My Girlfriend Is Seriously Too Strong

I've read nine chapters, and the writing is alright, but I don't understand the part about the parents sacrificing themselves to the heavens. Isn't that just pure plot armor? Earlier, the protagonist could tell his dad about what happened at school, but then he didn't tell his dad when his walkie-talkie malfunctioned at home, and he didn't tell his dad when he encountered a monster.

The novel was originally titled "The Eyes of a Martyr," but the title wasn't attracting enough attention, so it was changed at the editor's suggestion. You might feel that the title doesn't match the content at first glance, because there's a lot of setup in the beginning. The main plot will only unfold after the protagonist enters Eden.

I think he looks handsome and suits her well.

It's very well written; the emotions and writing style are both on point. If you've ever written a novel, you'll know how tedious and boring it is to revise it over and over again. Each revision, for the author, is merely a slight improvement in their understanding, because the story they envision is already formed in their mind; their task is simply to express it.

I've also experienced the despair of struggling to finish a book, but compared to your writing, I'm probably quite inadequate. Therefore, I'm more inclined to believe that you're fully immersed in the book's content, and I sincerely hope that you're enjoying writing it. Keep up the good work, author! I will definitely support you! I believe you will succeed one day!

I just found this book yesterday, and today they say it's ending. It's really upsetting. This has happened before (by the way, I'd like to recommend "My Maid Knight," which is also very well-written, but the author wasn't feeling well and it had a bad ending). The novel's writing style is truly excellent.

The beginning was much better than the end; the end was really boring.

This book is indeed a bit slow to get going in the beginning, mainly because there's too much setup. But as you read on, you'll find it's a very wonderful work, especially the emotions, which are described very delicately. The plot is also well-connected, and overall it's very much to my liking.

After reading it, I found the writing style very familiar. After searching, I realized I'd already read two of the author's books: *Devil Girlfriend* and *Comic Artist*. There's not much to say about this one; just support it.

So few people have read it. It's such a pity that such a good novel is not well-read.