I Raised the Female Knight to Be a Dead Otaku

I believe that most of the people who read this book have come here to find shipgirls before, so when we read this book, most of them will apply to the characters in the previous book. Vera corresponds to Bei Zhai, Sister Weila corresponds to Bismarck, there is also Lebi Lizard who is greedy for money, and De De who increases her cup size by 2 cups. But aside from these, this book does restrict the development of this book, because many book friends have not read the book "Looking for a Ship Girl", and are not very clear about many plots, so when they read this book, they feel that it is just daily life, without any sense of substitution. According to other novels, Speaking of the template inside, the main plot is to become the strongest in the world, and then add various cool points to fill it in. Each section has a small goal, and the monsters and upgrades are all to improve the completion of the main plot. 100% Completion is the end of the book. Other hidden threads are not mentioned, they are just to add cool points. The main thread of looking for a ship girl is to find the lost ship girl. The goal of each section is to build the popularity of the tutelary mansion. At each stage, more ship girls can know about the tutelary mansion and then come back to the tutelary mansion. The hidden line is **Abyssal Yamato (stripped of Deepsea Yamato). As for the main goal of this book: I don't know yet. Currently, I have seen more than 80 chapters of small goals, to turn Wei La into a otaku, which is basically completed. Hidden line: unknown So many book friends basically don't know what the next goal of this book is after seeing Wei La become a otaku. It's just a daily text, so what Lava needs to do next is to let everyone understand what the main line of this book is, and the hidden thread running through this book, to give everyone something to look forward to. If it's just a simple daily text, I'm really worried. I hope my suggestions can help Lava.

It's almost over. Can you make the male protagonist's character more likable? It looks so awkward. I still don't understand why this male protagonist can have a harem.

I read a lot of books. After reading "The Prosperity", I now like to read daily novels the most. This book is really good. I hope the author can update it soon.

Thoughts for older readers Come on, the author, please keep writing. Although I don't have high literary literacy, I read a lot of books but rarely post book reviews. Firstly, I feel that I am not good enough. Secondly, I forget almost all the books I read and can't even remember their names. But Dafeng's writing really appealed to my taste. The last one I felt was an ancient unfinished novel (NB), and the next time I stared at the author was Fat Bread's Demon King and Priest series, that's the only one in the series. I haven't read Fat Bread's new books since, and I feel that the previous shortcomings of his later books have been magnified and the text is too dense. Maybe it's because I don't like it. I don't know how many more books I have written now. Ever since I discovered Dafeng, I feel that the writing is too good for my taste. I like this kind of daily writing so much. Now, the daily writing is either covered with a layer of skin or Japanese light novels are strong, so I don't like it. The latest chapter: Making a Phone Call. If other people wrote this chapter, they would probably be sprayed to death or called crazy, but Dafeng didn't feel comfortable at all here. There is no key point in writing so much and there are just so many meaningless words. It is estimated that no one will read it. I wish Dafeng success in writing and better health. .

I just read this book: What's so weird, Dafeng hasn't written a book for so long, and the sentences don't make sense. After reading 10 chapters: Hmm... I don't know what to say, but I believe in Dafeng and continue reading After reading 20 chapters: Eh... It's kind of interesting, shit, there are still party struggles... No, I want them all (clenches fists) After reading 50 chapters: Hmm... After reading all the prosperity, plainness is precious. After reading 100 chapters: I feel like I can't live without it Now: No daily 16th hour after update... Miss Vera

I think the author writes this kind of daily life which is very beautiful, but when he writes about magic and fantasy, it becomes boring

I'm here to fulfill my promise and write a book review. The first thing I have to mention is some of the shortcomings of the previous Lost. Lost is a very interesting book, this cannot be denied, but it also has some shortcomings. Sometimes it's too wordy. It's obvious that these descriptions have been mentioned before, but it starts again within a few chapters. This affects the viewing experience a bit, but I still felt a little reluctant to leave it when it ended. In this book, there is no such shortcoming so far. It has been pushing the main plot. The emotional description is very good and the personality is relatively distinct. To be honest, I have read a novel with very good character descriptions called Hardguy's Fantasy Adventure. Dafengsang's description of daily life is undoubtedly very easy to calm down, warm, peaceful and everyday. Don't Follow the Crowd is like a fast food novel. The main character is very funny and awkward, and his character has ups and downs. To be honest, I still like ordinary people, so I gave up on the fast food novel after reading it. I hope Da Feng-sang can grasp the character image and personality well. The character image is the flesh and blood of a novel. Of course, it's not that the character portrayal of Daifeng-san is not good. After all, I liked it very much. I just hope that the characters can be more fleshed out and more unforgettable.

Therefore, if the author is afraid that the novel will involve harmonious points, he can learn to set the background of the story in an imaginary way, or move it to Japan, so that he can write whatever he likes.

After reading Chapter 40, I thought about it, and the content is probably about playing Civilization, playing Dark Souls 3, recommending Jojo, and preparing to play Sekiro. The writing is not that good, and the dialogues are nothing new, probably just posting jokes about cheating on newbies. The idea is very simple, probably to teach people how to get addicted to games. So this recommendation number really confuses me. Could it be that there is something interesting written behind it?

