The Spirit-Commanding Master Painter

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I've read over forty chapters so far, and the biggest problem I'm seeing is that the protagonist doesn't cultivate properly at all. He levels up entirely through fortuitous encounters or coincidences. Can't they just write about cultivation in a proper way?

The subject matter is good, but the plot is clichéd; it's neither enjoyable nor worth abandoning.

It's understandable that the protagonist draws erotic pictures, since many famous artists do, but isn't it a bit inappropriate to draw an unmarried girl? Most importantly, he clearly knows the other person is powerful; is he deliberately courting disaster? Has he forgotten his past life as a celebrity? Why does he insist on making enemies?

Previously, there was nothing to read; the author stopped updating, and readers were furious. Things are different now; there are plenty of books, although good books are still relatively few. But author, if you dare to cut ties, you're forcing us to nurture your work. You probably don't know how many books have been nurtured to the point of decay. Young author, you don't want your masterpiece to be neglected by readers, do you? 🐶🐶🐶

Many parts of this book were incomprehensible; I didn't understand why the protagonist did what he did, the author didn't explain it clearly, and there seemed to be a lot of typos.

You're the only one who can write such a heart-wrenching story with such genius flair.

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Well, the plot is alright, but I always felt the characters' dialogue was a bit strange... It felt a bit stiff.

Paper craftsmanship is such a wonderful profession, yet it's forced to become a mundane painter. How many novels are there about painters? How many are about paper craftsmen? I initially started reading because the protagonist was a paper craftsman, but it turned out to be a case of false advertising.