Across the Heavens, Starting with Hong Kong's Supernatural Tales

What can I say about this novel? The beginning was quite to my taste. Now the protagonist has almost become a fire-fighting tool man. Now that he has become a god, it seems dry and boring.

This book was okay at the beginning, and the writing went back and forth, but in the later period it became more and more invincible. This book started to develop the organization and gradually got sidetracked. I no longer have the desire to read it. It is a pity. I will wait for the author to open a new book.

After my own world gradually became invincible, the plot felt less attractive than before. I feel like this is a common problem with this type of novel. Other people's novels can still be read after reaching 1,000 chapters. Whenever the protagonist becomes invincible, another enemy will be added to him, and there will be a detailed setting of a higher level. The plot must not be cliched and not overlap with the previous plot. The chapters are broken in a special way, making people want to keep reading. The plot of this author's book seems to be bland now.

The layout is so big, including the heavens and the system, but the protagonist is such a novice, I have a strong feeling that you will fail.

Name: Zhang Qiaoqiao Gender: Female Race: Ghost Talent: Summon: Imp Skills: Illusion, Life, Claws, Hair, Ghost Bone Eater Skills: Dunjia Heavenly Book Inner Alchemy: Ice Spirit Pearl can master the ice and snow water in the world to protect the body, and is not afraid of the sun and any magic weapon with yang attribute to damage Ghost Weapon: Flowing Cloud Gauze The treasures in the ghost world contain secret spells that can seduce souls and kill ghosts like swords Image: A beautiful female ghost with long black hair, a phoenix robe and a ribbon Introduction: The ghost bride, longing to be loved, falls in love with the male protagonist in the ghost world and follows him. {"NickName":"Book Friends 2021030110401914508","UserId":211039082}

The plot is clear and reasonable, unlike some Hong Kong ghosts who have no side effects and are just like people with super powers. Who else wants to be a human being?

The early writing is really good, and it has the potential to become a god-like work. The protagonist's way of thinking in the early stage is deeply resonant. He really thinks from the perspective of ordinary people and promotes the plot. The sense of immersion is very strong. Choose many film and television works with ghosts and ghosts, but the protagonists have no magic powers. This setting is very interesting, and there are many exciting points to explode. The part where the saint appears in front of people is natural and refreshing. The shortcomings are that the combat power increases too quickly in the later stage, too many dungeons are opened, the characters are too complicated, the emotional scenes are not well written, the story pace is too fast, the writing skills are slightly behind, and the fighting descriptions are too detailed. Slowly falling into a cliché. I hope the author can give me a reply after reading my review. I really like this book I hope the author

I've been chasing it, and suddenly I saw it was limited and free. How should I put it? It's wrong. At the beginning, I came here for ghost movies from Hong Kong, Southeast Asia and Taiwan, but then I ended up writing about time travel, Underworld, and Sweet Home. The author, one Hong Kong ghost movie is enough for you to write a lot. When writing ghost movies, you have to focus on it. Most readers come here for ghost movies. What's behind you?

Be patient when writing, don't write after you have no patience to write anymore. As long as your writing is not particularly bad at the starting point, the last will win in the end.

Already read, discarded, I hate the thoughtless reduction of combat power.