Perfect World: I Am the First Emperor of the Ancient Times

I remember that Taoist Immortal Gold and No. 2 Under Heaven are not dead, but there is something wrong with their souls.

The Red Dust Immortal should be a quasi-immortal king with force

The novel should at least have a female protagonist! Just that white elephant. You don't think so after hearing that? I suggest that the author choose the heroine at the back. Then have a few more of those kids. My suggestion is my daughter. This way you can leave them with a good ending at the end of the article.

I just read it, and I was a little hopeful, but why did you write about a prehistoric era?

The writing is very good, but the writing behind it is a mess.

The first part of this novel, which is also the part before Shi Chen's resurrection, is very well written and made me feel very happy. The latter part felt very perfunctory and didn't make my blood boil.

After Shi Chen's resurrection in the novel, most of the time he was writing about other people, which made me feel that the protagonist was not him at all. And I think the protagonist should be written in detail. As for Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, they can be a little abbreviated and don't have to write so much. But don't write too little, otherwise you won't be able to highlight Shi Chen's performance.

It was okay in the early stage, but nothing in the later stage.