The Coach on the Court

Delete that Su Yuqing part. The protagonist is currently in American body; forcing a connection with China will only be awkward. For example, what would you, as a public figure friendly to China, have done if the Yugoslav embassy had been bombed in 1999? It would be better to let China disappear from the public eye.

After chapters 200-something, I couldn't understand it anymore. The constant switching between the system space and the real world was unsettling. Was it necessary to make the system's presence so over the top, or was it just forced filler? A quieter, more relaxed writing style with occasional little surprises would have been much better.

Kerr is just an open three-point shooter, what's so great about him?

Why did you choose a foreign protagonist? Is the target audience international?

I want to be the number one hater, the most ruthless kind.

What kind of nonsense is this? Can't we just play ball?

Why bring up the Celtics? What does it have to do with the plot? It's completely baffling to me.

It will be even slower after signing the contract. Qidian will stop giving you recommendation slots after 200,000 words before the book is published. My personal suggestion is to accumulate more drafts, ask the editor for other authors' contact information and request chapter recommendations, and also make the layout of the first few chapters a little more comfortable before proceeding.

The concept was good, which was what kept me watching. But seeing the cards showing O'Neal shooting threes 😅😅😅 became unbearable. I'm quitting.

The concept is good—a protagonist with a strong personality battling the basketball god in the NBA—but there are too many inexplicable plot points. A woman suddenly appears, a genius just appears out of nowhere, and they inexplicably start dating. He inexplicably plays one-on-one with Jordan. It feels like the author just came up with something on a whim; the plot lacks any build-up and is basically all random.