They All Came to Repay the Favor

My personal opinion on Lava's writing skills: To be honest, Lava's writing skills are too crooked. Almost all of his skill points are focused on comments and YY on ACG character drawings. If it is a group of water, it will definitely be unfavorable, but the writing puts aside this highlight. . . Just don't say it. So don't always think about difficult actions such as transformation and originality. I recommend focusing on daily comics and comics. The original characters are really not original enough to be cute. If you find some ACG characters who can talk about it to death, you will be treated like a bunch of people.

It just felt boring to me. I tried looking back at the chapter titles and then skipping to read, but it had no effect. This shows that the connection between the plot and the previous life is very weak. There are several scenes that do not promote anything. The dialogues in the whole film are not funny or relaxing to watch. It is just boring, but the introduction is very attractive to me. I just want to read the story of the past life and the collision with this life, so I don't I want to delete it. It's too boring and I don't want to read it. I have conflicting feelings. I have to write it this way to be more relaxed or too funny. It's a bunch of boring dialogues and it's fatal that I can't feel the three-dimensionality of the characters. I can't stand up and feel the charm of the characters. It's a pity to abandon it because it's tasteless. I desperately want to read the same type of articles.

Aren't you going to write a ship girl book? You are the only one in the entire internet that appeals to my taste. Continue to look forward to your Kanniang articles

Although it feels inappropriate to publish it in this book, does anyone still read Kanniang's book? I read Lava's Kanniang book, and the stationery was all from 18, 19, 20, and I felt like I was alone and alone. It felt like no one cared about me.

Suddenly on a whim, I went back to read the free chapter of Lost, only to find that I didn't know when it was 50 years old. Although Lost was a pirated copy after finishing the book, the last two books have been fully ordered. This ban is really confusing.

Now that I have taken office, please take good care of me. As is the old rule, let's build a harmonious book review area together.

In fact, you can try "Looking for the Lost Ship Girl Remastered Edition"

Bai Suzhen really can't beat Dragon Girl. Even if her cultivation level is the same, the physical difference is too big. One is a dragon and the other is a snake. Bai Suzhen might not be able to be hung up and beaten.

Posted, it's such a classic. I had nothing to do with the first few books. I was hesitant at the end. It made me super unconfident. The main character I wrote was basically the same. I opened each book several months apart without any plan. I just put it all in the center.

What's going on with Dafeng now😂? Sit-ups in the coffin, at least give me an explanation, is Cavin? Don't want to write if your grades are not good? Or was he really asked by his family to do something else? At least I wrote down what happened at the end of the chapter. It hurts to lie down like this and jump around every now and then.

I watched Dafeng become more and more lazy, and it was a sign that he wanted to be a eunuch. Looking at the comments in the comment area, there are a lot of good and bad. Some of them do have some truth, some of them are just full of cool ideas, and some of them seem to be sincere and sincere, but they are all prejudices. Dafeng has written many books so far. There are many eunuchs who are frustrated, and there are also those who are ordinary and happy. From several of Eunuch Dafeng's books, it can be seen that Dafeng wanted to write an original story - but it always came to nothing. Putting aside the quality of his works, for an author, writing an original story is what everyone wants to do. "I have something in my heart that I want to tell the world." This is exactly the case, and it is normal and appropriate. Therefore, Dafeng's decision is a reflection of an author's inner vision. She started out as a writer of fan fiction, but after pursuing so many books, I think everyone knows Dafeng's style - a master of daily literature, it is true that it is difficult to say that it is inconsistent with Shuiwen. The reason is that the relationship between the two is inclusive. After thinking deeply, you will see that there is no distinction between you and me, just like the two ends of a ruler. Therefore, there is no need for those who say how good her writing is. Except for newcomers, we are all old readers. If you really don't like it, why talk about it till now. What's more, do they really not like it in their hearts? Three people become a tiger. Finally, I have to say something. A reader commented in the comment area that there are indeed merits in the female protagonist and male protagonist, especially Bai Suzhen. But for me personally, I just read your daily articles. There is no water or no water, only more or less. Furthermore, the friendship between gentlemen is as light as water. In fact, it is like drinking water and knowing whether it is warm or cold. But when it comes to living, it doesn't matter whether Dafeng is a eunuch or not. What I pursue is people, never a certain book - even if I like it very much. As long as you are here, the stories will continue to flow. I will always support you, okay😘

I feel like the results of this book will not be very good. I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter. Hmm, I don't really know how to put it. I just saw that the protagonist wanted to live forever and become an immortal. After watching it, I had no desire at all. Many of the people who like to read your books prefer daily writing. It is better not to write about cultivating immortals or fighting. To provide an LSP idea, if the protagonist wants to live forever, he can go through dual cultivation. Because modern spiritual energy is too rare and difficult to cultivate, it can only be practiced through dual cultivation.

