I Am Invincible in the World

Don't write emotional dramas anymore. It's easier to watch without a female protagonist.

I show my hand, I am 🐶, I like reading this book, the sense of immersion is too strong, this is the first time I have seen this kind of thing like writing me as the protagonist, with pretty features, strong back and strong waist = Jiang Yu = me, I hope the author is not eight feet tall, with a beautiful face and no beard. Although I have only read Chapter 51, I ordered all of them first. (Full booking, full booking, full booking)

{"TopicId":"596145397492350976","TopicName":"Final Remarks"}Speaking of it, this is the first book that I have worked hard to pursue. Why do I say hard work? I look at the chapters every day and talk so little, and work hard every day to think of many chapters to talk about to stimulate everyone's discussion. Hahahaha. Unfortunately, I am basically enjoying myself. I've had this book for a while, and it's finally coming to an end. I used to read advertisements to support the book, but the advertisements disappeared, and most of the books on the bookshelf were deleted. I spent some money on it. And recently, the books on Qidian do not feel as high quality as before. I often want to give up on Qidian, but fortunately, there are still a few books that I am still ordering. I liked this book very much in the early stages, but I got a little bored later on, so I didn't want to follow it anymore. But I thought it was almost over, and if I wanted to have a beginning and an end, I would just follow it and not discuss the plot. Now I have basically forgotten the previous ones. After reading the latest chapter, the characters have all appeared, and I can't remember the story of this group of people! So I am working hard to pursue books! ! Think about it, let's talk about the book. The setting of the book is very large and extensive. From the beginning of the main temple, I thought it was Zhutianliu, but it turned out to be several original worlds. In fact, I really like those familiar worlds to pretend to play and see what different things I can write. The gift of this book. This thing sometimes seems very inexplicable and I don't understand it. But I am not a party researcher. I should be able to write more about the Universe of Gods that will come out later, but I think the performance is not improving. I don't know how many people will be able to follow it if I continue to write it. Anyway, I feel very boring, and I will be tired of reading it if I continue to write it! Yes, it's just tiring to chase! Now I haven't written any chapters every day! Okay, that's all. I haven't finished writing this review yet. This is the first time! I hope the author can work hard! Trying to come up with the next book! ! ! I just don't know if I can see you again. If I hadn't removed my starting point, I would give you my support again! !

After watching some of it, I can say that it is not suitable for people who like profit flow. The writing is too heroic, and the character is very upright according to today's people, but it is not suitable for the world described by the author. If it were not for the protagonist, I would not survive the 10 chapters. I'm very annoyed by this. I like to do things that are reasonable, rather than doing things that I am not capable of but still like to do. It's normal to bow your head when you see injustice and don't have the ability to do so, instead of sacrificing your life for people you don't know. We are mortals, not all of us are saints and great men. We will not sacrifice our lives for others if we are capable or not. . Maybe I've read too many novels, and I can't stand this kind of plot at all, because it's unrealistic. I like to see reasonable plots and characters rather than relying on a hot-blooded small universe.

Height 185cm, weight 65cm. . . I'm almost as thin as a stick.

This author doesn't talk about martial ethics! ! ! After reading dozens of chapters, a small pistol appeared, and suddenly it turned into the most ridiculous Zhutianliu! ! ! After practicing the system well in the previous system, he suddenly came to the Samsara Palace and instantly transformed into the heavenly flow. How much emotion was wasted for this reader! ! ! I'm so angry

I am invincible with the world. If I don't fight with heaven, who will I fight with?

To be honest, I read Jinyiwei pretty well. I read this book several times and couldn't get past the tenth chapter. It's really embarrassing, so I won't force myself. I'll wait for the next one.

The author advises you that your writing skills are not suitable for digging holes, and you need to practice again. I don't know if you are a novice, but author, when you write a book, you can rewrite the plot in your mind over and over again, but we readers cannot. It takes a lot of skill to dig a hole. You are more like a person digging a hole for the first time. Not only are you half exhausted, but the hole you dug is not very good. Add some flow, especially the Yakuza type, no one likes to watch this kind of thing. The most important thing is that what you wrote is plain to begin with. It would be strange for you, the author, to not break your head and bleed like this.

