Commander's Unlimited Part-Time Job Journey

Take a good look at this book. The rhythm of the story is very well controlled, making people unable to put it down. This is a quality only a great author can have. It gives people the feeling of surprise of seeing fairy grass in the book wilderness after a long absence. I seem to see a new great god rising up. After reading the author's writing process, I feel very inspired. How many aspiring writers will be inspired by the author's story and continue to persevere? I have a feeling that many years later, when facing the annual meeting of Qidian, Kodakya will recall that distant afternoon when he was typing in front of his first book. 🤭

I can understand the writing method of Infinite, but before half of the plot of the first world was finished, it suddenly started to explain the huge world view and the origin of the system. The sudden huge explanation felt a huge difference, which made people feel like I am still reading interstellar fan fiction? Is this coming to an end? The illusion. It is because of this feeling and the huge world view background explanation that the subsequent articles suddenly feel a bit boring.

I only now realized that I had done something wrong with such a good book. Reading it in the middle of the night made my blood boil and I turned on the computer and punched Lei Ritian. Then the machine gun exploded with poison and killed everyone alive 😭😭😭😭

I just saw the author's complaint and I don't know what to say. I can only give some things I can see from the online articles I have read over the years. I hope it will be helpful to the author. First of all, I can say with certainty that there was a big problem with the author's selection of materials for the online article, or that the author did not figure out what the audience of his online article liked to read. Not all worlds can be written in Infinite Stream. Even the main god Infinite Stream will not choose worlds randomly. Basically, it is either popular works or works with similar styles or related to each other. It is rare to string together unrelated works. It is not uncommon to do this. But in that case, the reading preferences of the author and the reader overlap greatly. To put it simply, readers who watch StarCraft/Warcraft don't like to watch Infinite Streaming, unless they are wearing Blizzard Universe/Warhammer series. The other thing is that the author is a bit indifferent when writing the sub-world. It seems that the readers of your book are basically rushing to the interstellar space. But you can look at the proportion of the non-interstellar space to the interstellar space after finishing Blue Steel. The two sub-worlds combined account for more than 50% of the interstellar space. To be honest, it would be much better if you returned to the interstellar world after the Yamato dungeon. The two non-interstellar dungeons would be too slow.

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Does anyone want to read Warhammer science? I want to show the results of three years of working on Warhammer 40k 😏

I have only read Chapter 16 so far. I will let other readers tell me what I am not satisfied with: First, the writing is a bit wordy, with long sentences and large paragraphs often appearing. Although I guess the author needs to create characters and advance the story, this is not conducive to the reading experience of online readers. Second, there are too many typos, which also affects the reading experience. A story with a good intention but too many typos is like a top student writing like a chicken and a crab. It is recommended to do more proofreading and error correction. Third, translating names of people and places requires a convention. Since your book is for mainland readers and the game already has an official translation, it is recommended that you follow the official translation, which will help quickly gather fans; if it is not for reasons such as copyright, insisting on your own translated version will look arrogant and stupid in the eyes of readers. Fourth, don't speak in a neon style, this is a European and American game. Bottom line, even if you can't do a high-end translation, don't suddenly say "Idiot brother". I don't know about others, but I don't want to eat filet mignon with miso soup instead of red wine. If these problems can be solved and improved, I can order them all. If I still remain the same after reading 100 chapters, then I'm sorry, I can only choose to leave. The above.

No matter what you are like, as long as you play RTS, we are friends; no matter what you write, as long as you write about Red Alert, StarCraft, Empire, Warcraft, or Total War, I will give you a reward first. There are fewer and fewer people writing this. It's not easy. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's rare to find a StarCraft novel. After reading more than 100 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. I was too tired to read it. The author's book is too fond of playing and talking about various game animations. He seems to be afraid that others will not understand his description, so he uses other games and animations to explain it. The more you look at it from behind, the more chaotic it becomes.

The author, I have been following this book since March because of the book StarCraft. Something like this happened. I want to comfort the author, but I don't know what to say. I haven't joined the group because I don't know the group number 😥 Most of the monthly votes have been given to the author. Come on, author (I don't know what to say, I support the author but I don't know how to express it) Author, can you reply to me? 😃

What will the Martian Mechanicus do when they see the Transformers on Cybertron?

Typo is Kodak's passive skill. Don't underestimate me, you bastard

I offer incense as I pass by, may this guy evolve into a five-shift beast ヽ( ￣д￣;)ノ Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง support you

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After more than 20 years of existence, the Interstellar series has slowly become a niche. . The quality of the StarCraft series surpasses all games of the same type, but it is a pity that the decline of the entire RTS is unstoppable. In the past six months, I saw on a certain platform that people I was familiar with back then were still live broadcasting StarCraft 2 games. Then download the game and play two games. Let's watch the game. . .

I feel that the hodgepodge of settings written by the author is too confusing and gives me a headache. I can't stand the rest of it anymore. The plot at the beginning on the bug planet is more interesting.

Lord of Dance Phoenix

Potential, but honestly not good enough. The perspective and events are very confusing

The interstellar part is well written, starting from the multiverse is a bit self-explanatory.

Hey hey, the second update is 3000, as I said before it was put on the shelves yesterday, that's all for today, sorry for not having an update, bow The cover has been uploaded. It is an original cover and the author is Potato. Please respect the copyright of this artist and do not reprint it at will. The original picture cannot be uploaded due to size restrictions. If you want to see it, you can only go to the group. This painting was drawn step by step from many drafts. It is really not random. Please do not reprint it at will and respect the artist's hard work---I paid more than 3,000 RMB for this painting~ Mula, Chris, Jinjin Zhengyang, Lama, Pumpkin, 2838 (facepalm), Cynic Varya,... I won't be here - thank you, I have read everyone's name carefully, thank you You can come to the group to see the original cover image~The effect is quite good~

It looks great from the front, but uncomfortable from the back 😭😭

How should I put it, it's a bit regretful, but not too regretful. The story is a good one, but the author can't help it. All I can say is: Kodakya, if you have enough energy, continue writing the article. I'll keep it on the bookshelf waiting for you to continue.

I subscribed to all of them at first, but the more I read, the more confusing it became. The confusion caused by too many elements made me unbearable.

Let's wait for the next one. I hope that the next one will be about pure StarCraft or Blizzard's infinite world view. I really can't stand the rest of this book. There are many characters from other worlds and it's too inconsistent with SC.

It started well. After more than 170 chapters, I started to do tasks and started to stew in a big pot. I put all the vegetables in at once. All the characters have different styles and some are completely different. I am waiting for the author to read a book.

Hiss, at first glance, I thought the heroine's name was Marshal Naia😏😏😏

I found that the author only had one period in a paragraph, so I said it looked weird.

If it were me, I would definitely not let Uncle Ze die. I would help him become a Xel'Naga and become Uncle Ze in cooperative mode. This is not much more reliable than Sister Kai.

What should I do? I feel like I can't stand it at the beginning. (I also put it on the bookshelf to gather dust before, but now I take it out and read it.) It's too embarrassing to see the Renault family's affairs. Can I skip it? I remember seeing him being saved by a star spirit before

It's chaotic, orderly, and the content is mixed without affecting the main line too much. If you can calm down and watch it, this is indeed a good work.