Young Master, Please Slay the Demons

The reason why I like Lao Pei's books is that except for the fact that his updates are a little slow, a little short, a little short, and basically not enough to read, I probably just like the feeling of being slow and not being suddenly poisoned. The whole world will not oppose the protagonist, nor will it be mixed up with private goods. I can look forward to a comedy ending and don't have to worry about being taught that "the core of comedy is tragedy."

Personal Rating Early Period (9/10) The early stage of the story focuses on a relaxed and witty monster-slaying style. It is very refreshing to watch the protagonist defeat the big monster and gain new abilities. It is also interspersed with many jokes, and the reading experience is excellent. Mid-term (7/10) The plot progresses to the mid-term, and the worldview begins to expand, involving sect struggles and the mastermind behind the scenes. Unfortunately, the author seems to be too ambitious and has laid out too many branches and foreshadowings. However, due to space limitations, many settings cannot be described in depth. Ending (5/10) The ending is the most failed part in my opinion. Many clues laid out in the early and middle stages were not concluded properly. In addition, the author's narrative technique also has some problems. He often switches scenes suddenly when the plot reaches its climax, which not only interrupts the readers' hard-earned emotions, but also breaks the rhythm of the story. The ending was extremely hasty and made people feel surprised: "Huh? It ended like this?", Which is really a pity. General Comment Typical opening high and then going low. The early stage is very fascinating, but unfortunately the follow-up is weak. It is a work "worth reading, but also worth discarding at any time".

The author's writing and plot are good, but there are two major problems: First: the time is too slow, and it seems that the protagonist has upgraded too quickly, and has only upgraded several levels in half a year. And the plot seems too tight. How come so many things happened in half a year? When writing fairy tales, you have to slow down time. People can't cultivate for hundreds or even thousands of years. The protagonist reaches full level in a few years. This is too ridiculous. Second: Is the author's setting that anyone can teleport anywhere? Otherwise, how can it take at most a few days to get anywhere? And after completing the plot, I returned directly to Shushan, so there was no need to rush?

To be honest, while reading this book, I was also subscribing to different types of popular IPs such as Ascension of the Day, Nomenclature of the Night, and The End of the Song Dynasty. But so far, I feel that "Ask the Young Master to Kill the Demon" is the most comfortable for me to read. There is a post in the comment area saying that this book reminds people of the original protagonist's sense of cultivating immortality.                                                                                                                                                                                                                           By behaving in a manner that makes you look happy, and that you feel you should be so. I hope Pei can't always stick to his current writing style and his own ideas. As long as he persists, this book will definitely become a hit! !

A very comforting book I can barely be considered an old bookworm. Most of the online articles nowadays seem to be produced on an assembly line. The polarization is very serious. Those who are good at writing often like to write very deep plots, nine turns and eighteen turns. The purpose of going around and around is to relax and have fun in your free time. I believe that most people who read online articles are not writers. To read a novel, you have to use your brain and think over and over again. Can't the writing be simpler? Xianxia novels without writing often like to adopt the routine of garbage and mindless fantasy novels. They start with a wave of ridicule, and then slap in the face, mindlessly reducing intelligence, and it is over. The protagonist must also be lowered to a lower level. The world must be lower than the opponent's, so that you can get slapped in the face later. It's not just a rubbish routine like this. Basically, the rubbish routines of fantasy and brainless novels have been copied. It's really embarrassing to read. It's obviously a fairy tale novel, but it's written like a fantasy and brainless novel. Whether it is a fairy tale novel with no writing style and a lot of rubbish routines, or a fairy tale novel with writing style but likes to write the novel in depth to show that it is powerful, basically they all have one common problem, that is, they like knives. It seems that the novel cannot live without knives. Some even knives for the sake of knives. Can't the whole book be happy? Like this one, I read that some people say it is just like life, there are always unsatisfactory things in life. Then my life is unsatisfactory, and reading a novel is still unsatisfactory, and I still have to suffer? What kind of masochistic person can say such things about eating? Spend time and money reading novels just to find abuse? Computers adopt a binary system, either 0 or 1, so what is the purpose of the web text? This novel basically does not have the above-mentioned common faults of most online articles. It is just like what the introduction of the book says, the majestic world, happy cultivation of immortality. I feel that a truly good online article should not be profound for the sake of being profound, because most people who read online articles are amateurs, not professional writers. A truly great online writer should have the writing skills and know how to write profound things, but not the writing skills. Instead of writing a profound online article to pretend to be worth 2,500,000 to 80,000 yuan. However, things will definitely have imperfections, which is normal, and there will definitely be people who don't like this book. As the saying goes, there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. Although this book also has some shortcomings, compared with other online articles, it is very close to my ideal good book. Although other esoteric and brainless Internet articles have various shortcomings, they also have their advantages, but the disadvantages far outweigh the advantages. The author's book is very different from most Internet articles, but it would be better if they can learn from each other's strengths and offset their weaknesses. Now it has been updated to Xianmen Conference , had a conflict with Penglai. If this plot was placed in a cool novel, Chu Liang would definitely go up to fuck Yang Shenlong, and then before doing it, the people around him would forcefully subdue Yang Shenlong and ridicule him mercilessly. You can't learn to forcefully subjugate him, but you can still learn other things, otherwise it won't be very exciting and there will be no climax. Overall, this book is much better than most mindless and profound online articles, keep up the good work💪