The title of the book is attractive, and I summarized my views after reading Chapter 40. The article is not on the topic, and the talk of invincibility is pure nonsense. This book is a diary genre, and there is nothing exciting to talk about. Especially when Chan'er was eaten by the tiger demon, I basically didn't want to read it. But for the answer in Chapter 95, I forced myself to see the answer before deciding whether to continue reading.

To be honest, the emotional drama in this book is a failure. It's better not to write it without a female protagonist.

The protagonist should have a physique similar to that of Tiansha Lone Star. Those who helped him were either killed or suppressed. Anyway, there was no happy ending.

Author, you can definitely delete Chapter 95. Originally, the author, you have already said that there are countless monsters and geniuses in this world. Those who like the Yakuza style have this kind of cross-flow feeling. As a result, the author arranged a cesspit for the protagonist at the beginning. So what is the highlight of this book for you, the author? I want to tell everyone that if the protagonist is not arranged, no one can fight, right? Originally, most of the people who like to watch Yakuza-ryu like to watch the Lord, fighting with people, the sky, and the earth, but it turns out that it's better for you, and it's written as Xianxia-ryu.

I've read Chapter 48. I feel like it's a very good novel. It's a pity that the protagonist has to join the reincarnation hall. I don't want to see how many people sacrifice everything to escape from the control of the reincarnation hall. The protagonist should add a lock to himself. If he doesn't complete the task in the future, he will be obliterated. He can't afford to pay the price for escaping.

The beginning is quite satisfactory, with a regular time-traveling process, but the method of obtaining strengthening points is not mentioned in the article. Even if you add an explanation or a slight hint, you will not have any doubts when you read it later. After practicing boxing in Chapter 2, you will feel the connection with the great road. So whether the strengthening points are given by practicing boxing, or by drinking medicine or eating meat as explained by the author in this chapter, I personally will have this kind of confusion when reading. The explanation is given in Chapter 3, but a new problem arises. An ordinary person's exercise for a month will definitely not make much improvement. At most, he will develop an exercise habit. However, it only takes more than half a month for the protagonist to go from recovering from illness to "magic success". This is why I feel that I can't feel the sense of substitution here. Although it is only a novel, I still hope that there will be a smoother logic, so that there will not be too much sense of violation and the idea of ​​not wanting to read on. However, the overall reading of the book is still acceptable. There are not too many poisonous points. The character descriptions are relatively rich and the writing style is also good. I hope the author will continue to work hard! The above represents only my personal views.

I hope the next book won't feature a female protagonist. You, a straight man, really don't understand emotional drama.

One of the shortcomings of being good at digging holes is that it constantly reminds readers that they are really just reading a novel, rather than that the protagonist has mistakenly entered a bizarre world. The craftsmanship is too strong.

The feeling this book gave me is just one word, mixed. To be honest, if the author had a big world background from the beginning, the results would definitely be good. Do you think Dafeng Daggeng has a big background? It's just one world, which is enough for you to write. Work more on the plot. Interesting stories can attract people. The simpler the framework, the easier it is for readers to understand. Why do you write such a cultivation system? Let us learn to cultivate immortals.

Let me add some popularity to the author.

I feel like it's a failure for you to join the reincarnations. My personal opinion is, don't criticize.

