Great Xia: A Barrett from the Start

It's too natural to take it for granted. The feudal dynasty would kill a thousand people who were suspected of being craftsmen without letting one go.

This introduction looks like the contents of a pornographic book

This setting is a bit retro, and the protagonist and supporting characters have become a bit intellectual. I feel that I can rely on Sha Diao happy writing or Xiaobai Shuang writing. The writing is not terrible, just find the writing style that suits you.

Three golden chapters. The first chapter at the beginning persuades people to quit and forcibly demoralizes them. There are many unreasonable things and it feels like a piece of writing. It is not suitable for me to say goodbye.

I'll save you two months first. I hope I can read two hundred chapters in two months.

The opening introduction alone discouraged me from quitting, let alone the content.

It's another reincarnation. Special forces in another world were a cliché in web novels many years ago.

Chapter 65 adds a system little lolita, which is a bit discouraging.

The front is okay. Just behind. You created a Western underworld and seduced the protagonist. The pig's feet are killing themselves. There was also an obsession. Was rescued. And the whole Meng Po soup. No memory. Really convinced. You are so abrupt this whole time. It just so happens that there is a fee. Then I won't watch it. 88

Overall, the article is readable