Douluo Dalu: Reborn as Tang San, I Begin Cultivating Immortality

I have read dozens of Douluo fanfics and most of them were addicted to death within ten chapters. I have read at most two or three. This one can be said to be better than most Douluo fanfics now. The protagonist is not that violent and is stupid when I catch him. I don't understand. I also hate Tang Sanyu and Xiaogang. We, but there is no need to blame Xiao Wu for being a hundred thousand year old soul beast and having had many babies. According to this statement, the demon heroines in the immortal novels all gave birth to many babies before they developed spiritual wisdom. Except for Tang Sanyu, Xiaogang and Dai Mubai, there are no big black spots in the original characters. You can criticize their character and behavior, but there is no need to criticize them without thinking.

Pretending to be in front of a group of children, I always feel that this cultivator is mentally abnormal

With all due respect, if you don't have innate soul power, you are not qualified to be Master Jade's apprentice. He is also gifted with first-level soul power, and Master Jade comes to accept his disciples. Is this glorifying Master Jade? Can't stand it

Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, he is really like a pig that can be pinched by anyone. What a waste, he has no temper at all. Even with god-level strength, the Soul King of the Soul Sect pointed his nose at him and scolded him, and he still laughed and apologized. What a waste.

What I wrote above is okay, but the Shang Haotian Sect really brought wisdom. At the age of thirteen, he rivaled the fighting power of a titled Douluo, but the Seventh Elder was still fighting to the death. I had obtained more than 300 Titled Douluo level puppets. I would not let go of a Creation God level puppet, so I just beat him there. As a result, Tang Dachui died and his soul rings were all exploded. Next time you write a book, write an outline carefully. Don't think that it will come out one after another.

I can't stand it anymore when I see Chapter 29. It's clear that in a few years in Notting City, you can cultivate to the foundation-building stage equivalent to becoming a god, but in order to catch up with Shrek's popularity, you forcefully reduce the protagonist's intelligence and combat strength. Don't talk about ancient ruins. Is it possible to limit the soul sect and also limit the gods? Even if the gods can be restricted, without knowing the details, a normal person would choose to have the strength of the Invincible Continent within a few years before considering whether it is possible or not. What's more, the protagonist is a monk who has cultivated the golden elixir in the world of cultivating immortals. His brain has deteriorated while cultivating immortals? If the co-author doesn't touch on the original characters, it won't be possible to continue writing. As long as you don't say that you have reached foundation building without suppressing cultivation, I can still read it.

Reborn as Tang San? According to the genre that current readers like, I am not optimistic about it.

It is rare to see that if compared with the original work, if the good aspects of the original work are written out, many of the poisonous points can be removed.

There are some creative ideas in the first few chapters, but later on, they forcefully subdue their wits, return the entire imperial legacy, and add Tang San, the 8th Weft God. . . . . . Even if you compile combat power, it doesn't have to be so outrageous 🙂

After returning from Haotian Sect, he started to spread poison and forcefully explain that Qian Renxue didn't have a titled Douluo by his side. Emperor Xue Ye gave Zhu Zhuqing a marriage to Xue Beng? True Six, stepped on Qian Renxue's IQ and rubbed it on the ground. If you don't know how to write a male-female plot, don't write it. You can always say that a certain woman makes you feel inexplicable when she looks at you. Come on, the protagonist has accepted three women, and he has also traveled through two lives. You don't understand this?