Lingzi Isn't So Cold Today

The plot with Lingzi will unfold slowly, and their relationship won't progress rapidly from the moment they meet. I could write it like my previous book, "My Cartoonist Girl," where the two characters instantly develop a strong rapport, and Qin Min practically wins him over from the moment she appears. But that would lack the process of their relationship developing.

Please, go publish your book on the women's platform. You're probably a female author. Before you even get to the point, the protagonist is already surrounded by enemies. All her relatives and friends are bad people.

Lingzi is late!

I haven't watched much, but the male lead's characterization really doesn't suit my taste. The author's description of the male protagonist's appearance gave me a very effeminate feeling, especially the "cinnabar mole" on his forehead. I don't know what other readers think, but I found it very awkward. Then, I can't describe the male lead's personality and behavior.

This is so idiotic! Not only the supporting characters, but the main character is too. They're supposed to be reincarnated and transmigrated, yet they act like children. They slap people when they're arguing. The supporting characters seem to have brain damage. And the plot is so clunky.

It's poorly written; it doesn't capture the essence of a sweet romance novel. It's like... Like a female-oriented romance novel? Yes, just like a female-oriented romance novel—it makes my head spin.

Lingzi's character is too tragic, while Xiaomeng's is too sweet. Choosing either one later on would leave me feeling unsatisfied, and choosing both would completely ruin the characters. Thankfully, I just saw Lingzi's grandmother come to her aid, so I'll stop here. Lingzi's life is starting to improve, and I hope the main characters continue their sweet relationship with Xiaomeng. I'm getting old and can't take stomach medicine anymore.

The male lead was so poor he had to borrow money from his roommate to make ends meet, yet he stubbornly refused Aunt Qing's transfer because of his pride 🤔. Did he really think he could solve his money problem by taking a part-time job later? Who pays you if you haven't worked a full month? Does being handsome mean you can get paid without working? This plot is completely nonsensical.

The author's biggest failure: making the reader uncomfortable.

The writing style is actually very good. It's fine to write about sweet romance, but the background doesn't need to be so tragic and full of hatred. Relatives and friends aren't necessarily cold-blooded and heartless; everyone has their own opinions. Those who can get along with you won't be too cold-blooded. The law isn't as flawed as you think. Being too idealistic is unrealistic.