Starting as an Abandoned Disciple of Laoshan

As long as you can live forever, who cares if you are messed up with evil intentions or just a deformed species with your own memories? ? Anyway, if technology develops quickly, when I die of old age, I will be willing to transfer my memories to the robot chip to continue living, or I will be willing to use other methods.

It's a bit like traditional martial arts writing, but it's too pretentious, and there's no sense of immersion.

Wu Bai has been writing books for nearly 10 years, but he still doesn't understand why the worse he gets, the worse he gets, and why he ends up like this. The key to a book is to write it smoothly. Readers don't care whether there is always a well-conceived or amazing plot. The key is persistence. Readers just eat popcorn when reading a book and forget half of the plot after reading it. However, for readers, to become a long-term fan of a great god, the most important thing is the author's attitude towards his fans: first, he must be dedicated and punctual, and he can't finish two chapters a day; second, he must be sincere and responsible, no matter how bad the book is, he must finish it. For readers, reading whose books is either reading or passing time. Over time, it becomes a spiritual sustenance, and every book must be read!

Eunuch, no matter how many times he changes his waistcoat, he is still a eunuch

Changing the number is also a eunuch, can you still finish writing a complete book?

I'll keep it for now. I hope Wu Bai can write well.

The author has fallen into an endless cycle. The first one, Qingxuan, started to go downhill, and the quality of the last two books was not good. He gradually followed the path of a eunuch. He had to open a small account in an attempt to regain his popularity. However, he turned out to be a eunuch whose grades were unsatisfactory. Readers became cautious. This person has always been a eunuch, so he should be raised for a while. Then his grades got worse and he became a eunuch again. Readers felt that they were lucky not to subscribe. Sure enough, he was a eunuch, otherwise he would have suffered a huge loss. This is an endless cycle.

I was tricked again, first pretending to be sick, and then disappearing. It will appear again quietly after a while. The author cannot change the nature of the eunuch, The reader can only change himself. Read Wubai's book again, I want to slap myself a few times!

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, and a veteran author. My best score is only 300. Today I saw the author posting a single chapter, and I want to ask for readers' opinions. I can't help but post a bit. The following opinions are only the opinions of one family. I just read two chapters, and my eyes lit up, and I felt a long-lost impulse. This book can catch up! But when I saw it on the shelves, I couldn't help but complain, this is it! Since you are asking for opinions, plus you are a reader and a colleague, then I will start writing. First of all, in the book "From the Abandoned Disciple of Laoshan", I saw the shadow of the squid. This shadow is very heavy. At least the shadows of "The Lord of the World" and "The Lord of Mysteries" are like maggots on the tarsus, which is difficult to ignore. But we cannot ignore the author's intention and strong writing style, as well as the atmosphere in the book. The opening chapter is eye-catching, smooth and natural, full of novelty, and the rhythm is straightforward. For the first twenty chapters, I personally think it can be given eight points. I thought this was a new vest issued by some senior level five author. But after Chapter 20, I understood that this was just a beautiful illusion. Signs of problems began to appear, and the problems completely appeared after it was put on the shelves. As a result, from my personal point of view, this book feels a bit useless. The advantages and disadvantages are too obvious. I will highlight the key points. 1. The plot tends to be boring From the protagonist's escape from the dungeon to the battle in Jiangcheng, various rhythms are laid out, compact and crisp, with layers of gangster cover-ups, and the protagonist pretending to be B several times. But after the Battle of Jiangcheng, the plot became boring. To put it more bluntly, as a reader, I can probably guess what you are going to write next. This is normal, but the point is, you did not satisfy me. For example, the plot of the protagonist entering Beijing has been laid out for so long, and readers are waiting for the protagonist to kill everyone. In the end, the protagonist does kill everyone, but the plot is not exciting enough. What I want is five levels of intensity, but you only gave three levels of intensity. I just started here, and you are over! Also, I feel that the author has wasted a lot of small plots, such as the plot of "The Knife Man on Credit". The appearance of the Knife Man made my eyes light up. I practiced the above and thought it was the big boss's fish in advance, but unexpectedly it was just to lead to the plot of the magic knife. After the magic knife appeared, there was always a sense of fate in the plot, which was unpleasant. Secondly, the plot of the Green Dragon Club is based on my experience in writing online articles. This is either a plot that the author suddenly thought of when he was working on the manuscript and wrote it as foreshadowing. It is also possible that I imagined the big plot in advance, but after writing it, I found that it was no longer useful, so I gave up. But from the reader's perspective, these are all useless plots, and the reading experience plummets. There are many similar plots. 2. The power system is unreasonable and the differences between different levels are unclear The power system cannot be justified. The basic framework is the martial arts system + Cthulhu style. There are too many unreasonable details. If there are too many of these, the sense of reality will be lost. Secondly, the names of the exercises and magic weapons are too vulgar. When it comes to choosing a name, I think Toad's Immortal Gourd can be used as a reference. At least it makes people feel awesome, like the protagonist sitting cross-legged on a magic lotus. I can't help but dream back to the prehistoric novel ten years ago The most important thing is that the protagonist's skills are too confusing. I can understand the description of the protagonist as both good and evil, but according to my understanding, the protagonist's skills should be "simple" and can be practiced a lot, but the readers must feel very simple. The protagonist in this book has a lot of skills that are difficult to understand. I feel that the author has countless ideas that he wants to integrate into a book, but he does not digest them well, which leads to various problems. There are many eye-catching plots among them. The chapter "The Afterglow of the Old Era" introduces the evolution of the world's mainstream cultivation methods. This is a wonderful stroke, I slapped my thigh straight after seeing it. I immediately wrote it down in a notebook and used it in the next novel I want to write. But when I read on, I found that there was no follow-up. Where is the contrast in power between the changes in cultivation methods in the previous and later eras? Dear, I didn't write it down at all. Let's stop writing here. Someone will continue writing.

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