King of Black Mist

The modern chapter has collapsed and is becoming more and more boring.

Okay, okay, it sucks Hahahahahahahahahaha Well written, so well written!

To put things into perspective, this book really gets worse as it is written. The first stage of learning about animals is fine, but the more written after the second stage, the worse it gets. There is basically no calculation in the copy, the system setting is basically disabled, and the combat description is very poor.

"Chang Zhou and his twin sister and his wife"× "Qinglan and her twin harem"✓

You said he jumped out of his comfort zone, but he was a beast; you said he opened a trumpet, but asked for help; you said he wrote well, but the data is here. This non-Japanese book about fighting and love is really not up to par with the airwaves. The previous copy of Earth Fairy is quite interesting. It can be used as a refreshing article to watch the protagonist step by step to become the strongest immortal on earth. You can also look forward to how the cause and effect will be revealed in the Republic of China copy, the origin of the black mist, etc.; The copy of Earth Fairy Queen is not up to my appetite, and I skipped and skipped reading intermittently. I hope Crow can write out all the content he wants to write in his trumpet. I hope the next book will be better. It would be best if he returns to Riqing.

Quickly finish "My Girlfriend is a Voice Actor"

Can you please update Miko first? It's really sad that it's not finished well.

In fact, Crow's Love has written about emotions above all else. Although Miko failed to handle the addition of the fighting plot, its core is better to say that it wrote the real Toru Watanabe: flamboyant, proud, and arrogant. It's "The Autobiography of the Great Toru Watanabe". Maybe it's because I have been suppressed for too long in Love Game. People always assume that others can continue to be successful because of the success of some people. Who cares about the real him? The voice actors before Lianyou were not perfect, and Lianyou can be said to be successful due to various reasons. Crow is still on the road. Climbing to the top of the mountain, there are still higher mountains ahead

Chapter 257: It looks disgusting

The content is novel and very attractive. So far, I personally feel that the plot is not poisonous. Some of the small episodes are easy to get people involved. The abilities are diverse and can easily arouse people's curiosity. However, the crazy stacked panels are quite easy to dazzle. I hope the author will keep up the good work and look forward to new content.

You don't want to develop into a harem, right? There are very few light novels with single female protagonists in TNN. There are even fewer that you can read. No, no, no. I'll just put them on the bookshelf to watch.

This imperial mecha is too damn awesome! 50m level, easily Mach 20 or 30, AOE with a wave of the hand, the setting is more realistic, and there are a series of mechas of different levels, which are completely destroyed by Gundam. Compared with the EVA series, it has more strengths and fewer weaknesses. NB When I played the imperial mecha, I imagined the "machine-soul-manifest-appearance" voice and special effects of Baccarat! Handsome duck batch! The feeling of pressure and momentum suddenly rose! The whole process of mecha racing in "Wire of Fire" is full of visuals and a sense of speed!

My thoughts on this book are a bit different from my last one. . . The beginning of this book is quite interesting. The chosen protagonist is cautious and cautious. This highly comic conflict creation made me stay up late to read for a while. During this time, the copy was better than usual. In the mid-term, when the author fearlessly started killing randomly, the plot of the dungeon was very interesting, but the combat power system collapsed into a mess. Afterwards, it becomes a daily routine, and daily life becomes boring. Perhaps this is why humans cannot imagine colors they have never seen before.

