The True Spirit Space of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality

Seeing the extremely sinister plot, instead of doubling and sharing, at least this time I consciously controlled the incredible speed of the cheat. But there are still many problems. For a single woman, the improvement in strength is too rough. The two concubines of Miaoyinmen were able to rise from the late stage of Qi training to the middle stage of Foundation establishment by relying on those foundation-building pills and strong spiritual energy in the protagonist's retreat for just a few years. Then they must have started with dual spiritual roots or a special body! Do you have this qualification to get the protagonist as the island owner of the settlement period? Those are all given to the strong Nascent Soul or the powerful young master! The author should not be addicted to cheating on the protagonist. He always thinks that with a large number of foundation-building elixirs, as long as he is an individual, he can level up quickly. According to the various settings in the original world view, qualifications are far more important than resources. If the qualifications are not enough, the absorption efficiency will definitely be low. One step will be a bottleneck, and you will have to spend a lot of time to upgrade! Qualifications not only include spiritual roots, but the monk's comprehensive quality in all aspects of spirit, energy, and spirit will affect the promotion speed. Otherwise, with the concentration of spiritual energy in the spiritual world and the method of artificial spiritual roots, how can mortals still exist? When there are enemy tribes everywhere, why don't all the people join the army? These two concubines are not young, but they are neither high nor low. 80% Of them have three spiritual roots, their luck is barely there, and their Taoist minds are just like that. It is probably impossible to learn the advanced dual cultivation methods of Miaoyin Sect. They are just passers-by! You, the protagonist, can save people in order not to be cuckolded, but after you rescue them, you still take them as your own and let them know some of the protagonist's magical secrets, and cast all kinds of powerful and incredible true spirit marks on them. Haha, don't forget that the protagonist can only resist and not tear the Yuanying at any time. Don't forget that those Yuanyings will search for souls or control them at any disagreement due to abnormalities and opportunities! The protagonist has not yet learned the profound art of forbidden gods, so he only relies on gold-eating insects. This insect may not be able to capture the person's soul after killing someone, not to mention the possibility of seizing and being taken away! Author, do you want to replay the disgusting and poisonous scene in "Double Power" where Chen Qiaoqian is soul-searched by Yuanying Linghu and then the protagonist's secret is discovered and betrayed? ! These two passer-by A-level women have no effect on the plot after Ji Yin and can only become a burden. Look at the mortal plot, which plot copy fight does not involve one or a group of high-level combatants of the same level being harvested? The protagonist leaves a group of indestructible puppets unused. Isn't it a waste of time and emotion to improve them? The golden elixir only has a lifespan of 500 years, so you can't upgrade them to Yuanying. Even if you don't care about resources, will the ascended protagonist still take them with him in the future? In a meat grinding ground like the spiritual world, they are simply troublemakers! If you really want to take someone with you, just take Xin or find another talented girl who can be of great help, can keep up with her, and can protect herself. In addition, since the true spirit mark can be given, it is best to take it back, otherwise there will be too many consequences. Think about what if your lost whetstone house is discovered by a passing god. Why, do you still want to hold the sky bottle and turn it into a gift like sharing the book? If the enemy takes away a large number of puppets, will the protagonist die? These poisonous points can be avoided by just adding one sentence, and it is recommended to adopt them.

Have tasted poison. I can only say that the author's idea is good, but his writing style is average. The protagonist is neither worldly nor well-informed about maximizing profits. Still a little bit like a little virgin. Not even good grass.

I want to ask, who else has watched it longer than me? Who else? This is not only highly toxic! A book can only be written by a lunatic! Anything with normal logic cannot be written like this! A little analogy: A diner went to a restaurant and ordered a piece of egg fried rice. In order to reflect the economic benefits, the restaurant added sand to the rice. The amount has increased, but still want to eat? The important thing is that the egg is battered, the rice is still sticky, and the salt is uneven. The expressions in this book are very difficult, the reading experience is very consuming, and the reading is not smooth. The plot is also very poisonous! The cheat settings look awesome and are awesome to use, but overall they are very scattered and unsystematic. Whatever is good, he will use it. Already in the Nascent Soul stage, he is still a weakling. Mentally weak. Dependence on external objects. So this novel seems to have nothing new, the writing is poor, and the protagonist is trash. I saw that I cursed in paragraphs more than once.

First time, first.

The real work of the protagonist, Palm of Heaven, was an opportunity given to me by Han Tianzun. If you snatch it away, aren't you afraid that Han Tianzun will slap you to death at some point? Don't grab the opportunity, the protagonist is completely obsessed with profit!

I recently read several other mortal fanfics, including Scientific Cultivation of Immortals, Mortal Immortals, Casual Cultivation, etc. Each protagonist has his or her own characteristics. Luo Hong's various refining materials are not a problem. Lu Yunze's unbridled imagination, extended heaven and earth refining methods, various refining methods are very good. After Wang Li strengthened the little green bottle, he used various fancy operations to lay out the human world with the general trend, and the pattern came up. Now the protagonist's characteristic is that there is no shortage of various things, whether it is materials or elixirs, but his own characteristics are missing. Every time he finds various things to integrate into himself, and there is a lack of creation. Obviously there are a lot of good things, but there is little creation. It stands to reason that whether it is refining weapons or elixirs, there is no shortage of things to practice, but the protagonist always finds other things to use the true spirit mark to brush, and no new things are produced. Compared with other fans, except for the big one, there are very few other exciting points, that is, he is not a new entrepreneur. The author can refer to it, and I hope the author will make progress.