Chapter One: Invincible Chapter Two: Enemies from Heaven

In my opinion, whether it is the protagonist who strives to improve himself, or Xinxinzi, the queen of the wasteland. They are not as cute as the weirdos in the Ninth Division~~~~ After all, Jiang Yu and Liang Xin are too normal~~~ Hahahahaha~~~ And among these weirdos, my personal favorite is actually Lin Yishui. I would like to emphasize that it is definitely not Lin Yishui's extremely beautiful appearance that I feel pity for. How can I, an upright person like me, like her just because of her beauty? Mainly, Lin Yishui's personality is very interesting The author writes that she has a pure heart, but has the ability to reverse the curse. Because he couldn't control himself at first, he often brought disasters to the people around him and became the curse of the Ninth Division, causing everyone to avoid him. Normally speaking, if you are rejected by the people around you due to circumstances beyond your control, you will probably be hurt in your heart, and may even start to have some world-weary thoughts, but Lin Yishui does not. When she wanted to meet Jiang Yu, she learned the so-called "speech skills" and was able to control her own abilities, and even had a second awakening. He becomes very cute~~~~ He is kind-hearted, but sometimes too straightforward, which brings a lot of laughter to the story. She can also use her abilities to fight in a timely manner. For example, her reverse curse ability was used to bless the demon monk Pudu, which really had immediate results. She is beautiful, kind-hearted, and capable. How could I not like her? Now the plot makes me a little worried... Because Lin Yishui has a crush on Jiang Yu, and Jiang Yu already has Liang Xin. How could Queen Liang Xin tolerate a second woman beside Jiang Yu? So the lunch box is ready, right? Don't!

[Recommended by friends, not bad, let's talk about it briefly] I was rescued at the beginning and got the system. It was funny and humorous, and it was quite satisfactory. The method of obtaining strengthening points was not written in detail. I think it is right, so that it can attract people to read. Upgrading and practicing martial arts too quickly made me think it was an invincible novel. The demon tiger entered the village injured and the savior died. People in other villages were fine, so I felt there was something fishy. In the plot of the village, I can feel that the author's writing style is very impatient, and he wants to advance the plot quickly. He has lost his sense of humor and wrote it in a refreshing and invincible narrative style, which feels very boring. In fact, it can be mixed with humor and some things can be simplified and written without being too detailed. (Just like the book Curse, although the setting discouraged many people, many people stayed because of the funny elements) To complain, the author explained that there were too many spoilers, which led to a poor sense of suspense. After leaving the village, the pace of description slowed down, the author's writing style improved, some settings and layouts slowly unfolded, and pits began to be dug. When I saw the later part, I thought it was a combination of astronomy and fantasy. I felt that the author wanted to combine several types of literature. So far, it looks pretty good. Although it seems stiff, it is at least fluent and full of reading pleasure. In terms of writing style, the author's character description is quite good, the imagination is big enough, the suspense is full, the fighting description is also very exciting, and the description of the supporting characters and villains is also good. It would be better to pay attention to the importance of the roles of the primary, secondary, supporting and villain roles. Emotional drama: The heroine is actually a killer for this type of novel. Good writing will not give you many points, but poor writing will directly lead to abandoning the book. I won't say much here, for fear of affecting the author's thinking. After all, the heroine also serves the plot. Nowadays, many authors will add some funny humor to avoid the boring and blunt plot. You can use it as a reference. Overall, this book is pretty good and worth reading. Come on!

I have been reading this book for a long time. Take a look and see that Jiang Yu and various characters in the book have also been with me for a long time. Thank you in advance to the author for bringing such a wonderful story. From Jiang Yu to Novice Village, he went to a small town to serve as a head catcher, exploring the world step by step. The author's world view is very big. From the appearance of the Palace of Reincarnation, you can see that the author originally wanted to write in the direction of the heavens, but was later criticized by us readers. However, you can still see Liang Xin's wasteland world, the game world whose name I forgot, the future world whose name I forgot... I don't know if it is because these world plots are quickly taken away because readers don't like it. The plot of the main world seems to be magnificent. The plot from when Jiang meets Wuxiang Temple and starts practicing, to when the old emperor passes away and the princes compete for the throne, is my personal favorite part. Probably the geniuses in the Ninth Division are all cute, right? It's also possible that the martial arts value is high enough at this stage, and it feels more exciting before it reaches the stage of high martial arts of Xuan Zhi You Xuan. What I feel is a pity is that the author seemed to start to fast forward the plot again in the second half. After conquering the sky from the national master, the relationship between the world of destiny and the universe was actually developed. The war between the immortals and the gods, the origin of the Samsara Palace... I feel that I can write another two million words without exaggeration, but here I feel that Jiang Yu escalated very quickly. Of course, I know that the time given by God is running out, but when I read it, I still felt that the pace was a little faster. Especially when fighting, I feel that sometimes the enemy is killed by Jiang Yu before he is ready. Maybe it's because the protagonist is already invincible? But looking at it this way, I feel that the excitement has dropped slightly. However, despite its flaws, this novel is still quite enjoyable. I feel that if I could write all about the main world, or simply write about Zhutianliu, my results might be better than now. The original Zhutian is actually read by some people. I feel that it is the way of narration that causes readers to complain. Because we are bringing in Jiang Yu, who suddenly encounters a team of reincarnators, and readers are as surprised as Jiang Yu. If Jiang Yu took the initiative to open the gate to the heavens, or had clues about the heavens very early, the plot related to the mission of the reincarnation should not be fast forwarded like in this book. I heard that a new book is about to be published. Of course, I will continue to support the new book~~~~