Crows have really rich imaginations

Like it enough to put it on the shelves

Crow, is it time for you to reflect on yourself? What Koiyuri Rin said to Watanabe is, somewhere in your heart, do you look down on everyone? I feel exactly the same as you now about this sentence. Do you look down on writing and think you can succeed by just writing casually? When I was a voice actor, I wrote it myself because no one else was writing it, and then I succeeded in writing it. Love Game has this feeling. There is no outline, so I refer to the works I have read here and there. In reality, I just mixed Love Game, Harmono, Kyobuki, etc. Together and started writing. Of course, you wrote your own stuff later on, and you wrote it very well, which is why I have been reading you now. These experiences have shaped you into who you are today. Do you think novels can be successful by just writing casually? The witch is also played directly. Did you make a good outline, arrange the plot, and create the characters? If the main character of Miko didn't say his name, I would have thought it was Watanabe and the others who traveled through time. The setting of combat power is even more important. How many crusades? I've paddled dozens of times, am I a singer? Then, as expected, it collapsed from behind and you ran away. But I think you will gain something, and you will write the next book well, so I have been waiting for your new book. Then what did you do? Are you thinking that I just didn't write the last book seriously? If I wrote seriously, it would succeed casually. Then you hold on to this idea and write it yourself while hiding from the book fans. Are you prepared to surprise everyone? The result is that you can only go back to your mother's family for help. This is all your arrogance. Have you made any preparations for writing? Your preparation for this month is to check out the fierceness of players? What about others? Characters? Really, nothing new, just a shadow of the past. Plot, Infinite Streaming, the dungeon world is the essence of Infinite Streaming. Have you ever written an impressive dungeon? Other Infinite Stream authors can't wait to show off their dungeons, but your dungeon can't even make my eyes shine. Originally, it would be exciting to travel to the past for the second time and change and protect history. But after these few copies, you might as well let the players play a game of chicken in the wilderness. Combat, a bit of progress, but not much. Your settings have all been based on how ferocious the players are, so why not go and see how they fight? The recent ones include Guhuo Bird, and the earlier ones include Dragon and Snake Romance, etc. Not to mention the turn-based system in the end, why do you keep boasting that the protagonist is invincible, but the results are all 50-50? Host? No taboos? Divine body? The Shuangwen Invincible style is forcedly written as the Ultraman style, and you can't play it without a red light. Why are there restrictions when it is already so open? If you want to limit it, it's better not to open it so much. Really, your biggest problem now is not the novel, but your mentality. Does your past success make you feel like writing is nothing more than that? Even Shenji Chendong Squid and the others wouldn't dare to open a book without any preparation, right? As far as I know, they spend several months preparing to open a book. Shen Ji writes about Chinese martial arts and learns them by himself, asks for advice and reads books. The great doctor I saw some time ago, Ling Ran, the author personally stayed in the hospital for several months. Compared with them, ask yourself, are you ready? Maybe you will be more successful than those who are ready to sign a contract for several months, but are you sure you want to compete with them? Since you have decided to eat this bowl of rice, put your mind right. I wish your books will get better and better.

The author recommends you a book with a similar writing style to yours. I hope you can learn from it and achieve the results of this book as soon as possible. "I Loaded the Love Game"

I was originally wondering why no one had read such a good book. After reading it, there were suddenly many people in the dynamic area. When I saw the new book, the investment in the new book suddenly changed from a few dozen to more than a hundred. I was still thinking that good books really make me stand out quickly, and then I realized that they were all old readers who came to see the joke.

Let's talk about the conclusion first: if you are new to the game and want to read more, you can read on, it will become more and more exciting later on. Don't pay attention to what is said in the book review section. As a precaution for old Crow fans who want to read romance novels, in my opinion, the romance plot in this book is not even as good as that of Miko. The book review area is so chaotic that it is difficult to imagine what motivated Crow to continue writing. Browsing through the book review area, you can see: 1. The front is good, but the back is rubbish 2. The back is good, but the front is rubbish. 3. Who can understand the power system that is written in a messy way? 4. Can the protagonist group stop being so intellectual? Is the author really intelligent? 5. Is it okay to write love stories well? What kind of rubbish do you write when you switch careers? 6. A certain character collapsed, it was too toxic, and I gave up the book. 7. Teach authors how to write books. I really want you to correct the shortcomings. Which book does not have the above shortcomings? It is just a matter of severity. To be honest, the writing is actually pretty good. There are some poisonous points, and there are also some places that subdue one's wits. But after reading too much of the book, I simply ignored it. There are many enjoyable parts. I feel that the plot gets better as it goes on. But the emotional scenes are not what I feel like this book can handle at all. Yes, the power system is a little complicated, but I feel that anyone with a brain can figure it out. One point that I find very confusing is what the hell is the Immortal Tribulation. Cairo disappears with just one palm. This is already a human-immortal level of power. Can the fifth level of visualization really reach this level?

