Twenty Years of Restarting Life

Well, what can I say? The author wants too many things. I always feel that he wants everything. In the end, it makes people feel too complicated. He wants to make money, engage in business wars, and engage in conspiracy. He also wants to be a martial arts king and a stud. He also wants to make those shrewd women willing to live together and meet every day. I love my sister. Girl, I still want the world after rebirth to be the same as it is now, and the world view has not changed much. I also write about how awesome the people around the protagonist are. The people around him are so awesome. Xia Wenzhuo, a freshman, thinks like Jack Ma and Liu Qiangdong. How awesome is this? There is no conflict between the characters. There is also a timeline. I always feel that it should be completed in a few years. You have compressed the things that have been done into one year, but you also find that one year should not make you very good, and you need to be more restrained. It is so entangled. If you throw away a lot of unnecessary things, it will be more colorful. I always feel that the business war is nonsense at the beginning, but it still takes a lot of effort later, who can force the fist to listen to the other, and then fight for a long time. , Is back to engage in business war. Besides, I really want to complain. It is Xia Wenzhuo who is reborn, not Zhao Changan. Why do I feel that Xia Wenzhuo is the real reborn person? Zhao Changan makes judgments based on the times he has experienced, and then what Xia Wenzhuo says is his judgment. If Xia Wenzhuo is not reborn, is it because of the roundworms in his belly? On what basis did she make such a judgment in the late 1990s, a time of rapid change? If her father is forced to calculate, he is a rich man, right? She doesn't rely on her father either, so why should she? Zhao Changan was reborn, what about her, because she was smart? I always feel that there are so many bugs, and it's uncomfortable to look at them.

After reading the first five chapters, the language is not fluent and I am no longer interested. If you want people to be interested, you have to read the first five chapters fluently. I'm sorry.

The author's basic writing skills are not up to par. One sentence is divided into several paragraphs, and they are poorly divided. There are also n names in one chapter, and I don't know who they are. It makes people confused. I have to guess based on the context for a long time, which makes me tired.

It was too selfish to hide the money from my family at the beginning, and the plot was sloppy and not enjoyable to watch. . .

It's a very good novel. I really like it. I hope the author will work harder!

Let me tell you why this book is not popular. The author has a good idea and wants to write it in depth. But I have poor control over the rhythm of the article, or there is no rhythm at all. I just write whatever comes to my mind. A story was depressing and depressing at the beginning, and when it reached its climax, he stopped writing. Instead, he changed the topic and wrote about the daily life of the protagonist. At this time, it makes people feel very uncomfortable. If they want to see the reversal, who is bothering you here? Another thing is to pretend to be serious. Some things are really embarrassing. You should not be so deliberately pretending to be serious. I won't mention other things such as writing skills that are not good enough. Basically, these are the points. After the author finishes writing, he should go back and think about it again. Otherwise, he will never make progress by just immersing himself in writing, and in the end it will only become a self-exciting work. Above.

Chapter 16: Running away, a lot of names, I can't see the status at all

There are too many emotional scenes in this drama. The male protagonist is entangled with Xia Wenzhuo and has sex with so many women at the same time. Author, can you control so many people? Be careful that everything will fall apart later. I suggest you finish the Xia Wenzhuo part first.

Brother Watermelon, I feel that your book may have a polarizing effect on readers. People who like it are happy with it, but people who don't agree with it will be confused. The reason may be due to depth issues. Although the author himself must have personal style preferences, sometimes he has to make changes to suit the readers, which may be uncomfortable, but there is nothing he can do about it for the sake of performance. In fact, I personally still prefer the current style of this book, because I really hope that this book will become more popular, so I still have some opinions that I don't agree with: the verbal plot expression can be simpler, the main line can be a little more compact, and there should be as many exciting points as possible. Sometimes it is neither popular nor popular, and many readers don't approve of it. Alas... Come on, brother!

After reading a lot of rebirth novels, I discovered a problem: Many authors like to write about a hundred films ago where the protagonist does nothing! Whether it's writing about high school life here or there, or about family troubles, anyway, it takes almost a hundred pictures, before the theme begins and the protagonist begins to develop! I don't know what's wrong with it, many authors layout it like this! Some authors are very capable, which is okay! Can persist. But more than that, I just can't stand it! But I also found that for a well-written urban rebirth article, you can basically finish the first thirty pictures and then start getting down to business! These are relatively clean and well written~

There is nothing wrong with the writing being in-depth, and there is nothing wrong with the previous protagonist being so weak and exploited that he can only rely on fists or resistance. But when it's time to feel good, you should feel good. In more than 60 chapters, there is a highlight of the college entrance examination. There has not been a big highlight since college, and readers already know that this highlight is the Internet. Everyday trivial things are fine, but they must serve the main line. If the article cannot be repeated, it will be too trivial. For example, you can take it with you in one go when you go on a trip. You can just say a few words when buying an umbrella. Bringing the umbrella with you expresses your feelings. Confessions bring out conflicts, and the reconciliation of conflicts brings about greater conflicts. But the journey to buy an umbrella was too cumbersome, and the games played in the car were not very interesting. After so many chapters, the protagonist's computer business has not done much, and the operation of the website has not been written in detail until others learned about its influence. (Why the website is popular, why people choose this website, what improvements have been made to the website, what is the purpose of the improvements, and what is ahead of other websites) These are all not written. On the contrary, it is daily eating and chatting, and the values ​​​​are exported non-stop, all of which are conversations with brothers. The conversation between a beautiful girl and her brother almost always takes up a large area of ​​description. Entrepreneurship articles can write about people's hearts, but the theme is still entrepreneurship. Business development, how to develop it, what aspects of your business are ahead of others, and only then do you seize other people's territory and others set you back. The advantage of this book is that no one is a fool, and not everyone helps the protagonist. I hope the author can improve the storytelling, because most people read novels just to read a story.

