Qiankun Storyteller

Good guy, I felt lonely reading these four chapters...

The book is getting better and better, and I hope it will get better and better in the future. Ensure the quality first, and then pursue the update speed after confirming the quality. I have given you daily recommendation votes. Waiting for you to put it on the shelf, you can order as much as you want. Come on, author! ! !

When I finished reading the author's "The Storyteller of Universe"! Many of my ideas have been inspired. Although my personal ability and level are limited, I am also looking forward to a truly peaceful and prosperous age. I would like to send two sincere remarks to the author. "To rule the people by law, rewards and punishments must be clear!" "If you follow the trend of the times, you can control your destiny!" "Be patient and endure humiliation, and you will be rewarded!"

I've read a few stories about storytelling and cultivating immortals, and one is even unfinished. They are all hard to watch, and the stories all resemble the same style and routine. The good thing about this book is that the stories are told in vernacular, making people immersed in the atmosphere of cultivating immortality and aspiration. The subscription fee for chapters is also very low. I really hope the author can stick to finishing the book. I read some very good articles on cultivating immortality. For example, Lian Shan Yizi and Lao Mo Tong are very impressive. The author can refer to their control of that degree. Your characterization in this book is okay, but it just can't be said to have a feeling, and the plot processing is a bit far-fetched. Come on

I read it all in one go. The writing style of the author is really good and solid. It is not like other novels nowadays that are confusing and charming. The foreshadowing is very solid, and I really hope the author will continue to work hard and finish it well.

It's a bit difficult to write a novel with this theme. The main character's source of strength is not stable. When he is fighting in all directions in the later stage, he can't just go to the teahouse and talk about books to replenish his energy after a battle. It will be very dramatic.

There are scattered figures in the teahouse on the roadside Two or three shouts come from the street People shake fans in front of people and wake up and slap the table Dear readers, please listen carefully The wind and rain in this country, the years of mountains and rivers The light and shadow of swords are so beautiful that there are many legends in the world Look at his eloquent words and the dust on his clothes But it turns out that he is a storyteller in the world The woman from Tianshan Mountain Guarding the withered city alone Just for the one person I once was That Kunlun idiot is inseparable Who ever thought that we would never meet again The wind and rain in this country, the mountains and rivers of the years The chivalrous bones and soft intestines, how many spectators are drunk here This is just a wandering wanderer with no roots Meeting by chance, wandering the world, don't ask me The picturesque country Each has gone his own way Also, many people in the world have suffered The beauty is so delicate and loves to watch heroes The bloody storm in the rivers and lakes has been told The pavilions in the city have gone through many hardships The wanderer from the end of the world, a dream of yellow rice The gods and ghosts are different, a ridiculous scene A conversation and laughter, half unfamiliar and crazy The old man in the country is mottled several times The idiot chivalrous girl But there is so much love Wine and sword follow the horse, a stranger in a foreign land The white clothes are gone, the peach blossoms are like yesterday The judge sitting here, don't think too much The story in the book is a waste of time in the world Everyone has his own comment in his heart After listening to this paragraph, you will laugh it off

I've actually seen the invincible hero system you wrote, good guy.

As long as it doesn't say that a strong sword in the snow is fine, I don't know what to say about this snow. The Water Margin of the Three Kingdoms is like a Tang Dynasty Liaozhai. There are so many stories, which one is not better than the snow. Just pick a few paragraphs and it will be enough to talk about it🙄🙄

The author is too ambitious. Shinto, Immortal, Martial, and dynasty fortunes are all mixed together. It will definitely collapse in the middle and later stages of writing.

Many people in the comment area are talking about water. Didn't water start from Chapter 2? Apart from the system data, he is really talking about Water Margin. What else is there to complain about?

Are you allergic to women in the comment section?

I thought the previous ones were to my taste, but when I read White Snake, I felt a little conflicted. After all, nine and a half out of ten authors from Qidian are not good at writing female characters. The protagonist cheats all the way and sweeps through thousands of troops. Who can keep up? It's okay to write it as a vase, but I'm afraid it would be disgusting to describe it as a female character attracting bees and butterflies, with the protagonist going around putting out fires.

