Curse of Nyx

The plot is a bit too forced and stiff. The protagonist just wants to know about the extraordinary and immediately encounters a harmless extraordinary person. A letter with no encryption that allows the protagonist to find the extraordinary circle is dropped in front of the protagonist. Then the protagonist is in need of a secret message to join the circle, but a passerby immediately gives it to him for free and easily obtains it. Also, knowing that the gods of this world are inexplicably related to the Greek mythology of the previous life, yet they dared to use Zeus as their name when they just entered the extraordinary circle and didn't understand anything. It's shockingly stupid.

The plot of Chapter 15 suggests that you either don't write it or kill it. Kill the cultists and keep the son who doesn't think the cultists are wrong. You sow the seeds of hatred for no reason. This is not to cause trouble for the protagonist but to cause trouble for the readers.

Stay tuned, a firm supporter😁

The boat in the first book is not as beautiful as the one in the first book, and the food is tasteless.

It's not as good as the first Ship of the Curse, so I'm writing another one✍A similar one

At first glance, I can see that they are all female characters, and I don't dare to speak out, just like Shen Nong. (After all, this is not a city channel)

The author should settle down for a while. The Cursed Ship almost became a god in the early and middle stages. The adventure and harem rhythms are both good. Except for the poor writing and the vague power system, everything else is good.

Let's not talk about your writing style and plot. You have climbed out of the grave and Sparks has money to give you. This joke is fine! I'll order this just because it's not too poisonous.

The author, The Cursed Ship, is very good, but the protagonist is too licking. For example, the vampire, I just met him, he gives her good things and helps unconditionally. He is a shit-eating dog and a licking dog.

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The plot and writing are both pretty good. It's just that the halo of the protagonist is too heavy and a bit too deliberate. Whatever the protagonist lacks and needs, he just encounters it. The development of the plot seems very stiff.

The Curse of Nyx? I didn't find any connection between the plot and the goddess of the night

Sorry, I'm back in the countryside and don't have time to write at the moment

The character's personality is not distinct enough, and he speaks in almost the same tone. It feels like one person is talking to himself and playing multiple roles. This is very uncomfortable. The rest is pretty good.

I see that you have already read two books, but I am a bit afraid to read this one.

I don't know how the author positioned the role of the aunt, but this character keeps taking risks with the protagonist, and it's easy for her relationship to break down.