonist's IQ and EQ would have been impossible to control. Third, the male protagonist did not go to the party affairs system or the government affairs system. When he graduated, although it was not written in the book, the male protagonist had a 100% chance of getting in touch with the party system, so he obviously gave up. I didn't even take part in the public examination, not to mention I had no money, important departments were receiving another level of treatment. Four, gave up all big companies. At the level of Longcheng University, the school recruits not only international first-class companies, but also domestic first-class companies. The male protagonist is the class president, so there is definitely no shortage of information, so he gave up on everything. Fifth, the male protagonist works in a small company, rents a small room, and makes no money. What is he trying to do? 2. Why did his girlfriend leave him? First, his girlfriend must have known that his family had no money, and the only reason to be good with him was because she fell in love with the male protagonist. There is no need to consider whether he is handsome or not. If he can be admitted to Longcheng University and is in the same class as the male protagonist, his intelligence is fine. The only thing that can attract his girlfriend is his talent. Second, the male protagonist gave up further education, gave up staying in school, gave up taking public exams, gave up making money, and disappeared into a small company. He didn't think about his girlfriend at all, nor did he think about their future. Three, this man is useless, there is no future with him, breaking up with his girlfriend is the only option. 3. To sum up, the male protagonist must have made a big mistake on the eve of graduation, a particularly serious mistake. There is a 99% chance that the school helped cover it up. As a class monitor, I didn't attend the graduation party, gave up further studies, couldn't take the public examination, and probably had credit problems. I couldn't get into a big company, so I had to make ends meet in a small company. Even if the girlfriend doesn't know everything, she at least has a clue that this man is useless.

I originally thought that only the protagonist could travel between the two worlds, but now others can do it too. It's just a joke. It's not fun at all. All the privileges are gone.

It's really amazing, the fairies are invincible in the hands of the villain, but basically useless in the hands of the protagonist.

The real world written by the author has not been written well, since the protagonist wants to join the officialdom. It shouldn't be like now, where the warrior management drama feels messy and unsystematic. The protagonist can be the chief and then develop a management mechanism. You can set up an intranet. The intranet can have the following sections. First, point redemption, you can redeem points with the exercises or treasures you have obtained. Of course, news can also be used, such as relics, or some special special news. Second, point rewards for personnel under the administration system when they deal with extraordinary cases, including invasions by ghosts or invasions by foreign extraordinary organizations. Third, internal reward and exchange mechanisms, set up an intranet to exchange points for treasures and In the exercise section, you can check the exchange catalog of all treasures and exercises, which is convenient for internal personnel to inquire. Fourth, establish a exercise method or treasure library. This must be of a higher grade than a bank vault. It can be completed with formations. Otherwise, any extraordinary person can snatch these treasures in the future. But Establish one in each region to facilitate local internal organizations to exchange and reward. Fifth, refine a magic weapon-like bracelet or mobile phone that integrates monitoring, video recording, communication, and intranet linking for internal personnel to use to record the records of internal personnel's handling of events, and the amount of rating rewards, Fifth, accumulate Points can also be used to exchange money, which can help internal personnel solve their own economic problems. Sixth, the personnel assessment mechanism can recruit external personnel first, giving priority to recruiting from the military or retired military personnel. Of course, personal character, temperament, and all aspects must be considered. External personnel can be set up to handle one or two cases. Determine the other party to join the internal team based on the handling methods and means. Seventh, the protagonist is the number one in the country. He only needs to sit at the headquarters and control everything. After all, the protagonist needs to practice and clear dungeons. The protagonist is only needed for cases that exceed the standard. No region has a branch. Eighth, cases such as crimes committed by insiders are handled. Severe punishment must be used, which is several levels higher than the punishment of ordinary people. After all, the consequences of crimes committed by extraordinary people are very serious, and the death penalty is generally used as the standard. After all, extraordinary people have different mentality and tend to go astray. Ninth, internal organizational management does not need to be too strict on the surface. Internal personnel must have a lot of freedom. After all, strong people hate restraint. Monitoring with objects, etc., Or reporting anonymously internally, the reporter can get all the points of the perpetrator, and other incentive mechanisms. I can only think of this much for the moment. After all, we are just a small farmer. Like the author wrote, I will not make an evaluation. Maybe some people like this kind of messy official organization? Maybe some people think that the official government does not have a think tank to make suggestions? However, I still feel that since the author arranged for the protagonist to mix with the official reality, he should not play it like a child playing house. This kind of play house plot will make old readers unable to read.