Whether it's life or death, it's time to come out and say a few words. I've been thinking about it for so long. For me, I still like this book very much. If you want to cut it, I have no choice but to leave it alone, but don't hang on like this, you've been thinking about it for long enough!

The eunuch just said a word to the eunuch, but what happens if the eunuch also gives an accurate letter? Update every few days

Is the author's surname Su? The protagonist of each book is Su X🙂

The character of the male protagonist is really strange. He always emphasizes that he is not interested in women and does not want to have girlfriends. He also flirts with them and finally wants to open a big harem. It is a bit annoying. Isn't this a pure and hypocritical character? I don't know why I want to write such a character who rejects women in the early stage and is afraid of being interested in women. In the later stage, there is a really attractive male protagonist.

Nowadays, everyone is too impetuous. What they pursue is invincible or super expansion at the beginning. They subscribe without thinking and then talk about it. There are a lot of people who start high and go low. I like this kind of slow-heat type very much. Come on, author.

Think about it, no matter what Dafeng writes now, we will bring it into the ship R. How will Dafeng feel? Just like He Shen, everything he played made him think of He Shen, and Li Yunlong thought of Italian cannon in everything he played.

Dafeng became the butler who deposed the dragon yesterday.

Don't blindly pursue originality. You can also develop other aspects. Since you can't escape the pit of ship girl, then integrate into it.

So when a new book is released, Dafeng is the only eunuch several times, and I am very much looking forward to the author of the new book. I still look through those two volumes of Ship Girl from time to time.

I just discovered this book recently. I just started reading it and am looking forward to it. As a result, the author suddenly gave up... To be honest, this is a long book that needs to be written. If you follow this pace, it is best to update the word count. The slow plot is not a problem at the beginning because the audience and market are there, just keep writing. If there is no plot, it is better to think of some background stories or a whole setting to be added to the text to make the world view more complete (which is roughly equivalent to an outline). Generally speaking, when the world view is improved, ideas will come by themselves Also, you can try to find great authors to ask for chapter recommendations. Based on my observation, it seems that most authors don't mind teaching others or helping with chapter recommendations.

Why don't you do some Azur Lane, after all, they are too big, or you can ship R old timer to meet the Azur parallel world, double happiness

Dafengda, it's the eighth anniversary of Ship R. Listening to the music of the game's 8th anniversary port night makes me miss the touch that your first book brought me. Have you had a good rest? I'll update soon when you're well rested.

Dafeng writes a new book. Remember to kick me 😭

Mu Da Mu Da, your destination is the ship girl, don't resist, tell me, please write about the ship girl.

Waiting for Duanhou's story about a ship girl, instead of writing about ship r, it's okay to write about ship b. Let's start another story about ship girl, and it's okay to just write about the flow 😭

How about writing about Ark? I feel like Ark lacks a daily novel.

I was short of books today and then I remembered that I had bought this book. I didn't expect it to be dead. And why didn't the author notify me when he published a new book?

Personally, I feel that the writing is okay, fresh and natural, and not straightforward. Some people say that the character portrayal is not very good, but I think there are 1,000 Hamlets in the hearts of 1,000 people. They just do not meet the perfect image in your hearts. I have been reading the book for a long time, maybe five or six years ago, right? The more I read the book, the more irritated I became. I couldn't bear it at all. I gave up as soon as there were some flaws. However, this book actually made me continue to read it even though it had some flaws. Maybe it's because I personally like this type of novel, but I think it is indeed okay, at least not as bad as you think. Then I hope the author can achieve something in the new book. Don't let it be a bad ending, don't be a bad ending, don't be a bad ending. Say important things three times. Once the knife is in hand, cut off the rotten dog! ! ! !