The setting of the book is quite good. I think the reason why I hesitated at the beginning was because of too much science popularization. I have read Water Margin 8 times instead of 10 times. If you keep on popularizing science, you will not push the plot forward. You must be bored, but at least the subject matter is relatively new. I hope to keep the protagonist's first line of sight, and don't talk about the plot that has nothing to do with the protagonist.

Fan list: 8 deacons. There are not many subscriptions, and the author is also very desperate.

Author, if you are really so busy, just end it directly. There are fewer words and fewer updates. Just end it directly and you will lose something that is not rare.

I haven't seen the latest chapter, so I'm going to complain first. In fact, it's quite dissuasive. The plot of the original drama is too full, and the books mentioned are all familiar to readers, so there is no need to write too full, just be more concise and point out the relevant parts of the subsequent plot. What I want to see more is the plot of another world, Water Margin, White Snake, Xiaoqian, they are too familiar, I just skipped a few of them. I hope the author will write better and better, and don't be a copycat.

It was quite interesting when I first watched it, but then I just couldn't get into it, no matter what. Maybe the content really didn't appeal to me Ten updates were made on the same day it was released, to see how the quality was. If it was good, I just threw it away if not. It's very different from the previous feeling.

Everyone is a common man and the world is unified. Don't tell me that I can take concubines later. Then do you think this is a unified world? Is everyone equal?

The main reason is whether the author writes a novel or a version of Water Margin that he understands. If the fanfic is okay, the main reason is that it is different from what he expected...

Don't be happy with yourself! From the perspective of others, from the perspective of a bystander, from the perspective of the protagonist, you immediately fall into a self-pleasure situation

Don't be like the Sui Dynasty, that book is simply a poisonous book. The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel

There is no problem with the story, The main reason is that the combat power setting is broken. Just show the heroes of the Water Margin at the beginning.

This novel is okay. The protagonist is under pressure and growing up. It is not a mindless novel, but it is indeed very enjoyable. However, it is too pretentious in some places. It is not short in places, but it is too verbose. For example, when the eldest princess first appeared on the stage, the guards next to her made three nervous reactions. The three reactions seemed to be copied and pasted, and the actions and words were all copied. The language is exactly the same, at least there must be an emotional progression, and the subsequent conversation between the eldest princess and the protagonist seems to be specially set up for the protagonist to show off. One person is inferior to one person, and is superior to ten thousand people. To a rebel who has just emerged from Yunzhou, and it is certain that this rebel only has a few acquired ones around him, why are you so polite? At that time, the eldest princess could kill the protagonist with just a flip of her hand, but she forced the protagonist to pretend to be so polite to an ant for several chapters. This pretender was very awkward, and the logic was a bit wrong. There was also the part about encircling and suppressing the Fifth Company True Lord, which really forced the protagonist to shine. In addition to the main altar, the Five Lotus True Lord also has five temples. Why only leave a retreat in the White Lotus Sect, and the other four have no effect at all? So why did he set up five temples? Just one Bailong Temple is enough, and the protagonist is allowed to go to Bailong Temple and steal the show. This pretense is also very stiff.

Where is the author's home? Seeing that you have been so tired these days, I will send you some supplements.

I feel like the author is pursuing perfection too much. I find it quite enjoyable. Of course, it's understandable if the grades are not enough.

My balls hurt, I'm a eunuch again, I won't recharge again. Half of the work is done. No matter what the reason or problem is, once you have written it, you must write it completely. I don't even have confidence in my own works, so let people who pursue books say what I want. Should we pray that this work will not collapse?

I feel pretty good, but I'm actually a eunuch, alas!

Author! Will the protagonist want to be an emperor in the future, or start a republic? The protagonist is a time-traveler, and as a time-traveler, you must have learned ideological and political education, so don't always talk about rebellion, this is called revolution. If you build an empire and the protagonist becomes the emperor, the world will definitely not be a world of all people. Since the protagonist says that to make this world a world of all people, the only way is to build a republic! Some of the methods and methods of the revolution were also usable in ancient times. I hope the author will let the protagonist use them.

Oh, I just saw it posted. . A eunuch. .