I Am Cultivating Immortality in Martial Arts Games

Which version of cultivating immortality is this? Qi training starts with a light body technique, and twists and seals, and then directly starts to draw talismans in the Hundred Arts of Cultivation, and then comes to formations, and there are no melee methods. Is cultivating immortals so low?

How to convert the martial arts level and the immortal cultivation level? Will the author not let the readers come and go? It's the same as being a cultivator.

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I can't stand it anymore, I feel like the author has gone astray. The author thinks too much of himself and feels very uncomfortable

It's really interesting. Chapter 4 said that it would be abbreviated to "Peerless Magic Power" from now on, but in Chapter 10, he started copying and pasting again, and slapped himself in the face. Is Shui very happy with the word count or something? Do you still think it's fun to write the name of this exercise? This action dissuades readers

There will be hidden dangers if the magic weapon fragments are not handled well. You can write magic weapon fragments, and the fragments can be high-level materials, but it is best not to have elements of cultivating immortals. At least in the early stage, when readers have not yet formed a habit of reading, do not appear easily. The reason is that readers who are attracted by the title and introduction of the book must be more or less inclined to see the protagonist's "only one method" plot. The appearance of "magic weapon" means that there are other people in the world who have mastered the way of cultivating immortality, and are even ahead of the protagonist. In this way, the feeling of "only one method" is greatly reduced, and the attraction of the novel will also be reduced.

It's the same as the evaluation of the protagonist in the book, idiot! ! !

The author's setting is that you practice martial arts and I will cultivate immortality, and then practicing martial arts and cultivating immortality are only the differences between warriors and mages. It is normal for the blaster to be trained in martial arts.

The subject matter is quite good, but it's a pity that it's unfinished.

The writer didn't understand the core point of a novel, so the writing was a complete mess. What's the point of it? Don't you know

Foundation building has 200 points more spiritual power than Qi refining? Are you cultivating a fake immortal?

I read Chapter 15 and had a few chats. The pace feels a bit slow. The first fifteen chapters feel like playing a single game. There is no interaction with other players except selling money. It is like laying the background. What can I do, what else can I do, what abilities do I have, and what other abilities do I have. And the pace feels a bit slow. We only reached the third level of Qi training in the fifteenth chapter, which is equivalent to the third level in the game. It's not that exciting. After the fifteenth chapter, there can be a small explosion, but the result is mediocre.

Aren't the Eighty-nine Mysterious Techniques and the Nine Transformation Golden Body all cultivation techniques for immortality? Orthodox cultivation of immortality pays attention to both cultivation of life and death. Even if you are not specialized in close combat methods, you will definitely be able to do so. I don't understand why the author directly equated immortal cultivators with Western magicians. Here, cultivating immortals becomes a diudio monster who can only use long-range skills and a melee weakling who cannot restrain a chicken. And Moreover, the protagonist in the article has always looked down on warriors. According to the author's writing, warriors are no worse than those who cultivate immortals. Where does the protagonist have the courage to look down on them? The combination of these two poisonous points is as if the author directly equates immortal cultivators with Western magicians. The superior long-range immortal cultivators look down on melee warriors and feel that they are superior to others. The more they look at it, the more awkward they become.

The introduction is okay, it's a third-level writer, you can't guarantee he'll show it to you that day

I've already thought of the next divine thunder for you. Purple Xiao Divine Thunder: Created by Heaven, the seventy-twofold Zixiao Divine Thunder is said to be able to destroy immortals and gods. It is divided into eight systems. The eight systems are divided into Yi Mu Zheng Lei, Bing Huo Yang Lei, Guishui Yin Lei, Geng Jin Jie Lei, Wu Tu Ming Lei, Evil Killing God Thunder, God Killing Demon Thunder, and Life and Death Purple Thunder. This is the final version. Five Elements Divine Thunder: Yimu Divine Thunder, Binghuo Divine Thunder, Guishui Divine Thunder, Gengjin Divine Thunder, Wutu Divine Thunder

Can practicing Qi destroy mountains? Can foundation building break the city? Can the formation of pills destroy a country? Can Nascent Soul destroy stars? If you can't do that, is it still called cultivating immortality?

Let me go, why does that woman always come out to cause trouble? The protagonist likes to meddle so much.

This woman is really poisonous. She wants to die on her own. She has nothing to do with the protagonist. It is really frustrating to see her insisting on being an acquaintance.

I can't bear it anymore. I am refining elixirs and practicing every day. I don't care about accepting my younger brother. I don't know what to do...🤔

Finished just after you started writing?

It was a bit frustrating to watch. There were obviously many places that could be enjoyable, but they were made frustrating by the character of the protagonist set by the author.

As soon as I saw the name of the exercise, I lost the desire to continue reading.

You can't even refine the flying sword, but you still have to pick it up and get the real poison.

Entering the game, the protagonist feels like being knocked unconscious, so is the player really knocked unconscious? I remember in another novel, the system is disguised by the light spell. Going to the dungeon means knocking it out physically and then moving to other worlds to read the archive, which means going back in time. So is this book also in a similar situation?

I think it might look better if the protagonist was an Aboriginal.

This is the most embarrassing cultivator I have ever seen

Nothing exciting, just plain boring.

The author hopes that this book will not have a female protagonist, which feels good.

The writing is very good and it will become better and better in the future.

Why does the card end like this? It's much better than this.