Standing in the wind, even a pig can fly. . This sentence is purely to deceive people who don't know what to do! With no connections, no channels, no social resources, and most importantly, no ability or means, you can fly and let me take a look. Just the political struggle within a company and the struggle for interests and rights can kill you, but you still want to take off? To give the simplest example, in the battle of thousands of regiments, why is only Wang Xingfei of Meituan rising? Also, why are highly educated people taking off in the Internet industry? So don't believe those claims that pigs can take off even if they stand in the wind. It's pure nonsense.

Those who have had enough of being reborn in middle school and high school still fucking remember the big and small things decades later, the college entrance examination questions and so on, and they can still write those songs and novels, and even more awesome ones can even make movies. The key is to remember the box office, stock lottery, betting and so on. The protagonist doesn't have a golden finger, so he just remembers it after rebirth. I've had enough. I'm out of books and don't want to read this type of book anymore.

I endured reading more than 20 pictures and felt dizzy. Maybe I am not good enough. I wish this book a great success! ! ! 🙏🙏

Let's put it this way, more than 800 chapters later, the little boss in Novice Village lives a more elegant life than the protagonist, causing others to lose their job prospects and playing with other people's wives, while the protagonist is still bitter and grudged and unable to take revenge.

Chapter 200 jumps to more than 1,600 chapters. I am still in my sophomore year, and the ancient martial arts have come out. It is boring to abandon it.

I don't even dare to write like this in my diary. It's only been three years since I wrote three thousand chapters of the timeline. It's so long and boring.

This is a rubbish novel. The author is really a saint. The pig's trotters he writes are noble. Why don't you let the pig's trotters donate all the money? The country is upright. The more I read, the more disgusting it becomes.

So readers won't comment? Or does the author not listen to opinions? Anyway, I watched it with a passion. The plot I wrote in high school was okay, but the writing was left after college. Women came one after another, and a reborn person hugged a rubbish-like navigation. He was afraid of this and that. It seemed that all the families in China were trying to harm the protagonist. The most disgusting thing was that he also mentioned chips and the idea of ​​swallowing Lenovo. Is this a stallion like the protagonist? The author has also written three books. The data is low and the author's level is low. If you keep writing like this, sooner or later you will have to rush to the street, and you won't be able to grasp the pulse at all. Learn from Chen Dong, the same abusive master, the same number of brothers, but Chen Dong's protagonist and supporting role are equal. When he has good things, he is never stingy or controlling. Regarding the thoughts of the supporting characters, the protagonist of this book wishes that all the good things are in his hands, and wishes that all the supporting characters are brainless to work for him. He feels noble if he is given some dividends, but readers can feel it from between the lines. The protagonist is very disgusting, and most readers will not agree with the protagonist's actions.

Others say "The Three Golden Cards", but after reading it for more than ten chapters, I felt lonely and didn't know what was written. It was like a big pot of stew, with names popping out one by one. I was speechless.

What can I say about this book? The author has certain writing skills, and his style is somewhat imitated by Gu Long. In fact, the overall framework is okay. First, it's too long-winded. It's almost 500 chapters, and the novel only lasts about two years. I went to buy a house. I went several times and interacted with the sales lady for tens of thousands of words! It has been over a hundred chapters since I finished dealing with the Xia family, but the plot has made no progress at all. The second is that it is too studly. I have been reading books for more than ten years. If I continue at this pace and I am still not a prisoner, it will definitely have the most harems in the books I have read. Anyway, basically anyone with some good looks should do it. So I was forced to get an ancient martial arts cultivator to strengthen the protagonist's kidneys, otherwise he would be exhausted and die.

When do people with assets of over 100 million and control of billions in assets have time to wait for the airport bus? The brain is sick!

The protagonist has a bad character, overwhelms the plot, abuses the protagonist, and the website navigation also talks about serving the country and the people. Apart from these, this book can be compared with the book I Don't Want to Be Reborn. It's a pity that it occasionally flirts with enemies and mocks the supporting characters with the vision of saints for losing opportunities. Another point is that the protagonist is too strong, the supporting characters have no human rights, and they have created a family power, which makes people have no sense of substitution. Am I living in ancient times?

Even though he was reborn, his IQ is also mentally retarded, and his behavior is comparable to the "masters" in the kindergarten class. The author is really amazing👍🏻

A person who was a waste in his previous life will also be a waste after being reborn. It is impossible to become a genius after being reborn. What I mean is ability. So how can we achieve class leaps without relying on stocks or windfalls?

This kind of novel is illogical at first glance. How high can the upper limit of parents be? Show off your weak IQ to defeat a group of capital tycoons and defeat the whole world? I don't want to read it at first glance. I'm fooling myself and the readers.

There were less than 20 pictures, and thirty or forty names appeared, and the future classmates were also very impressive. The richest man, the academician, all of them were women. There were so many characters that I couldn't even distinguish the names of the protagonist's parents.

How should I put it, the first few dozen chapters kept me reminiscing. At least half of the text is in the process of recall.

Tao Jiao Putting the cart before the horse, a woman who didn't get it right from the beginning to the end? I saw that Sanqianzhang was still chirping. . . Is this the heroine?

Brother, your book is becoming more and more obscene as you write it. I feel like the plot cannot advance without bringing in the third-party content. . .