My favorite book is free for a limited time, which always makes me feel uncomfortable.

Huh, this theme reminds me of Annan Show

Vera is too cute, awsl, I love it, I will vote for it when I get the monthly vote

Meditation... I spent an evening reading it, it's quite subtle. It was so weird in the later stage. He was talking about looking for a job while deposing people, which was a bit... Emmmmm, Beizhai is also good at drawing notebooks. If it doesn't work, he can be a vtuber. It just doesn't look very comfortable. I hope to see changes.

I read 20 chapters and wrote and wrote just two people in a room playing games. This is more boring than me looking for novels.

Who grabbed the first investment? I am third

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Coming, coming! It's a new book by the talented beautiful girl writer Dafeng!

After reading the comment section, I feel that the generation gap between old book friends and new book friends is a bit big. Most of the comments on the article by old book friends are positive, and it can be seen that they all like this book very much. New book friends feel (only my personal opinion) that it is a little impetuous. If you are used to reading cool novels, you may feel a little uncomfortable reading this book. Most of them are dissatisfied with the useless male protagonist, the female protagonist who is obviously so strong but a deadbeat, and the character issues of the new characters. But to be honest, Jia An's character is very real, so real that many readers have a strong sense of empathy. In addition, it seems that many people don't like Su Ran. Maybe... They have been hurt? (Laughs) But when you calm down and read it, you will find that what is written in the book is very close to life, and every interesting thing in life seems to have been recorded. Of course, there may be some readers who just like more exciting novels. After all, everyone has their own preferences, so I don't care about that type of readers. This book review has been written intermittently from around 4pm to now (with various calls to work in between), and the central idea I want to express may have changed. At first, I felt quite angry after reading some of the comments. They said that this character has personality problems, that his behavior is unreasonable, and so on. There are a bunch of seemingly reasonable questions. First of all, in reality, perfect people do not exist. Such people only appear in novels, comics, animations and other works. Some people praise novels with such characters if they are well written, and some people criticize if they are bad. Right, it's just different personal preferences. So, in a novel that has already specifically stated the tone of the novel, I say that I don't like reading this kind of waste and that this kind of behavior is wrong. Who would do this in reality? I think this kind of behavior is not good. If you want to discuss the plot and characters of the book, that's fine, you're more than welcome. But if you weren't here to discuss it, and you were just taking out the trash, this one doesn't look good, and that one doesn't suit your taste, was it written for you by an emotional author? This is like making a pot of soup in a restaurant that tastes good. People with strong tastes ignore the feelings of others and say: "This pot of soup tastes too bad, **, bad review! You need to add more salt, your soup must meet my taste!" This is a bit unfair. Those who have read the book review should be able to roughly understand who I am talking about. Of course, my metaphor is a bit excessive, and that person may not be as serious as I said. The comment section of that book review was also quite harmonious. Basically, it just said kindly that if this book is not your cup of tea, you can change it. Some book friends also analyzed why Dafeng wrote that way. Personally, I felt it was quite harmonious. But it's different in the eyes of people with their own thoughts. All your book friends are evil people, and they express a few opinions and so many people attack them. As soon as I read the book, it was not very good (this is probably what I mean), so I gave up and stopped reading it. Stars, stars, stars (expletive), I want to curse people. Regardless of the discussion atmosphere of the review, I simply think that the book is not good because the book friends' words and deeds are not good. This is really full of questions. I don't even want to use metaphors or examples. I feel like I am not very good at communicating this kind of thinking. There is also the atmosphere, which is obviously good (some book friends may not have a good temper, but basically they just plainly say that you can leave without reading, and no one will stop you). Fei feels that the comment area is weird and messy. If he says anything bad about the author, everyone will diss him (I guess it is spelled correctly), and then he posts in the comment area: The comments are really bad (big bold, I don't have ghs), then you are very brave, jumping out to scold me? That's pretty much all I've written, not much to say. It's just that everyone can read the novel with a calm mind. I think this book is mainly about daily life, and Dafeng's ability to write about daily life is also very good. Let's read the book in harmony and discuss it in harmony. One update every day is not enough_(´ཀ` ∠)__ Without Vera, I want sl_(´ཀ` ∠)__

Don't be afraid, author, write boldly. Even a person like me, who doesn't play in the second dimension or is a ship girl, can read it with gusto. I have read a few daily novels before, but they are just monster-fighting and upgrading flows disguised as daily novels. But your book is exactly what I want to read about daily life: the lives and thoughts of ordinary citizens who are decadent but contented, the green trees beside the highway, the winding overpasses, the nightlife in the city, and every bit of trouble and happiness. Don't we want to see a nerdy general who looks tough but actually longs for ease and comfort in her heart and needs someone to compensate her for a happy childhood? What we want to see is, isn't it a small citizen protagonist who is a little lazy and decadent, but also kind and eager? Maybe what I see is different from what the author or other readers see, but there is no doubt that I approve of this book. Both authors and readers have a ruler in their hearts. Some people have longer rulers, some have shorter rulers, some have more precise scales, and some have more casual scales. If the rulers match up, it's a match. If they don't, they may not get along. The book friend named Yue Guangsha may not be very popular, but thank you for putting forward your opinions in this circle. The Internet literature circle is huge, and everyone has his own place. I hope you find the book that suits you. Personal thoughts, poor literary talent and a bit incoherent. But to sum it up, there is only one sentence: radish and green vegetables, everyone has their own preference. Happy New Year!