With the current development of the plot, from a small border town, to a big city in one place, and then to the capital, the world structure of the real "World of Destiny" has begun. The disputes in the court, the chaos of demons, and the conflicts between all parties began to surface one by one! The protagonist has gone from being an unimportant passerby to becoming a chess piece with some weight on the chessboard. The protagonist is still aware of the existence of the mastermind behind the scenes, and resistance to the main temple is also brewing. The plot really begins, and the chessboard set by the plot really begins to look at the overall situation. The protagonist also has the power to affect the chess game, and the whole body can be affected by one move. Some suggestions: The protagonist can affect the chess game, but the protagonists are different. Some of them turn the tide on their own; some of them turn the world around without anyone, and the protagonist only provides some push. As for some incidents, the protagonist prevents them. Generally, the opponent has a backup plan, and the incident can develop as usual. Also, some characters can be written as extras, which can not only fill in the plot, but also fill in holes or foreshadow to a certain extent. For example, after a general Infinite Raiders, they will talk about the development of the world, or what if it didn't happen; some characters who have a heavy role can also describe their experiences to make the plot more realistic!

A shameless person just came to Qidian for 100 days. He got into the trap in early August. The fan value is 200. Some shameless people came to participate in the event! Currently being upgraded. When I first joined the site, there were more than 200 a day. I forgot how to start reading this book, so I came to subscribe and support it! After subscribing for a while, I stopped subscribing, not only because I have less points now, but also because I discovered a big secret... QQ Reading there (¯㉨¯) I am waiting to read it again at the beginning of the month It is free for two days, so I took out this book from the bottom of the bookshelf and participated in this event shamelessly😃 It was finished immediately, so fast! (Full of confusion, just came here) I'm waiting for the new book, and prepare to invest in the new book!

Personally, I feel that the framework of this book is a bit patchwork and not particularly rounded! The overall look is okay, but the combination of details is not perfect. When I first read this book, I thought it was an authentic martial arts practice. After reading further, I found out that it was actually a book about the infinite worlds. When it was put on the shelves, I discovered that it was a mastermind behind the scenes. At this point, the framework of this book has basically been set. Perhaps a lot of the charm of this book is the combination of this framework, but the details of the connection of the framework are not in place. Seeing now, more senses are directed towards the Infinite Lord God. Although the main world has many plots and has dug a lot of pits (Finger Sealed, Drought Demon, Corpse King), the sense of existence is not as good as the Infinite Lord God. Moreover, according to the description of the Lord God, there are many such big worlds in the heavens, which actually lowers the style of the main world. These can be patched with later emphasis on description, but it is necessary to determine whether it is to focus on the development of the main world, or whether to prepare for the infinite flow of the heavens.

How this realm is divided makes my head hurt.

I wish Shi Da is prosperous and in a trance, and his achievements are even higher!

I have finished reading this novel. I have to wait for the novel all day long. I have been paying close attention to it. After reading it, if it is like looking at other people's life stories from the perspective of God, I still want to say it here. I wish the author to work hard and create better works😁