The scene where the protagonist is arrested by the court is a failure, the logic doesn't even make sense. Can the imperial court still control Jiutian? You can go to Jiutian Sect to arrest a successor-level disciple because of the slightest suspicion. What right do you have? On one side, it was written that the protagonist was very important to the sect, that he had a promising future, that he was the master of the purple and green swords, and that he made a lot of money for the sect. Yet he was arrested directly because of other people's suspicions? ? ? Later, it was written that the protagonist did not save the poisoned members of the royal family in advance, and despised the imperial power. Then you had already done it, and someone was arrested inside the sect. Why are you being pretentious? This is still a conflict with other sects, and it's not even on the imperial court's territory. Why are the sects so afraid of the imperial court? According to this logic, the imperial court should have organized an army to attack the Demon Sect long ago. Penglai challenged the imperial court head-on. There was a state relative in Shushan Mountain who did this. The successor could be arrested in the sect, which means that you were secretly arrested when you went out. This logic is slightly more correct.

The male protagonist of the novel is not just a carrier of obscenity for readers to immerse themselves in. Their tasks should not be all about robbery, killing people, amassing wealth and hunting for women, retaliating against the powerful, pretending to be pigs and eating tigers... There is no need for them to give all the above behaviors some untenable and self-deceptive reasons to make them logical and understandable. Greed is greed, ruthlessness is ruthlessness, lust is lust, and baseness is baseness! There is no need to hide, there is no need to flatter, there is no need to call a deer a horse, and there is no need for the author to clear the ground. I go my own way, compose a chapter, let others comment on the right and wrong. In the end, everyone will have a unique protagonist image in their heart. Only the man who carries the entire story, firmly serves as the core of the narrative, and is remembered by people is worthy of the word "protagonist". The above is the original words of Sanzha Horror Paradise, and it is also the view of the protagonist that I very much agree with. This is why I am unhappy with your words. The feeling of adding that there is no silver in this place is really uncomfortable. I have followed several "righteous" protagonists, and the character you wrote has the most upright family background, but has the worst sense of righteousness. It feels like he is being dragged by the red sword or asked by a "righteous" character to "glare at evil". To put it simply, the character does not stand up, and of course it may be because the plot has not yet unfolded. . . However, your book is positioned as an entertainment novel, so the problems mentioned above are all minor flaws. As long as there are no problems in the general direction and the laughs are guaranteed, it will definitely be a good book.

Overall, it's a good read, I read it in one sitting. It's just that the last volume doesn't look very good, I don't know how to describe it. There are many side stories in the whole text, but the overall expression does not convey anything vulgar (probably, the reader's divergent imagination has nothing to do with the content of the expression, and the author reserves the right of final interpretation. It just entertains the monkeys jumping up and down in the comment area). The three views are correct, not poisonous, and the writing is relaxed and refreshing.

Also, isn't this true dragon inheritance too worthless to just give away? As far as the current situation of the protagonist is concerned, there are more true dragon inheritances than big-headed dolls The rarity of true dragon inheritance≈mandrill? ? With the current financial resources, is there no way to get a mandrill? Even if it is a living mandrill, it shouldn't be difficult. Otherwise, add a quantity limit to the dolls to make the current number of dolls reasonable. Otherwise, add a marginal effect. Each additional doll will reduce the effect.

Advantages of this book: relaxed and enjoyable, with three correct views. Shortcomings of this book: the main line is vague and the path is too smooth.

I have been reading online articles for nearly 20 years. Both of Xiao Pei's books are very good. They are light-hearted and humorous, with good writing, good plot, and good quality. The only drawback is that they are short.

I have read the whole book, and it is still good. It has a positive outlook on life, is more refreshing, and is not toxic. It can be seen that the writing is also very strong, and there is nothing obviously embarrassing. Some of the jokes can also make people smile, and the place where they express their personal views is also very decent. However, there are some places that affect the normal reading experience. The marginal description is okay, but adding some bad jokes can easily ruin the overall reading atmosphere (even the comment section is occupied by people who use stupid jokes).

Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. When I looked at the character list, I thought there would be a role for the female protagonist, especially when I saw the entry for Dora, I was really looking forward to it. After almost finishing it, I found that the female protagonist is really quite transparent. Daily Humiliation I prefer to watch 😁, it has a lot of modern memes, a lot of small tasks, the language is humorous, and very casual, but it lacks a bit of a layout for hegemony, and the intelligence of many big bosses is too low. The front is okay, but the back is prone to aesthetic fatigue. The fighting scenes are average, okay, and it is more casual.