， Like the Lost Book Review Area, the new book review area also welcomes rational discussion. However, the behavior of playing the trumpet without thinking and playing the rhythm will definitely be dealt with. There is a troll below who plays a trumpet and has been permanently banned. If there is another troll who forms a group with a trumpet and sets the rhythm, he will not be tolerated once he is discovered. One warning, two gags, and permanent banning for persistent behavior. At the same time, please pay attention to the tone and wording during discussions, and personal attacks and sarcastic comments will be dealt with equally. Because we will not be stationed 24 hours a day, I hope you will work together. If you find any disharmony, please @me in time and I will deal with it as soon as possible. I hope that everyone can work together to change the atmosphere and environment of the new book review area to the right path. I would like to express my gratitude to you all in advance, thank you.

The one the ship girl saw, 😏

Does anyone else want to take advantage of the supply ship? You don't even call me when a new book opens! Only now do I know! Please report first and will continue to support Vera Dafeng in the future.

Harem Love, although I haven't started watching it yet, I felt relieved when I saw people talking about harem. I've read this book. His daily writing skills are very strong. The author writes according to his own wishes, just don't commit the taboo of stock trading or just flirting but not accepting it. It is not easy to write harem novels at a time when there are single heroines, monk novels are rampant, and moralists are rampant. Come on, author, keep at it.

1. There is nothing interesting about these two people at all. The interesting point in this book is the girlfriend from another world, and these two people are not related at all; 2. Apart from being beautiful, these two people have no charm. Su Ran is just a vase, very frivolous and utilitarian, while the younger sister has no otome temperament at all. Just like a fake; 2. The relationship between these two people and the protagonist is very awkward. Normally, the protagonist has nothing to attract the beautiful natives. The author insists on forcing these two to join the gang, directly portraying them as a slut and a slut. Su Ran is very scheming, and the sister is completely psychopathic. It is recommended to return to the topic! Write about a girlfriend from another world! It is reasonable and interesting for the protagonist to use all the comforts and pleasures of modern civilization and his own kindness and tolerance that are different from men from other worlds to capture his girlfriend from another world! Don't write about joining the Earth's superpower organization, which makes the protagonist's abilities less unique and exposes the protagonist. It's just an easy way to make money. It's unnecessary. I want to build a base, use alchemy to refine a small amount of gold as a source of funds, and then use otherworldly technology to develop industries, such as contracting large areas of land in the countryside to grow improved varieties of fruits, or more complex manufacturing of beverages, cosmetics, and health products. Wouldn't it be nice to use the money earned to build a paradise in the base to raise lolita?

Author, please, please give me more 😭 Starting point Nowadays, everyone criticizes the harem and everyone hates the heroine. There are not many authors who dare to write daily stories with multiple heroines, and even fewer who can control this kind of daily writing. There is really a shortage of books 😭

There was a Chinese doctor working in a certain tribe in Africa. One day, the local chief came to him angrily and said, "Why did one of my wives give birth to a child with yellow skin?" The doctor was panicked, and after thinking for a while, he said, "Look at that sheep outside. The other sheep are white, but it is black..." The chief pointed a gun at the doctor and said, "As long as you don't tell anyone, the matter with my wife will be over."

Dafeng's writing is very good, but the character development of the protagonist is really not good. At least as a man, as the protagonist of a novel, character issues are really important. His IQ is not enough and his EQ is low. Although he has super powers, he still wants to be ordinary, but! But! Do you want a high salary, but don't want to put in the effort you deserve? Do you want to be in a state of vacillation between a spiritual bureau and a foundation? Especially when you confirm your relationship with Vera, what's so shameful about it? Consider many aspects? Influence other people's feelings? In reality, all the people I know with this kind of personality are scumbags, really. Please, Dafeng, please set up the character of the protagonist carefully. The reader will not affect the plot in your mind, but you can't let the protagonist's trash-like character affect the mood of the reader. I gave up several times, picked it up and read it again, and was poisoned by the character of the protagonist again. . . Really, this character should be the main factor that makes most readers abandon the book. It is okay for the protagonist to be gentle, considerate and have low EQ, but hesitation and acting like a little girl in everything is really poisonous. Apart from being as lustful as a man, you might as well just write a lily novel to make it more attractive. I ended up reading it and ended up dying at chapter 160. Well.

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Daily writing can be said to be one of the most difficult types of writing. It is really difficult to make daily writing interesting, let alone long daily writing. Maybe we can consider a method similar to farming flow for the next book? Like the shipgirl version of letting go of the witch? Dafeng will still support Dafeng's next book as long as the eunuch doesn't. Just come on. . .

Formatting is very important when writing online articles. It is best to keep the number of words in a paragraph within 30 words. The author has written paragraphs so densely packed that many people really have no desire to read them.