I'm Really Not Cultivating Immortality

I was full of expectations, and the initial setting was also very good, but it turned out that writing about the best family was so boring 😡 If you like talking about the best people so much, why not just write about farming? What fairy tale lover likes this kind of stinky and long plot?

I suggest the author actually play an RPG before writing a book. This setting is good, but except for the first few chapters, the entire protagonist's character creation collapsed. A real player will not let himself be wronged even if there is no plot. He is a player who can do whatever it takes to complete the task... If you really wrote that you killed a brother in a dark way and then made your mother become a demon and destroy all the enemies who bullied you, I would still think highly of you. The protagonist now doesn't feel as ruthless and refreshing as the first chapter. He is completely useless. Why should he go to the village chief Satomasa for anything? Tsk Now this article... I can only say that the plot is sorry for this initial design. But no cp is still good...

The article on cultivating immortality in the game is written like a farming article. The length of the family probably takes up too much space, and it's a bit long-winded.

The heroine always thought she was playing a game, but after more than ten chapters, her mentality became less and less like a player's, and she felt a bit out of touch. Wouldn't it be better to highlight the psychological and behavioral differences between the player heroine and other people in the real world?

Because I saw that there was no cp, I just jumped in and came in. Thank you for the author＾0＾~. I like this article very much

At first I thought it was a game, hahaha, but after reading it I realized it was not a game. I like this book and want to ask the heroine, will her father change? Looking forward to the reversal of the heroine.

The author asked whether Su Yun would be a little more masculine, and whether Su Yun would be better. No harm, please give me some suggestions.

I like the genre and writing style very much, please support it 😁

I feel like there's a problem with the connection between the chapters, and I don't understand it very well.

It looks good, come on, it's just a little lacking ˃ʍ˂

I don't understand that the heroine, a young girl from the countryside, got the cultivation skills by chance and was taught them to all the children in the village? ? ? The restriction is just a pretentious verbal warning not to spread the word? ? What if the village children, all around ten years old, let it slip? What if other cultivators notice it? When the time comes to touch the heroine, how will the heroine explain where the technique comes from? To be honest, the previous 100 articles were all about family feuds among the village parents. I thought it was quite interesting, but the heroine not only taught the cultivation skills to almost all the children in the village, forget it She even wanted to save her life from the vicious cousin who had been bullying her family before? ? And gave her the few gold ingots he had? ? Even when my own brother joined the army, he didn't give as many gold ingots as he gave to his evil cousin. Can't he be nice to the heroine? He has to be a vicious supporting character and bully the protagonist. Then he will save your life and give him gold 🙂 Is the heroine shaking her m?

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20180428162027196","UserId":316106163}Ahem, author, I'm going to tell you that your book needs an operations officer. Do you want to consider me?

😅The heroine's training has advanced too quickly! Just like riding a rocket, after practicing for more than a year, he has completed the foundation building 😥😥😥 and his friends have all built the foundation. . . . . . Very unreasonable!

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