This protagonist is like a fool. He can't fight or do things well. He was raped and taken supplements when he first entered the immortal world. Afterwards, he still behaves like that. He is so careless and careless. He doesn't think about what will happen if others want to kill him. He relies on useless rules, right? After a fight, he pretended to be dead, and said that others did not follow martial ethics and whipped corpses, and the life-saving things were not on his body, but in the thatched hut. He had to rush to wherever he was being chased. The protagonist was too stupid. This is a biography of a mortal cultivating immortality. I am speechless.

It was so poisonous that I couldn't stand it anymore, so I took it. According to the common sense of the five spiritual roots, you can't even break through the fourth level of Qi training. You also let others test your spiritual roots, and you still practice Qi to perfection. You clearly tell others that you have a valuable treasure. If there is an alchemy monk like Nangong Wan in the Immortal Ascension Conference, they will definitely beat you to death, search for souls, refine souls, seize treasures and kill people.

Whether it is doubling the energy. Still this book. They all looked speechless. The things pig's feet can get are so awesome and supreme in other worlds, but when it comes to pig's feet, there is no lower limit. The biggest trick is, but the stupidest pig gets the biggest beating. Obviously there is a hook, but I want to change the plot, but I am afraid. . . . . .

This is one of the most disgusting novels I have ever read. The writing is so bad that I even vomited out the food I ate. What a talent.

Inexplicably, the protagonist is just thirteen years old, and the author arranged for a half-year-old child to be fucked by an evil cultivator for three days and three nights. This plot is just disgusting, right?

The protagonist has no resistance to women. He gives away all kinds of treasures. The women around him have guessed the secret of the protagonist. If he is randomly searched, he will be gone. If this is not the protagonist of Shuangwen, he may have died ten thousand times.

I don't feel like I'm enjoying the writing, and the plug-ins are not used well, so I get tricked frequently! Even things obtained from other worlds can be robbed. Another world is also a one-day trip. After doing something reckless, there is no follow-up. It doesn't feel comfortable and readable after many times. It seems like a separated world. It's really uncomfortable to change the map frequently. There are many skills but no core, etc. There are still many deficiencies that I rely on others to remind me of.

I feel speechless when I see someone who has taken it and still wants to do it again. It's such a waste of so much G. With such a rubbish mentality, have you never seen a woman? A bad-ass protagonist who specializes in supplementing still wants to be supplemented. Only those who have no ability go to the brothels, and those who have the ability don't play with high-end goods.

This is the stupidest doujin protagonist I have ever seen. He has no brains. He looks like a high school student who has never been out of society. He may not be as smart and cautious as high school students nowadays. During the Qi training period, you have to buy magic weapons, but the author actually wrote that someone is selling magic weapons, which is simply outrageous 😅. Li Huayuan has been practicing Tie Jing for more than ten years (Is it an iron Jing? I can't remember clearly). The protagonist takes a big piece of it without thinking about whether there will be foundation building or pill formation to kill him. The plot is similar to a running account, and the more you watch it, the less interesting it becomes.

To sum up: It's too boring, the author just licks the dog, and forcefully disgusts the readers. The woman said "Husband, I want to follow you" and the protagonist basically exposed all the secrets! Still the kind without any emotional drama! Forced nausea.

The writing is too messy and the protagonist's brain is not good either.

Forget it, this book is very well written. Don't write any more books in the future.

Saw a few. I feel like the logic doesn't make sense, and it's a big problem

Everyone is here to have fun, but you are trying your best to deceive the master

It's hard on the eyes to see from the front and I can't understand it.

No matter what, it looks very confusing. The plug-in you wrote does not make people feel happy. On the contrary, it makes the world more chaotic. When traveling through the world, if you watch it quickly, you won't see the time travel. If you watch it slowly, there really won't be anything to see. The story is very interesting and the main character is very interesting. Not happy at all

After reading the book "Mortals Share the Cultivation of Immortality", how can I put it, it was too boring and not satisfying! Because no one can keep up with the protagonist

Cruel people, Wang Chao and his ilk cannot change the past, Han Li is nothing.

This is the first time I see the male protagonist being raped.

What is this written about? Anything written by AI is better than this thing.

In the first ten chapters, various treasures and abnormal behaviors are exposed! The protagonist is still at the fourth level of Qi training, and can he still be alive and kicking? In such a situation, not to mention that the Qi training period is higher than that of the protagonist, it would not be surprising even if the old monster who transformed into a god came out and slapped the protagonist to death!

That's enough for one day, it's not enough to watch. I'm afraid I'll lose it if I keep it.

I would like to recommend my own mortal fanfic "Mortal Old Man Jin Guang, What's Your Business" He traveled through time and became a money-giving boy, Master Jin Guang (later his skills will make him taller, please feel free to take over), and the Immortal Ascension Order in his hand suddenly became hot to hand. What, you are about to face a life-and-death battle with Old Demon Han when you first come here? ! Fortunately, I have a small golden stone. How can you cultivate immortality without relying on false spiritual roots! What, are you looking for Jin Guang? This is me, what do you do?

It's so confusing that I can't stand it.