Lingzi Isn't So Cold Today

The plot with Lingzi will unfold very slowly, and the relationship between the two people will not develop rapidly as soon as they meet. I can write like the previous book "My Cartoonist Girl", where the two people's favorability level will be full when they meet, and Tan Min will be free when he appears. But that would miss the process of emotional development. I like Qin Min very much, but Qin Min is not Lingzi. Lingzi is a very special heroine, and the plot involving her has just begun. This book only has two female protagonists, Xiaomeng and Lingzi. The other female characters are all tools. Lin Xijun is a tool used to develop her career and make money. There is no ambiguous plot with the female partner. I only write about love, not career. Some people may find it boring. When I wrote a career line, some people thought it was a routine. Anyway, it's hard to agree with everyone. Some people don't like it...

Go to the female screen and publish your books. Please, you are probably a female author. Before even starting to get into the theme, the protagonist has enemies all over the world. All relatives and friends are bad people.

Chi Lingzi is here! !

I haven't watched much of it, but the portrayal of the male protagonist is really not to my liking. The author's description of the male protagonist's appearance gave me a very girly feeling, especially the "cinnabar mole" on his forehead. I don't know what other readers think, but I feel very embarrassed anyway. Then I can't describe the male protagonist's character and behavior. It seems like there's nothing wrong with it, but it just makes me feel uncomfortable and awkward. I don't know if the author is male or female. If you are a woman, then maybe this is the difference between the man in the heart of a girl and the man in the heart of a boy. Then the writing style is indeed a bit gloomy? But it's not very accurate to say it's gloomy. In short, it's significantly different from most novels written by men. It can't be said to be good or bad, but I personally don't catch a cold. What a pity. I feel that it will be a good novel that is rare to see, but I just resist it. Maybe it is inappropriate. Hahaha, what a pity.

It's so mentally retarded, not only the supporting character, but also the protagonist, who has been reborn and traveled back in time, so why is he still like a child? If you go up and slap someone when they are arguing, the supporting character is more like a brainstem missing, and the plot is still stiff.

The writing is very poor, and it doesn't capture the essence of the dog food novel. It's like... Like a love story on a female channel? Yes, it's just like the love story on a female channel, I feel dizzy when I read it

Lingzi's writing is too miserable, and Xiaomeng's writing is too sweet. No matter if you choose any one, you will feel uneasy. If you choose them all, the characters will all collapse. Fortunately, I just saw Lingzi's grandmother come out to help her. Let's stop here. Lingzi's life starts to get better. Let the protagonist and Xiaomeng be sweet together. I'm getting older and can't take stomach medicine.

The male protagonist is so poor that he borrows money from his roommate to live, but he still wants to save face and refuses to accept the transfer from Aunt Qing. 🤔 Can he solve the money problem by working part-time in the future? Who will pay you if you haven't worked for a full month? Can I get paid first without working if I'm handsome? Inexplicable plot

The author's biggest failure: making readers uncomfortable

The writing style is actually very good It may be about sweet love, but the background does not need to be bitter and grudgey. Relatives and friends are not cold-blooded. Everyone has their own opinions. People who can communicate with each other are not too cold-blooded. The law is not as full of loopholes as you think, and it is too ideal and unrealistic.