Douluo: My Time Travel Simulator

How come you write a drama and write it? A fantasy entertainment system has come out, are you a good person?

Personally I think it's very well written. Reading other people's comments in book reviews, I don't quite understand it. What is the meaning of a novel? If you have the ability, write it yourself. Just don't watch it if you don't like it, I insist on being the king of words here.

Pangu Ax failed to split the Douluo Star, bad review, hahahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

Isn't the protagonist's father Wuhun a sickle? Why did it become a hammer?

Only a fool would choose martial soul instead of soul power. Even if the martial soul is Tuo Xiang, with the support of innate level 30 soul power, he can directly transform into the god of Xiang. On the contrary, if you choose a powerful martial soul, your innate soul power may not be high. If your innate soul power is not enough to support the production of high-level martial souls, then you are simply useless.

Douluo is a martial arts all over the place, but the author wants to have something to do with myths or prehistoric times, so just pick a bad guy, Qin Shimingyue, etc. Can beat Douluo.

Ultra low-end version, Pangu Sky Axe

Fake Pangu Ax: 3D projection + sound effects, pure bluffing, shocking passers-by. The real Pangu Ax: A wisp of energy emitted, crushing the God Realm, chaos energy entangled during the swing, and the Douluo Star was obliterated. 😄😄

There are some poisonous points in the first few chapters, which are too anti-intellectual. 1. The determinism of martial soul quality does not take into account factors such as innate soul power, adventure, effort, etc. Think like a little monk. 2. With such a big problem, he still only wants to be Tang San's lackey and is timid. You don't need to be excellent, at least you can be like a normal person.

Suppose I traveled to the world of Douluo, and there was also a simulator whose golden finger was the protagonist. If I was asked to choose, I would choose innate full soul power for the first simulation, choose soul power for the second simulation, choose soul power for the third simulation, until the title Douluo, the fourth simulation I chose the physique of the Titled Douluo, and in the 5th simulation I chose the soul ring until I became an invincible Titled Douluo. In the 6th simulation I chose the martial spirit again, and in the 7th simulation I became an invincible Titled Douluo with level 99 dual martial souls. In the 8th simulation, I simulated nothing else, I am invincible, it's time to enjoy it, let's continue drinking.

After seeing the introduction, to be honest, I had no idea what I wanted to read. I came to this comment area just to make a complaint.

Wuhun Palace is a pit, a big pit. Bibi Dong had an affair with the master and didn't even want to kill Tang San. If Bibi Dong wanted to kill Tang San, do you think Tang Hao could escape with Tang San and Xiao Wu intact? She also let Tang San go many times. If Qianrenxue wanted to take over the Tiandou Empire, she would have taken it long ago with just a titled Douluo. Later on, the two women fell in love with Tang San. There was no need to fight at all. The three people with the right to speak all had a hand, let alone whether they could win the fight. The Wuhun Palace had nothing but peak combat power. You see, Hu Liina had to win a soul bone in the competition, and the protagonist was just a nanny and had nothing to do. Let's talk about Tang San first. If the protagonist doesn't want to follow Tang San, if he doesn't want to accept Xiao Wu and learn from Tang San, he just needs three hundred thousand year soul rings and soul bones. If he can get the knowledge of fairy grass, how many titled Douluo can he cultivate in a few decades?

Whether a Douluo fan is good or not depends on the martial spirit. Like the fantasy sewer like Douluo Continent, the martial spirit no longer depends on whether it is strong or invincible. After all, no matter how strong you are, how strong you can be. Nowadays, it's all about whether it's interesting or not. After all, anything about Wuhun can be imagined. It's because of this that there are so many fanfics. But I really feel that Pangu Ax and Donghuang Zhong are not suitable for writing now. I remember that there are some books that use heroes from King of Glory as martial spirits, which is interesting.

It's true that Tang San was killed by Qianxunji, and Bibi Dong killed Qianxunji, but without Tang Hao seriously injuring Qianxunji, Bibi Dong wouldn't have been able to kill him. So Bibi Dong and the Tang family should be each other's benefactors. Bibi Dong's goal is to destroy the Spirit Hall, and Tang San's goal is to overthrow the Spirit Hall. If they have the same goal, it should be okay for them to be allies, right? Their hostility is entirely due to lack of communication and hatred towards Wu and Wu. Why is there no protagonist to talk things out? It would be great to be surrounded by allies and only the Angel Temple as the enemy.

Convinced, in the Douluo World, at most the essence of the world at the peak of the noon world can allow Liu Shen to understand the root and step into the quasi-immortal emperor. This is no one else.

It's really not like using this super-standard weapon as Douluo's martial spirit. It looks very funny.

