Taishang Tao Zhuan

The setting of the dungeon is somewhat new, but the protagonist is too naive. It feels like he is just playing a game. I don't know when he will truly realize that he is in a world of cultivating immortals.

To be honest, I don't understand the protagonist. What does the Dong Family Medicine House's closing down have to do with the protagonist? He is so caring. The protagonist himself is just a part-time worker who wants to worry about the boss, and he takes so many risks to help others kill people. The key point is that the boss of the medicine shop doesn't know yet. I don't know what the point of licking someone like this is.

The most important thing in the mortal stream is not Gou, the most important thing is that from an ordinary person to an immortal, in addition to strength, there should also be a gradual change in mood. If you can't beat him, and if you continue to be stubborn if you are in danger, Old Devil Han is not an old devil in the first place. He appears to be an old devil or a thief. How pathetic was the original world of ordinary people who traveled through time.

It's okay, don't pick and choose, every book on cultivating immortals cannot be a biography of mortals cultivating immortals, and Hao Yu is a true immortal. This book is okay, as an old bookworm has verified, I can read it. Goldfinger is a little different.

This plot is really disgusting. The protagonist just went to work for Yao Lu of the Dong family, and then Yao Lu of the Dong family was suppressed by other Yao Lu through commercial means. Remember, it was commercial means, and there was no murder. Then the protagonist went to kill people. The main reason is that the protagonist was a part-time worker, and he didn't have any friendship with the boss when he traveled back in time. I can't understand why.

Goldfinger is so good, 🐷 can take off, the main character is just like Xiaobai, his mentality is completely unchanged and he is speechless

Please give me a dozen employees like the protagonist. Laugh, I guess there are no business rivals anymore, just give me the bones🦴... No, you don't even need to give me the bones, just use me as a slave, hahaha

I don't understand the meaning of the protagonist's experience in those dungeons. He practices swordsmanship and killing skills in the dungeons. When he returns to reality, he is afraid of wolves and tigers. He doesn't have the mentality of seeking wealth and wealth in danger. He wants to report someone when he is fishing, but he has lived like a pig in two lifetimes? I don't know what kind of protagonist the author wants to create, and there are also those messy copies, including calligraphy practice copies, which I can't understand.

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw the outer disciple giving the protagonist a poison pill, and he died from the poison.

Does the author have any misunderstanding about alchemy? How could the word Tao not include skills? Once you know it, you know it! Oh, just a puppet of the system

I have suffered so many losses, but I don't have a long memory. I have no vigilance at all. I deserve to be cheated all the time.

The migrant workers kill competitors for the boss's store, Bullfrog.

I feel like there is something wrong with the early setting and logic. Can't a high-ranking monk do something like roadblocking and robbery? Leave it to you two? At least give me some explanation like a secret method! Secret methods such as running fast, hiding aura, and warning. The co-authored patrol team is just a decoration. Why don't they make such a huge profit themselves? What are the benefits of hanging in Danlu? Level 5 is calculated as level 8. If you miss it, you will die, and there is no way to save your life. What are you trying to do? ? ? Goldfinger generates dungeons. If you don't refine elixirs, you have to find other serious ways to make money to collect various dungeons. All by robbing? ? ? Once you meet a boss who is bored or traveling around the world, you will be in trouble. It doesn't even need to be too high. Once the ninth-level Qi practitioner suddenly takes action, the woman won't have time to stop him, and the protagonist is doomed.

It's a bit like a Hail Mary, which is off-putting.

I could barely read it at the beginning, but by chapter 13 and 14 it was so disgusting that I lost my mind as I wrote it.

The settings of the book are quite good, but the author is not suitable for writing female characters. He can try to reduce the appearance and length of female characters as much as possible.

😁It was pretty good before Chapter 14

I think it's okay. Why isn't it popular?

After a hundred chapters, the book is getting better and better, so I recommend reading it. Is it a matter of writing skills? In the early stages, it was a bit boring to read, but there was significant improvement in the later stages. The problem now is that the grand world view is about to unfold, but the story lacks a sense of space and has not yet been able to jump out of the small area around it. This results in a very short story line and small holes are filled in immediately. . . But the VIP chapter is pretty good to read, I hope the story will unfold as soon as possible. Come on, author!