One Piece: I Am an Undercover Agent in the Navy

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Moreover, the revolutionary army's policies, strategies, and ideas are at best wrong. After all, there is no unified Marxism to guide. But their ideological consciousness is definitely the best among all the forces inside. After all, if Long wants to enjoy glory and wealth, he can basically become a general with enough strength. But people give up their superior lives to build the revolutionary army, give everything to the revolutionary army, and are extremely poor. How can their ideological consciousness not be high?

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The painting style of The Seven Deadly Sins is so ugly. There are people who deliberately use this image. They are afraid of female subordinates and limit their abilities. What kind of rubbish setting is this?

The starting setting is very good, but it's a pity that the protagonist has always been a rebel and betrayed others. Not many people will like this.

The theme settings are quite good, but the writing is too bland and boring, just like a running account.

The protagonist has such a background in the navy. If he doesn't lick the five old stars, he can only be ranked as Lieutenant General Garp. It can't go any higher. After all, Garp's position as the strongest player in the world was achieved through his fists. After all, if you don't accept the management, you are not my person. Why should Wulaoxing give you a high position? Credit, record, whatever the hell, it's all useless. After all, Wulaoxing wants an obedient subordinate, not a self-respecting Fan King.

Is it necessary to lick Garp and Sengoku like this? ? ? ? ? Getting more and more outrageous

Good guy, no matter whether the protagonist drinks water or becomes an enemy, there are several groups fighting against the smaller ones... In fact, it can be written in a more detailed way, wouldn't it be more interesting to let outsiders think that the protagonist is destined to die? Once you become the enemy of the protagonist, you will start to have bad luck. You can make the protagonist weaker and more dramatic.

It's well written, a little funny, but not silly. The writing is strategic, but not too profound to understand.

It is recommended to get the Soul Fruit. I feel that it is the only one among pirates that can quickly become the top combat power. Looking at the One Piece comics, The soul fruit can give the soul to oneself. If the soul is given to every cell in one's body, every bacteria, every virus, every cancer cell, and every gene chain can freely control everything in the body. Isn't that equivalent to the enhanced version of the Poison Fruit + the enhanced version of the ultimate creature?

It's not bad, I can't say it's particularly good, but it's better than most One Piece fan fiction. There are not many poisonous points, and it is undeniable that there are some unreasonable things in the core settings, but it can be called a grain and grass article! People who are the same are afraid of poison. Don't look at it with rose-tinted glasses.

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Yes, it is a rare book that is above the passing mark. You can consider it as the next original book. Remember to pay attention to the rhythm. Are you sure you won't correct any typos?

The plot is very good, the characters are well-characterized, and none of the characters are overly negative. But in terms of settings! Does the protagonist's discipline skill also have an impact on the protagonist? Isn't the protagonist ruthless when he meets his enemies? Passive skills? Other aspects There are some bugs in the anti-armor attack. If it is a counter-attack, can there be weapons to stop it? Anti-damage, can the natural system also restrain it? In terms of swordsmanship, if it is purely materialistic, what if the protagonist gets old? And there is faith?

After reading dozens of chapters, the overall framework and the background of the protagonist are quite attractive. There are multiple undercover agents, and the protagonist's abilities are passable. The problem is that the writing seems to be a running list and I can't read it at all. This book can be regarded as a low-end version of Roar of the Fire Dragon.

Some people say that Lao Sha is Whitebeard's daughter, and Whitebeard would drive women off the ship before every battle.

Do you have any good pirate novels to recommend?