This book contains all the content I like, from the single female protagonist to the relaxed and funny writing style. Come on, Xiao Pei 😁

I just started reading. I used to be a student party with no money, but now I'm working. I've booked it all for you for the first time.

It's so imaginative, so interesting

How many words does the author have left to finish (≧∇≦)/

The emperor's daughter Feng cursed: The updates are so slow and infrequent, and I still want to waste money on monthly tickets.

The fifty-first book in full order, Lao Pei's second. The style is still so enjoyable, except that the heroine almost disappears in the later stages, and everything else is pretty good. The first one is Li Chu, this one is Chu Liang, and the next one is called Liang X?

! This transformation talisman, the heroine doesn't know how to use a knife, right? The author is great (><)

Thank you for your companionship. Although there were many things I wanted to comment on in the middle and later stages, I still finished reading it because I was completely absorbed in the first half, hahaha. Generally speaking, it looks good, but it also has flaws and poisonous points. After all, everyone's idea of ​​a perfect book is different. Maybe this is not the perfect book in my mind, but it did bring me joy during this time. 👍

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April 1st, sunny, hidden in Guixu April 2nd, sunny and cloudy, hidden in Guixu April 3rd, light rain, hidden in Guixu … April 28th, clear, a senior brother from Tongxuan Realm came to me and said that he would help me restore my country. He discovered a new continent with vast territory and rich resources. He has money and I have people, let's fight it down together. My senior brother actually still remembers me. He is really a good senior brother of mine. April 29th, sunny, the whole team April 30th, sunny, departure May 1st, cloudy, on the road May 7th, rain has arrived May 10th, the sky is on fire, thunder is everywhere, this shrine is not good, and the land must be changed. Sure enough, senior brother is who he is, he is indeed my good senior brother! My dearest person! On June 16, with unknown weather, we found a lake and set up camp here. June 18, fine, I discovered a large area of ​​Zhilanti vegetables and have established a supply relationship with Hongyuefang. First profit since entering Shenxu. On July 3, the Shenxu sightseeing business was opened up in the Fairy Friends Circle. On July 19, a survivable secret realm was discovered, and the aura was slightly lower than that of Shushan. On July 24, a stone bead was discovered, which can evacuate the surrounding air after inputting spiritual energy. On August 6, a mushroom was discovered, which is colorful, has an excellent taste, and can induce dreams. It has been served as a dish for No. 208 … Do you want a blessed land with stronger spiritual energy? ! ! ! Do you want to have spiritual freedom? ! ! ! Want to get something for nothing? ! ! ! ! Everything is at Silver Sword Shenxu Unlimited Company! ! ! ! ! !

The first time I knew that Pei could not be a master was when I saw this year's annual list of youth online literature. It was held together with Zi Zai Youth's launching ceremony at Peking University and attracted popularity and enthusiasm from all over the country. In my opinion, the end of the work "Please Kill the Demon" was just a break halfway through the journey, and it did not reach the goal and ideal that Da Da wanted to achieve. The subsequent works are a true portrayal of Da Da continuing to move forward on this road. My attitude towards fairy tales can be described as one of respect but also a bit of aloofness, perhaps because the first work I read was Tomato's "The Wilderness". Since then, I have known very little about fairy tales. Fortunately, this work has also successfully allowed me to see the attitude of fairy tales in the new era. I believe that in the near future, I will be able to present a masterpiece that is not inferior to this book!

This book is one of the most interesting ones I have read in recent years. Nowadays, many books have to go through the early stage and slowly enter the world before they can read well. This book is particularly interesting from the beginning.

This book is so beautiful! The author's handsomeness can be seen between the lines. I followed it. Not only did I read it every day, but I also voted for the author. The author also reminded him to pay attention to his health when he read too much. 🙈 (Comment template, recommended for study.)

Demon Slayer Fan Activity I don't know what the standards are for hand-drawing. It was drawn with a mobile phone. It is not a fan drawing of other characters. I am an illustrator and want to make some money. Damn it, I can't even post a tag on other platforms. I'd better post it here. Power for Love, just a fan, my painting style is a rough draft, the main character is not easy to grasp, so I have to draw two popular female characters I really drew it by myself, the official operation will give me some coins, if you don't believe me, search for this artist's name on all platforms The writing is really mine And I found that none of the three official card pictures are serious fan art, all are other illustrations. Everyone's copyright awareness is relatively weak, but you still have to be careful The male protagonist is not easy to grasp, so I won't draw him yet. I remembered to draw him again.

There is something, hahaha.

Reading Pei Bu's book is like watching a movie starring Stephen Chow when he was young. It's really nonsensical and funny. In many scenes, you can even see the shadow of Ng Man Tat.

I keep up with the updates every day, develop my wits, and overall it's a masterpiece worth watching; I hope I can maintain the style, and wish you good health and more updates😁.