Some Unscientific Bourne Identity

I feel that the character background introduction is too long and affects the proportion of the single chapter. I understand the idea of ​​fleshing out the characters, but it affects the smooth narrative of the story.

The writing is quite good, um, very good, very, very, very good!

The writing in the front is quite good, but the fighting power suddenly swells in the back, which makes it boring to watch. You originally wrote that the level of power was not that high. It was quite interesting to see the protagonist use mortal means to solve problems. Later, you were suddenly told that the protagonist is the son of King Yama, and the mortal battlefield was suddenly upgraded to a fight between gods...

Well, I think a lot of what readers say is still very important. I want to take a little time to read it every day, but as the chapters become more and more, I decided to open a Q&A post. From now on, if you have anything you want to ask me or want to complain about, please reply politely to this post. I will read it every day as long as I have time to make communication easier. So, let me first ask and answer myself: Question: What is going on in your book? Why is it that one moment, The Bourne Supremacy seems to be just like mortals solving problems, and the next moment it is Hell, Jade Emperor, Pharaoh and Angels? What on earth did you write? Answer: This book has one main line and two main battlefields. The first one is the intelligence secret war that combines magic and supernatural style in the intelligence system. Many readers may have seen that the core of the secret war is the possibility of the existence of a different world brought by the protagonist as a traveler; The second one is the battlefield between extraordinary people and gods. And whether you are a Hammer fan or a Hammer kid, you may have noticed that the setting of gods and magic here is very similar to Warhammer. In other words, gods and magic are products of the soul power of creatures in the physical universe, whose emotions and beliefs give rise to these powers. But, here I have not only evil gods, not only dark wars, but also light and kindness. Good and evil, order and chaos, the extraordinary battlefield catalyzed by the intertwining of the beliefs and emotions of living beings, this is the second So, it has both, and I promise, it will be combined well, I have this confidence Volume 1, It is equivalent to using storytelling to lay the background and hypothetical keel for the next series of stories. Therefore, there are the cyanide gas assassinations, reconnaissance and counter-reconnaissance that you have seen, and there are also extraordinary battles in which King Yama and Pharaoh fight side by side. This is just like those CG cutscenes at the beginning of the game. After watching it, everyone will probably know: Oh, there may be these in the future This is probably the feeling I hope I can communicate better with you here in the future Sincerely, Kodakya

As soon as I finished watching it, I asked weakly if there was a female protagonist.

How many times have I been misunderstood by this ridiculous title. Before I clicked on it, I thought it was a fanfic about a railgun.

It's so petty. For such an important person, why should he play The Bourne Supremacy and go directly to the People's War? The biggest advantage of fighting locally is unlimited manpower. All enterprises, institutions, public security organs, law enforcement agencies, universities and middle schools, except for those who must be on duty, all wear work clothes and school uniforms to go shopping in the streets, take cars, trains, and planes to other cities. The protagonist's action route is decided by himself, and only a few people know the multiple destinations. This directly breaks through the surveillance limits of other countries.

What to say, in my humble opinion, the idea of ​​combining espionage and transcendence plus time travel is certainly a good idea, but it always gives me a weird feeling, especially the temptations and conflicts between the protagonist's extraordinary republic and the native country in these chapters. It is very awkward, just like a distinguished intelligence officer being censored by an organization. I can understand it but cannot emotionally accept it (from an ordinary person's perspective). There is a sense of separation as to whether the protagonist belongs to the Paranormal Republic or his native country. From the plot point of view, the protagonist will definitely serve in the Paranormal Republic in the future, and the environment also determines that the author cannot be more involved in the native country (unless he wants to think about 404).

This book is quite interesting and the plot is interesting, but it is a bit less popular.

It turns out that the villain created in the first half of the volume is the real savior. But I have to say, if this phenomenon of sacrificing others to save the world really exists, then the decline of morality and bottom line is inevitable and in line with objective laws, right?

Reading is an ability, but now I realize that I no longer have this ability. This novel is very similar to the novels I read in high school, especially the Chronicles of Kyushu and Yashe in it, but now I can't read it and skipped reading.

(´｡✪ω✪｡｀)Okay~

I think it's too tiring to watch. There are too many elements.

Is this a new book from Lao Lu?

Awesome, the last time I saw this style of painting was Tomorrow's Dominators. If you don't cut it, I'll order it all and catch up on it.

I've come from the old road. The writing of this book is smooth and the story is great. Come on.

Does this chapter unfold too much? I personally feel that if I write more history, subjectively, the number of words can be improved Objectively, can the image of these 36 people be fuller?

This is really well written. The writing and plot beat 95% of the toilet paper in the starting point. I really shouldn't be unpopular. Come on, author.

Before I saw the life experience, I felt that the writing was weighty. The serious and cold world view description rushed towards me. The characters were heavy and three-dimensional and had an unknown sense of mystery, which made people have a lot of expectations. The description of the life experience felt like a kidney attack for a moment. The sudden change in the style of painting was like a strange thing among the strange, as if part of the game of Thrones had been removed from the artistic processing... The gap is slightly larger, like the pirate Wang Luffy who turned out to be the fruit of the Sun God.

What a pity, the book ended quickly, so I had to give a reward of 3,000 points

The twists and turns in these chapters almost jumped out at me. Although it was foreshadowed, I really admire it! Come on

It's good-looking, with all kinds of two-dimensional jokes - even though I can't understand it, I still find it funny😅The reasoning for solving the case at the beginning is also within the logic of the different world constructed by the author. It is reasonable and reasonable, and I have the desire to read it.

This is a very interesting book, and it is also the first spy book with mythological and fantasy features that I have come across. The King of Hell and the Pharaoh fought side by side, which really amazed me. Come on, author, I look forward to the magnificent world you write.

Ah, a book that I can't support anymore. After reading the final summary, what can I say? If the book is too profound, it will become a niche, and the niche will not be easy to become popular. If it is not 🔥, there will be no subscription and no money. Either you love to generate electricity, or you will read the next book. But it doesn't mean that the book is not good. Mainstream readers or novice readers need to enjoy it every day and don't want to use their brains.

Can you create a group so that some things that can't pass can be put in the group?

The plot is getting more and more exciting. I wonder if there will be any interaction between Lao Pi and the Elf Queen 😁

Why does such an awesome protagonist feel so frustrated all the time? Have you been suppressing it and not releasing it?

It's a bit hard to accept that the fantasy union between things and things is true.

A time traveler who had been pretending to be a time traveler for thirty years suddenly gave up his disguise because he was involved in extraordinary time and was not sure whether there was surveillance. He couldn't understand.

Sometimes the setting is too complicated and it's hard to watch. I just skipped to the part about the protagonist's father and finished it.