Beast Taming Begins with Picking Up a Dragon Girl

Even though I didn't pass the opening test, I don't know what effect it has besides showing the male protagonist as a fw, and it won't affect the contracted dragon girl and egg selection later on? The protagonist is not required to be a perfect genius, at least he is qualified, right?

Although I know you really want to show the power of the Dragon Clan, don't you think the existence of the Dragon Clan is too disruptive to the balance?

It can be seen from many of the author's settings that he wants to integrate the element of beast control into daily life, but at least so far, no integration has been seen in terms of productivity. Another example is the former. Because most areas are uninhabitable, nine super cities are built around Jiuding. The logistics of these nine cities is a very big problem. (How much logistical pressure is there in modern cities? My recommendation is a series of big city micro-operations by an up master at Station B. 36 Krypton) And the divided area ratio of Dayu Jiuzhou itself is very different. The difference between the largest and smallest is dozens of times. And the total area is probably less than 1/4 of the current land area of ​​our country. According to the author, it is an area with severe disaster. For example, the area where the protagonist is located has 1/10 of the people left. So if we assume that half of the country's population is left, and nine super cities are used to live in the people, the logistical pressure will be outrageous. There will also be very big problems in the daily operation of the city, including garbage disposal, water supply, heating and power supply, and the supply of daily consumer goods. After all, reality is not a game, products must be produced, not supermarket shelves refreshed every day. My suggestion is that it is better to add a patch later. For example, the tripod is changed into a set of things similar to the national defense formation, which is directly based on the tripod system of the Zhou Dynasty, and the nine megacities are changed into nine metropolitan areas. There are 7 large cities directly under it, each city has an additional 5 small cities, and each small city is divided into three districts (counties). Or it has three districts under its jurisdiction (although the Zhou Dynasty did not mean that each corresponding number was directly based on the top number, but this resulted in 63 large cities, 315 small cities, and 945 districts, which is probably only about half of what our country is now) At the same time, there are four major regions in the central, southern, northwest, and southwest (basically only a small circle larger than Dayu's Kyushu). There are probably close to 1 billion people now. Assuming that only half of the total population remains, a large amount of space can be freed up as a dangerous area in the setting. Of course it's just a suggestion to slightly increase the rationality, but it doesn't matter if the author doesn't want to change it.

The book is quite good, but the elf stuff adds local culture, which makes it seem a bit too dramatic and awkward.

Come on, keep chasing books, hope it's still sweet

Well, why not go back and write about urban love. There are quite a lot of questions 1. I just traveled through time. When I saw the news, it was on TV. If you have TV, you should have a mobile phone. Shouldn't you use a mobile phone to understand a new world? Why should you go shopping? You are not afraid of the strange world. 2. There is a problem with level setting. There is no limit on the number of contracts. 3. The writing style, the love style, the writing style is weird There are also two small problems that can be considered problems. I think it is not good. Others are different. Everyone has their own preferences. Skill Introduction Check out the game introduction for reference. Locke, Purcell and so on. According to your commoner's designation of a combination of Variety and Water Elf, you should probably say it is Variety Elf. After all, how will you explain it when others see it in the future. And what's the name of a super-changing elf? It's so tacky. If you call it a changing elf, it would be better than this.

The Deer's New Vest: The Lost Legless Bird, New Book Urban Harem is a safe pursuit

It's a good thing that the author didn't write any awkward battle scenes, as he used his strengths to avoid his weaknesses, but if you make the setting of the dragon clan so powerful, they come to PK with the male protagonist but it's like elementary school students fighting, which is a contrast. If the article is a novice, there is no need to depict darkness. If you ask me, I would just give the dragon clan a clown plot. The protagonist uses super powers to cheat the dragon clan, so that the dragon clan's B-square will not drop, because we are cheating. But the problem is that the author did not write a system, and the balance of combat power is difficult to control. If I were the male protagonist and I was so powerful in the Dragon Clan, I wouldn't go to the heroine's house and possibly pass on the danger. Moreover, the Dragon Clan can sense the breath of dragon blood at close range. According to the shanty towns in the article, I would rule them out one by one and finish the investigation in one night. Nasjiadi at KFC couldn't sense the male protagonist, which was quite strange. What's outrageous is that the first person to discover the male protagonist was an epic commander. He had lived for so long and didn't know the combat power of the dragon that possessed the male protagonist, so he just squatted there by himself. If I were that commander, BYD would call a group of people and prepare to surround the male protagonist to death. The tsundere dragon that possessed the male protagonist in Chapter 1 signed a contract with the male protagonist that required 1,000 kilograms of food per day, but the male protagonist was a poor man. After a long time of patching, the beast-controlling space can be replaced with energy. At the beginning of the problem, the male protagonist didn't sign a beast-controlling treaty with her. The male protagonist didn't have enough mental strength, so she didn't take up the beast-controlling space. Moreover, the setting of Tsundere Dragon is that she was seriously injured. We don't know how to repair it, and we don't know what abilities she has. We don't know anything except an appraisal. It would feel very abrupt to add settings temporarily when the fight starts. Even if you make up Dragon Power, then you will talk nonsense about what kind of power she has awakened. Dragon Power can not only intimidate but also mind control, which is considered relevant and not too abrupt. For example, when the male protagonist is in a key battle, it would be much more reasonable for her to forcefully control the enemy and help the male protagonist win the battle.

The rhythm of the plot in the maze is really weird. It doesn't feel like a beast-control novel anymore, but more like the first kill in a beast-control online game. It's better not to sew too many game-type things, it looks really weird.

I really like Bei Yudie, I must become the heroine 😢