The policewoman was exposed in flying swordsmanship when she rescued her. Later, at a class reunion, she asked the protagonist to be his apprentice, but then sold her to the protagonist without her consent. Your character creation really disgusted me. I blindly guessed that she would teach the policewoman later, but was discovered by the boss, and then sold the protagonist again.

To be honest, the character of the protagonist is completely unsuitable for surviving in a dark world. After reading about sixty chapters, I felt that his senior brother was the internal agent of the White Bone Taoist Temple. It would be comfortable if he suddenly stabbed the protagonist in the back.

"It turns out that other people can also enter the world of Xiaxia"

To be honest, this book is really good. My IQ drops severely when I meet a beautiful woman(?) It makes me want to hit her.

There are a lot of girls, and they are still pretty female classmates. Before there was a system for pig trotters, none of them were, but now there is one, and five out of ten are,

You said you went to the world of Xianxia, ​​well, let's take the world of Xianxia as an example. Mortals have third-rate, second-rate, first-rate, grandmaster, and great master. Then the first health-preserving realm of cultivating immortals is equivalent to the previous third-rate, second-rate, and first-rate. Later there are realms such as qi refining, which are all in the great realm of refining qi. As a result, when you first came out, the people you came out were not human, and the practitioners who were not ghosts were still in the realm of health cultivation for decades, so they tolerated it. Why the hell does it look like the City God in the City God's Temple is still taking care of himself or refining his energy? It's too low. At the very least, he should be a great monk who can refine qi and transform into gods. At the very least, he should be a top monk who can refine qi and transform into gods. The person who came out to control the City God also had never broken through and cultivated his health in his life. In the end, it turned out that Cheng Huang's identity was revealed. He was the master of the current prince and the emperor's brother. Why are you so awesome that you come to this shabby place to be the city god? Was he assigned here, treated well, and then dumped casually into this poor, remote place? It's really a fantasy novel that shows off your IQ.

The book is limited to free reading. The cultivation system is that of traditional immortals. Wouldn't it be good to write about cultivating immortals? You can still read it if you jump over it a little bit in the front, but in the back it becomes four different parts from the beginning of the trial. This book should change the system and put it in the fantasy category. The holy son of the holy land, the supreme young king, and the supreme bone with double eyes. These things are not bad, but these are very suitable for fantasy, especially your book. It takes the path of refining Qi to refining the void and combining the Tao, and refining the Qi to become the Tao. The soul is immortal. Don't you think these combinations are not confusing when you look at them together?

The author's setting of the world of Xianxia adopts the usual brainless style of Internet articles... For example, the energy level of an organic life form makes the universe unbearable and requires the evolution of the world... In other words, the energy level of immortals is countless orders of magnitude higher than that of black holes, making the curvature of space as infinite as the singularity level during the Big Bang... But at the same time, gods do need to drink water, eat and rest..., With such a high energy level, their bodies can still be composed of organic molecules... Rather than quantum states... In fact, Xianxia Xiaoxiao It can be said that it is completely closer to modern physics, especially when the author writes that mutated creatures require martial arts masters to solve instead of modern thermal weapons... A certain rationality is required, such as a detailed description of the monster, explaining why the monster can be burned to death by flames but mass destruction weapons such as aerial bombs, cluster bombs, and air-pressure bombs are ineffective... For example, why can Godzilla be resurrected with full health with a nuclear bomb? At least one of the opponent's cells can grow with nuclear energy and be immune to almost all physical damage. This setting makes the context logically coherent!