I originally wanted to scold the author, but I was so poisoned by this book that I didn't have the energy to scold him.

I can obviously be invincible and respected by the world, but I still want to join the sect and live under the protection of others.

At the beginning of the novel, the author writes that the protagonist is hesitant to be recruited by Wuhun Palace. It wouldn't matter if there were any good excuses for turning to Tang San's side, but what the protagonist is struggling with is actually the fear that Tang San will kill the protagonist? You don't have the confidence to fight Tang San even if you are on the hook? Although I know that the author wanted to describe the protagonist's character, it was a bit too silly. The current plot of Goldfinger is too strong and his strength has increased too quickly. He was given the title of Douluo at the age of twelve, and his martial spirit is still the Pangu Sky Axe. It can be said that he is already invincible in the Douluo Continent. It is indeed difficult to write about this kind of collapse of combat power, but it is enough to turn it into an invincible novel, and you can also change the scene and find an excuse to go to other worlds. However, the author's choice was to suppress the fighting power. He first cut the Wuhun and defined it as a "fake Pangu Sky-Opening Axe". Although he promoted the genuine product, it was still uncomfortable to watch. Up to now, the author still prefers invincible writing, so there is no need to say this sentence. Also, the protagonist is now a Titled Douluo, but the plot progress is too slow. Five years have been passed directly, and he has become a Titled Douluo. As a result, the plot is not easy to advance now, and we can only follow the original work... And we have set up a delivery system to open a small copy to delay time. How should I put it? It's completely unnecessary. Also, when the author describes the protagonist's combat power, he will always improve the strength of the original characters, such as Poison Douluo (the most useless titled Douluo in the original), such as Tang Hao (when Tang San singled out Zhao Wuji, his injury was still not healed, but the protagonist actually felt that Tang Hao was very strong). In the original work, Extreme Soul Soul Douluo can defeat Titled Douluo in a few moves, but the protagonist's martial soul Pangu Sky Axe, black black red black black black red red, even thinks that they are strong when facing those trash... The author spends the whole article pretending to be cool around the protagonist, but in this place, the protagonist's strength is completely lost.

Brother, what you write is boring and you have no passion.

It was okay at first, but then the more I wrote, the more rubbish it became, but there were so many things I complained about that I didn't know how to complain about.

When writing Douluo, you can add a setting, that is, all the power of the soul beast is converted into lifespan, and the Nascent Soul only has a lifespan of 1,000 years. Right, this setting becomes reasonable once added. If the power of the soul master is pushed to the pot of the God Realm, the Douluo Continent will be castrated. The mastermind behind the scenes is the God Realm, and its power is converted into life.

No wonder he only has an exit index of 1239 points. His simulated innate soul power of level 8 has increased by one level in one year. He has absorbed more than 300 years of soul rings without increasing his soul power level. He was only raised to level 13 at the age of 12. Forget it, he is such a piece of rubbish. He has a relationship with Xue Yebang and is only at level 29 at the age of 18 with the support of a prince. How can he still be called a genius by some school? Is this genius? As for the Douluo title, which only has a lifespan of 100 years, do you want to write that geniuses can only reach level 90 when they are 90 years old?

In the second chapter, you start to sensationalize? The readers don't even understand what this old Adam is. Can it be repeated in a circular manner? Use daily bits and pieces to bring out Old Adam's difficulties and love for the protagonist, and finally kill him. You want to make us sad. What is this ⊙∀⊙ you wrote?

When I saw the first one, I thought this book was rubbish.

Please don't mutter to yourself. The place where you stay is Wuhun City. Anyone can hear it. You can think to yourself: "You can also say to yourself: This paragraph is very dramatic. The rest, no matter how big or small, is the style of this article, which is acceptable." Some unreasonable parts can be read through at once, and the text is smooth. Just muttering to himself, this is a world with extraordinary power, do you want to die?

The writing is okay, but the writing is not great. Nowadays, many authors cannot tell the difference between Zhutianwen and Zhutianliu. Although they both travel through several worlds, the worlds of the former have no priority and no difference in importance; while the latter has priorities. For example, if this book is named Douluo and is classified as a Douluo fanfic, then it should naturally focus on the Douluo plot, and the plots in other worlds should help the host become stronger in Douluo. However, this book obviously puts the cart before the horse. There is not much Douluo plot, but plots from other worlds occupy most of the space. Especially the perfect part. There are more plots in this world alone than in the Douluo part. So, are you writing a Douluo fanfic or a Perfect fanfic? There is no distinction between priorities and priorities. Although it looks interesting, it is just a failure...

The author, the protagonist, and the novel are a complete collection. May the author LLLII/IIL

I don't think Qian Xunji is a bad person! Bibi Dong is the bad guy!

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