Mountain Ghost Listens

I think the biggest shortcoming of this book is that the setting is not clear. I can read more than 80 chapters purely based on imagination. I hope the author can clarify the setting of the two lines of Shinto and Immortal. The writing rhythm is very good. Come on, author.

It's good-looking, exciting, has a substantial plot, and has a certain connotation. But the plot is a bit cliche, the characters are stereotyped, and it lacks an eye-catching highlight. But as a refreshing article, this is a pretty good work. There is more than enough food and grass, but not enough fairy grass.

Nice! Nice! Nice! Hundreds of cats scratch my heart, rolling on the ground asking for updates.

As a mountain god, tigers are your subjects, and humans are also your subjects. If the tiger swears not to eat humans, do you deserve to be happy? Did the man take a vow not to hunt again? Then everyone eats grass? Aren't grasses the people of the mountain god? If the mountain god only persuades animals not to eat humans, then the "mountain god" is just a "human god". Why should the mountain elves respect you? You, the mountain god, are too narrow-minded

When you meet a mortal scholar, you chatted for a long time. You all know that the protagonist is no longer an ordinary person, and the protagonist doesn't want to pay attention to him. As the comment said, why not just transform back into a sculpture or fly away. Although everyone knows that it may be to trigger the follow-up plot, the style has become mediocre. Everything about being meticulous seems to be imposed, and there is no so-called fairy spirit. Anyway, it is boring after seeing it and I have no interest in reading anymore.

Shennong is coming: This book is not Shinto-style, so don't come if you want to see the gods. The protagonist started out as a statue, but after about ten chapters he became a human being, became able to move, and began to practice traditional immortality. Comment: The protagonist as a god is a girly boy, not a mighty middle-aged man. This is a bit unacceptable for an old man like me. I can only say that I will always be a teenager.

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I like this kind of down-to-earth development. It's countless times better than the kind of mindless article where the main character is invincible and the bosses from all over the world kneel down to lick it. Come on, author

As the mountain god of Taihang Mountain, he is in charge of the Five Elements Great Seal, but to use the authority of the mountain god, he still needs the power of his own cultivation? ? ? The mountain god's domain is only a little at the beginning, does it need practice to expand? Is this still the mountain god of Taihang Mountain? As a mountain god, shouldn't your power come from the Taihang Mountains? From the Talisman of the Mountain God?

In fact, the protagonist should not go down the mountain. The power of Taihang Mountain can be said to be his bodyguard. When he comes down from the mountain, he is full of natural talents and earthly treasures. And the title of this book, is it still called a mountain ghost if it is separated from the mountain? And living in the mountains, the characters will not be too complicated, the plot line will not be messy, and the fairy tale flavor of the novel will be stronger.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing this. The demon has intelligence and can avoid killing indiscriminately. But if you are fighting against monks, killing people or other races just for chance and cultivation, I don't think it's okay. Are you going to never eat people? Monks can kill demons to obtain treasures, take demon elixirs, demon skins, demon bones, blood essence, etc. For cultivation, but demons cannot eat people for cultivation? Anyway, I don't want to watch the protagonist of Mary's Heart, for the sake of the human race? Once you get the title of mountain god, you should be a mountain god. Anyway, I am practicing immortal literature now, but I can't bear to stand still for the sake of mortals. There is a difference between immortals and mortals. Sorry for being poisoned.

The golden snake went out to catch a rabbit, but the protagonist stopped looking for it after a day. He said that his fate was over. Anyway, someone helped you find Geng Jin. Half of his disciples abandoned him when he was told to abandon them. Human nature is so cold.

Let me complain about the beginning. The protagonist said something about the great demon who made a crossbone, God, and Tenjou. He seemed to know a lot. I was very confused about how the protagonist knew it. Then a scholar came to the ruined temple. The protagonist wanted to understand the world through him. I was full of questions. How was this written? I thought to myself whether the protagonist was a wise protagonist.

It looks good, the only immortal in the world, who slays demons and demons, and doesn't want a female protagonist! ! ! Come on! ! !

I have read Chapter 34. Let me share my thoughts. First, the plot is too urgent. Look at how many things have happened in just a few chapters. Such rush makes the portrayal of the protagonist super inconsistent and uncomfortable to watch. The portrayal of the protagonist's image is weird, fake, empty, contradictory, weird, and makes it very uncomfortable to read. It lacks a sense of calmness and sedimentation. When reading the words and sentences, the protagonist feels like a child pretending to be an adult.

The first three chapters were completely defeated, and not a single time traveler said what he did in his previous life? After time travel, what kind of cultivation did you have? Why, after you turned into a soul, the way of heaven was passed down to you directly? Have you communicated with other things? Do you even know where the time travel is? Still deep in the Taihang Mountains. I'm afraid you're not using omniscience. . .

I really like the introduction of "This Book Also Known", and I'm basically obsessed with it.

The writing style is quite good, but it has no connotation and is superficial, pretending to be B for the sake of pretending to be B.

Drive high and go low, force opportunities, keep saying it for a hundred and eighty years, and finally, ten days! Fighting spirit turns into a horse! I have read so many books, but the last one with such a serious halo of the protagonist was Douluo Dalu. It felt like it was written by a studio, and it felt like I was still playing with the old style from ten years ago.

The first three chapters are too outrageous. How can an ordinary person know so many rules, let alone guessing. The author didn't write anything either, so it's just a guess. Just write it all out

The beginning was okay, but the results were getting more and more stretched, not to mention the smell of the mortal world, not to mention the feeling of the changing world, the fairy spirit, the heroic spirit, the free and easy spirit, the evil spirit, the domineering spirit, not all of them. I finally tried a swordsmanship game, but my intention was so high that I fell into a trap when I wrote it. This year's college entrance examination composition is written with a little skill and a master's hand. My opinion is that it is a little master at the beginning, but it will be all a master at the end. Let's first practice the concept of cultivating immortals and this skill, and then we can do those new and unique things, okay?

Before you finish reading the first chapter, you feel that this book is not good. You are almost out of your mind. You are still worried that some god will blame you. No matter what the mountain god doesn't agree with, you will not be possessed even if you die. There is no one else who is so cowardly even when death is imminent.

I don't know why, but it feels so embarrassing to watch. I don't know where it comes from. It's not that the author is bad at writing. I just feel embarrassed to watch it.

This is too little! ! ! Come on, author, I will definitely go up.

It's pretty good, but I couldn't explain the main character clearly at first.

Under the seat The sword-wielding boy—True Golden Man (original Geng Golden Sword Snake)

{"NickName":"Destiny Warrior","UserId":382811132} I would like to make some suggestions. The first swordsmanship that the protagonist acquires is Yi Swordsmanship. You can refer to the skills of Yixing in Honor of Kings. For example, you can lay an ambush, or use the sword as a weapon, the skill as vertical and horizontal, and set up a sword formation.

What does the author's avatar mean? Xiaoheizi branch 666

Wow, I really regret seeing this so early. I will have to wait for the update soon.

The author calmed down and wrote, and it won't collapse. This book will definitely be a god. Even what I say, Jesus can't stop.