What I think are the advantages of this book: 1. It combines the campus of youth with extraordinary adventures very well (whether it's supernatural powers, infinity, the King's mercy and the resurrection of a million possible spiritual energies, this is actually the case.) 2. From the perspective of features, this book should pay more attention to daily life, and the description of the daily life and college life of the male and female protagonists is simply vivid, and the character creation in the opening chapter is already very vivid. 3. Favorite Chapter: Chapter 25: Physical Strengthening. Through continuous exercise, the protagonist of this chapter finally made his first leap in running. It also vividly highlighted the freedom of having youth in hand, as if life is in control, and the passion full of hope and yearning for the future. In my opinion, it can be said to be the first sublimation of this book. 4. Favorite dungeons and plots Whether it is the isolated coastal island at the beginning, or the desert, rainstorm grassland, or cliff behind, the dungeon itself is well created, and the overall environment has a relatively clear picture. (Disadvantages: The protagonist's battle, that is, the conflict content, is relatively small, making the overall plot less exciting). 5. Chapter 41 Crocodile, from this point on the crisis of the value game finally begins to appear in reality. General novels are rarely satisfactory in how the protagonist pretends to be cool in reality. But this book is different, with a lot of daily preparation in the front. That is, the entire real world in the book seems to be consistent with the real world in which our readers live. Once the value game world is officially connected with the real world, readers will be full of expectations for how the protagonist will show off his magical powers in reality. On one side is the daily laughter and laughter, on the other side is the constant risk of life and death crisis and adventure. When these two completely opposite life conditions are combined, a magical chemical reaction occurs.

April's Mercury Alien: Wait until I become popular, I will reveal my name and scare you June's Crow: Mother's family, help me

When I came to see you on May 13, I promised you to tell me as soon as possible. My daughter has been having a high fever since yesterday. This matter has made me awkward all day today. . Suddenly I feel like the girl Toshiro likes (even though I haven't watched Bleach, I know the story of this girl from watching Infinite Flow before) After thinking about it, if you give up the love story that you promised me, I will forgive you, okay?

No, no, no plans yet

Last year, you started chasing the book as soon as it was released. Unexpectedly, after reading it twice, it was not on the shelf. I can honestly say this from my heart. If you don't open this book, you'll get better at it, and you've already made an appointment with the great master. It's not a shame to write poorly about battles. Why do you have to fight so hard just for the sake of illusory comics? It's hard to sell platinum copyrights these days. Why do you think you can achieve success in one fell swoop? The voice acting is very good, and love is your peak. There are many people who are looking forward to you starting a new chapter, and there are not many people who want you to continue writing about fighting. If you hadn't written this book, it would have been nowhere to be read. The people who insist on reading it are not because of your half-hearted world view, but because of your writing style that has not deteriorated.

Crow-sang, let's go back to the daily romance area. Fighting and killing is not suitable for you. We've already hastily ended this book with the miko. Let's finish it quickly. Love-type light novels can't do without you, Crow-sang. I dream about you opening a new book every day, Crow-sang! Crow mulberry! How can I live without your love, Yasang! ! ! Yasang, please take me away! Listen more to the voices of believers

I really beg you to finish it as soon as possible. Let's see which of the Nikkei books from Qidian are now on the market? If you don't go back and revive Nikkei and try to get out of your comfort zone, you will waste the fans left behind by Nikkei. If you spend this bad money, I will look down on you whenever you are not a miko and load those two books with the words "New Book, Lord of the Black Mist" hanging on them. There are some friends who really should stop licking it. The data speaks for itself. This book, Black Mist, has 2.5 Million words and has an out-of-the-circle index of only 2. Let's see how much the Witch has out of the circle with 1,000,000 words. There are quite a few writers on this type of subject matter, but this one really doesn't do it justice. If you are arguing, then you are right.

The author's writing style is really good, you can learn from the example of Emperor - Flying Crow

Identified as biological sister

In Chapter 209, you don't need to use the skills to summon the protagonist, or you don't need to use the powerful skills. Hey, it's just for fun, just wait for the dragon suit to die and then pretend to be unwilling to take revenge. Before, my sister Jia Lan and a bunch of dragon suitors couldn't beat her. After the dragon suit died, the two people chased after each other. It's disgusting. I chased after him and found that I still couldn't beat him, so I started to summon the protagonist, waited for 20 seconds, and then forced a wave of emotions Awesome, this book is really poisonous to read with your brain.

Crow Sang, stop forcing yourself to become a hexagonal warrior. You are now... Chen Dong gave up Xianxia to rewrite Riqing, making things difficult for himself. Even if it is Fenghuo, the core is love and intrigue.