Start with the Exorcism Police

Is it the Yiyang Shen Gong with a golden bell mask? It's a pity that this book was written. I originally thought it was following the path of Longhumen mixed with Taoism and technology. Unfortunately, it is a path of self-created martial arts. There is nothing wrong with the author's own martial arts. It's just that you are writing a Hong Kong drama. Isn't Hong Kong drama just about interacting with the characters in film and television dramas? You don't have to create your own martial arts by Jin Yong and Gu Long? I picked up the sesame seeds and lost the watermelon! I thought it would be a good thing to write something different, but it's a pity that you used the theme of Hong Kong variety show. It can be seen that the author did not copy the entire plot but changed some plots. I still feel pity for this book. I thought you would write about Chen Haonan using the Six Art of Aohan and Fengshen Legs, and Lei Fuhong's domineering cloud-dispelling palm. It's a pity that you wrote it in a different style. When writing a Hong Kong variety show, you need to express some feelings of empathy and regrets about some of the people and things in it. You do have some empathy here, but unfortunately not much. It is suppressed by the protagonist you wrote. The protagonist you wrote is written in a style. The good guys are good guys and the bad guys are bad guys. You wrote them all according to the identity of the young and Dangerous boys, and did not write out some of the young and Dangerous protagonists and There is some friendship between the gangster protagonists. It is undeniable that the Young and Dangerous are some gangsters, but the place and time were different at that time. The upper class was controlled by others. Without money, power and brains, you could only be bullied. What would you do if you didn't do this? Some Young and Dangerous movies are still watched by people to this day. Can you say that this movie can only teach people to become bad? Not all gangsters are necessarily bad guys, it's just forced by the form. You are a bad guy and just beat a lot of the protagonists to death. There is no difference between killing people in Langya to repay a favor and killing in Young and Dangerous to grab territory. They are all killings. You chose the wrong theme for this Hong Kong variety show, and there is too little sense of immersion. I also read your last book, but unfortunately I didn't finish it. I feel that the last one was because of your golden finger ability, and the training ground at the back! Why! I feel like your book is almost done. In fact, your golden finger can only be used for will flow, technology can be directly drawn, and martial arts can be practiced slowly. If the upper limit of your reality flow ability is not high, there is no need to add more points. Unfortunately, your book is almost the same as the previous one. If the nuclear bomb presides over everything in the end of the law, there is no need to add any extra points. Just make a panel. I can only support you until now. I can't stand it anymore. I will support you with the next book.

I just want you to write one piece a day. What do you want to do?

Darkness, underground prison, Jiji (mouse), there is only one prisoner here, a pair of strange eyes in the darkness, hidden laughter, real and delicious food

I really like this kind of Hong Kong TV dramas about the scholarly genre. The logic is normal and there are no nonsensical characters. I hope it can have a good ending.

What an auspicious number, hehe! !

This one is not as good as the one you wrote about the invincible hero system. One thing is too long-winded. It could be more compact.

What is the quality of Sanjiang in Qidian? This book seems to be pretty good so far, but it is not on the list. After looking at most of the books on the Sanjiang list, they are not as good as this one. Is it true that you have to pay to go to Sanjiang now?

Don't know what's going on? This kind of writing gives me an unusually familiar feeling. It could have been a book about gods. Unfortunately, the battle process is over-explained. I'm not here to read martial arts secrets. Tell us the calculations in the process at every turn. It's just fun. How do you say it every time? It feels like giving up halfway. Haha, I forget who I was before. I follow the same writing pattern as the boss. It's a pity to abandon it.

You are too arrogant. You have already written tens of thousands of words in the challenge, and you only update 4,000 words a day. What else should I expect from your attitude?

The plot is okay, but it's too long-winded, and it only takes one chapter to explain.

A stallion is not required but a harem is a must!

It's so wordy! Too much nonsense! It doesn't feel better, brother! Come on! !

Well written, don't make any dead ends. If so, it will definitely lead to the collapse of the worldview and cultivation system.

