Abyss: the Arrival of Super Civilization

Why recommend a book with just this few words? How much did you pay for the leather armor?

It's so miserable. You dare to let Pipijia breastfeed? Keep it up.

I saw the leather armor seal and pushed it over. That's it. What's the number of words?

The dialogue between the characters is too childish. If it doesn't work, don't write it. The dialogue between the protagonist and his family is endless.

I feel like I have overcome my loneliness. He can only be a thug, and his mood has not changed 🤤

Don't be ambiguous, and don't write anything sensational. Writing without adequate emotion will make people feel embarrassed. Judging from the latest situation, we are going to join the official list. And the protagonist has gained so much knowledge from that Wang Laodao, and he doesn't even mention it at all.

Creative ideas are good, but they are just creative ideas.

Most of the people who have been breastfed by Pipijia are eunuchs.

My rating is: Send it! Cut it quickly

The plot content is average, the background and setting are pretty good, but it's a pity that it didn't go further.

Chapter 12: The protagonist makes a sneak attack and kills an individual regardless of good or bad, without any grievance or enmity. What are these three views? No bottom line? A decent character? ? ?

🤭 How dare you let Pipi Xia milk you? If Pi Pi Xia milks you, this book will basically be sold on the street.

Chapter 1: Playing with fire and burning yourself? Have pig's feet deceived people all over the world? Global sacrifice begins?

It's almost as if one family is making a fortune in silence, but on top of that, no matter how good the relationship is, another family may betray you. After all, they are not of the same blood and have the same surname, and all except the most secretive skills and treasures are divided. Aren't you afraid that friendship will rise and hatred will rise?

Stop writing emotional dramas, it's a complete mess

The first chapter of the opening chapter is too novice and has no suspense.

The setting is very bad. At the beginning, the protagonist causes a world disaster. Even if he saves the world in the end, he cannot be undone. Do readers dare to take the role?

When I saw the Abyss, my first reaction was that the Mount Fuji volcano erupted. The Abyss needs this environment to hatch little monsters.

The abyss is an abyss, and it has nothing to do with super civilization.

This is a good book. The advantage is that it explains many magical phenomena in an approximately reasonable way that modern people can understand. I still remember the first time I saw the explanation of rune technology in Infinite Horror. I really thought it was great. This book has similar advantages. So the setting must have taken the author a lot of thought. Of course, the shortcomings are also very obvious, mainly reflected in the immature writing style and crude plot. I think the author's next book will be more worth looking forward to.

You can read this book when you are bored to pass the time. A little bit more poisonous

The conversation with relatives was so awkward, it really embarrassed me. It was really awkward. I said important things three times. After all, my poison resistance was too low. I thought the book pushed by Pi Pijia was okay. What happened? ? ?