Across the Heavens, Starting with Hong Kong's Supernatural Tales

Well, the beginning of this novel was quite to my liking, but now the protagonist is almost becoming a fire-fighting tool. Once he becomes a god, the story feels dry and uninteresting.

This book started off well, with interesting back-and-forth battles, but it gradually veered towards becoming an invincible story. It really went astray starting with the development of the organization, and I lost all desire to continue reading. It's a real shame. Hopefully, the author will release a new book soon.

Once you become invincible in your own world, the storyline doesn't feel as appealing as it used to be. I feel this is a common problem with this type of novel. The reason why you can keep reading other people's novels even after reading 1000 chapters is that every time the protagonist becomes invincible, he is given another great enemy, and there is a detailed setting of an even higher realm.

With such a grand scope, involving multiple worlds and a system, yet the protagonist is such a weakling, I have a strong feeling you're going to mess this up.

Name: Zhang Qiaoqiao Gender: Female Race: Oni Talent: Summon: Imp Skills: Illusion, Death Sentence, Claws, Hair, Ghostly Bone Devourer Cultivation Technique: The Book of Escape Techniques Inner Core: The Frost Spirit Orb grants the ability to control all the ice and snow in the world to protect the body, making it impervious to sunlight and any yang-attribute magical artifacts or spells.

The plot is clear, logical, and reasonable, unlike some Hong Kong ghost stories that have no aftereffects whatsoever, as if the characters have superpowers. Who would want to be human then?

The early chapters were really well written; it has the potential to become a masterpiece. The protagonist's way of thinking in the early stages resonated deeply with the audience; he genuinely considered things from the perspective of an ordinary person and drove the plot forward. The sense of immersion was very strong.

I'd been following it closely, and then I saw it was free for a limited time. Well, it's gone off-topic. I initially came for Hong Kong, Southeast Asian, and Taiwanese ghost movies, but what followed was a whole world of time travel, Underworld, and Sweet Home. Author, one Hong Kong ghost movie is enough for you to write a lot. If you're going to write about ghost movies, you should focus! Most readers came for the ghost movies, what's going on after this?

Be patient and keep writing. Don't lose patience halfway through. On Qidian, as long as your writing isn't too bad, the survivors will ultimately be the ones who win.

Read, abandoned. I hate mindless power-down reductions the most.