The World Begins with Crane Fist

The setting of internal strength declining into internal martial arts is too cliche and too intellectually depressing.

You have to write down things that travelers should know, common sense.

In the world of Once Upon a Time, there are also bright and dark powers. Don't you know the protagonist? He's not a fake time traveler, isn't he?

What do you think about cleaning up Yu Canghai? I can accept it if you clean up Yue Buqun, but Yu Canghai really can't accept it.

To be honest, Neigong and Neijiaquan are different in concept.

In the world of martial arts, it's nonsense to talk about martial arts ascending to the world!

After falling under one person, the protagonist is still a hundred years old. Not at all calm, not at all in a state of mind, not looking like a Taoist, and doing all your morning and evening classes in vain? I hope the characters are more mentally mature! Can people with a mental age of over 100 still use modern perspectives to compare ancient situations with some intelligence?

Huashan is nearly 2,000 kilometers away from Fuzhou. Yue Buqun's legs must be jet-type.

Don't be afraid of old routines, as long as you write well and feel good, come on!

I suggest the author rewrite a book about Hexianliu in Martial Arts

The products produced by the studio must be junk!

Do you have to fight with bare hands if you don't have a sword?

Kneel down and lick the male protagonist, and go to Wudang to give him the Nine Yang Magic Skill. It's so disgusting.

I really don't understand the main character's operation. It's a bunch of rubbish. I suspect that you didn't bring your brain and IQ with you when you traveled back and forth. You lived like a dog for seventy or eighty years. You beat a tutu and almost died. Go to find out information and inform the other party that I'm going to visit you. What are you doing? Just go and give the sword manual to your master.

The writing is very good. There are very few people who write about being proud of other sects. They are all about Huashan! This one is very good! I hope you can write well and don't want to be a eunuch.

The most annoying thing is Swordsman,,,, not one of them

Zhu Tianwen had better make up for Goldfinger. After all, writing cannot be smooth sailing. If there are any loopholes, Goldfinger can take the blame.

After traveling for so long, I am still a eunuch! There isn't a single girl, what's the use of eggs... I'm lonely, empty and cold

Changing the world starts with children. Personally, I don't like watching it, so I'll leave.

I think this book is good! It's okay to have good evidence, but it's better than direct initiation from the system.