Chapter 54 Harem Tendency Goodbye

Xiao Jiuju wrote dozens of chapters in the early stage. It was too late. It's almost a dozen chapters

After reading the synopsis, I have always had a question about the harem: How can these women with completely different personalities come together? "You said it's not because of feelings, for money, for power, or because of difficulties. The problem is that most of every harem story is about love, which is nonsense. But the one who is entangled with the protagonist is not a genius?" And as long as an outstanding woman has her own character and self-esteem, she cannot accept polygamy. Just like a man cannot accept polygamy, he can have feelings but be a harem? Can't understand

Instead of evolving in the direction of successful themes, he resorts to tricks to write about unpopular stories, and the street boy suffers at his own peril.

Uncle Jiu is not a fool, and the law should not be passed lightly

One chapter is about two-thirds of the introduction. It's boring, so just keep it.

This book is very enjoyable. The protagonist is the quasi-prince of Hong Kong. Don't ask why it is so awesome, because the supernatural system in this book, especially the spiritual fantasy sect, is even more awesome. The protagonist's master, Uncle Feng: the extraordinary governor of Maoshan in Hong Kong, may also be the first extraordinary person in Daqian stationed in Hong Kong. Although he has no rights, he is independent from the system. (Just beat up Superintendent Ghost. ) The reference may be King Arthur, the knight of the Great Ancestor, the Lion-Hearted King of the Holy Cross, the Six-Style Nason of the Navy, the Sun King's He Lun Mie's Hands, the Falling Cherry God's Axe, Dun Huazi, the Vampire Hunter Linggna, and Medog Bangbang. Fist Ning Liehuo is the painter of Tathagata Demon Palm, so Daqian Zhongguo Lao may also be a strong individual. Qian Shengli: Ideal Fist, Military Killing Fist: Qian Huai'an, Military Breaking Fist: Qian Zhu Dao, Bian Fist Qian Ping Gong. There is also a certain iron fist invincible, Lin Bei's legs are crossed, and Chaofan is the real ruler of the world in this book.

I can't stand this novel with a system. In fact, I can also write why I brought the system. 😥

Holy shit, did you make a mistake? Finished the book without reading just a few chapters?

The subject matter of this novel is good, but it collapsed in the end. In fact, the author could consider reviving spiritual energy.

Ever since I read Meet Me Again with Uncle Jiu last year, I can no longer stand all the articles about Uncle Jiu.

What's going on? Why did it end again after I kept raising it?

"I once gave up my official position to fight against the army for my brother Song Jiang!" Hua Rong said proudly. Song Jiang: Then lend me your sister to win over people's hearts. "I once robbed the court and charged into battle for brother Song Jiang!" Li Kui said happily. Song Jiang: Then I'll leave this glass of poisonous wine to you. "I once saved Song Jiang's life and even took care of his father for him!" Zhu Tong said happily. Song Jiang: Then kill your little Ya Nei and come to Liangshan together. "I almost dug out Song Jiang's heart and drank it!" Wang Ying boasted. Song Jiang: Marry him a beautiful woman quickly. "I almost drowned Song Jiang in the river!" Zhang Heng laughed. Song Jiang: Let him replace Ruan Xiaoqi as the leader of the navy. "I cuckolded Song Jiang and almost killed him!" Zhang Wenyuan said proudly. Song Jiang: Send him money quickly to appease his anger and stop the visit. Chao Gai was sitting in the main hall of Juyi Hall, thinking of Song Jiang's different attitudes towards his benefactors and enemies, and he suddenly panicked... "Brother Tianwang, something bad has happened. Zengtou City robbed my Liangshan horses, and even named you to capture you alive!" Song Jiang rushed in and said angrily. Sure enough, I am still too good to Song Jiang....

Killing randomly, the protagonist seems to have a brain, but I always feel that something is wrong.

I still like your Hero System, God of War, and Book Spirit, but it's a pity that the subject matter has changed now.

I've read about twenty chapters, but I'm really not interested. How can you make money if you don't change the way you write? Although the storyteller is terrible, the subject matter interests me and I can order it intermittently. You have nothing to say.

Between this line of writing, there is always a feeling of listening to the narration while watching emoji animations at Bilibili, or falling asleep while listening to a book...