The rest comes next, mainly the time argument. If Li Dongxuan enters the world of Xianxia, ​​his time in his own world stops. How does the protagonist enter the world of Xianxia? Similarly, if the protagonist returns to this world, and the time in the world of Xianxia stops, how does Li Dongxuan return to his own world? There is only one possibility. The protagonist and others enter the world of Xianxia at the same time and return to their own world at the same time. The return time is determined by the completion of the mission by the protagonist. However, someone entered the world of Xianxia before the protagonist, so there must be another "protagonist" or a person or a program.

I feel that everyone who writes about the world of immortals has a common problem, and that is merit.

A few words, generally speaking, the author has ideas, but his writing skills are not good enough, the plot is not smooth enough, and there are problems with the connection here and there. There are many ideas between the real world and the fairy world, but none of them are clearly written down. The most important thing is that the pig's feet seem to know that they are pig's feet. I hope the author can polish it a bit.

This killing calamity is inexplicable. For a great righteous sect, the founder of the sect doesn't even know whether he is dead or not. The demon sect dares to destroy the sect like this. Even the members of the sect are hunted down. The orthodoxy does not exist and other forces don't let go of their nonsense. Is he the only one who is free in this world? It's not about the character, it's illogical.

The cost of doing evil is too low for bad people. They can become immortals by killing people and setting fires. Those who cultivate immortality without the intention of cultivating are just fake immortals. All they have to do is eat people. Becoming an immortal is more like becoming a demon.

To be honest, there are no problems with the author's writing style and conception, but the writing method is a bit too retro and orthodox, similar to the snake-shaped villain in the early movies. It's a bit embarrassing to watch one sentence after another, and one move after another. . . Especially before starting the fight with the Zombie County Lord, we introduced each other's basic knowledge, actions, and learnings, and it was almost like being on a blind date. . .

Are cartoonists so stupid that they just join a national laboratory and draw hundreds of millions of raw materials every minute? .

The logic is confusing. First of all, you are going back and forth. Time is still in both worlds? The rules of the entire world changed just because of you? As a result, there are still many people who can go to the world of Xianxia. Does their time also stand still? If the time traveled is not unified, then the two worlds are at rest! Just doing it without any brains, just like a sand dollar!

When writing novels about myths, immortals, heroes, and prehistoric times, you must first take a look at the Chinese units of measurement, and then you will know whether it will work or not before writing a novel. [Chinese units of quantity] From small to large, they are zero, one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten, one hundred, one thousand, ten thousand, billion, trillion, Jing, Gai, Zi, Rang, ditch, stream, Zheng, Zai, Ji, Ganges sand, Asamkhya, Nayuta, inconceivable, immeasurable large numbers. The decimal system is used between ten and ten thousand, and the decimal system is used after ten thousand, that is, ten thousand is billion, trillion is trillion, and ten thousand capital is Gai.

Before the spiritual energy has recovered, I discovered that there are treasures in the real world. Those Taoist scriptures, Buddhist scriptures, artifacts and the like are extraordinary. People who are rich and have normal IQs should go back to those Taoist temples, Buddhist temples, antique markets and other places to hunt for treasures, and go to consult those who practice Taoism.

Your writing style is weird. Many of the words used are similar to those of new authors. "But no one else believed me when I said this, and Pan Lang didn't believe me either. He even beat me and called me a liar!"

The author's writing style is pretty good! Why are the grades so bad?

What's the use of just having the Earth Demon Tiangang? It can't be used all at once. Without the Eight or Nine Mysterious Techniques, it seems to be unsatisfactory. Then other people who travel through time appear. I'm really a noob. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore.

Will I still have a female apprentice

If the way of heaven is sick, open the battlefield of all races, increase the enemy's combat power, and eliminate his subordinates. Wouldn't it be better to eliminate enemies without opening the battlefield of all races?

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