Start Practicing from the Game

Let me talk about my feelings after reading the first 30 chapters. I personally feel that drug resistance is okay, so I can accept the slow development of the plot at the beginning. I can tolerate that the protagonist plays the game with his life but can't give up the money. After all, there is no danger in the early stage. It's okay to not spend money, but the plot starts to weaken later on. I got smart; first of all, the author himself replied to a comment, which was about making money by reselling things in the mall, but was forced to use them. The selling price in the mall is the same as the purchase price. I don't believe that there is nothing in the mall that can be resold, so I just dig out the shit. If I dig out the shit, it will cost five thousand gold a day. What next? There is no more, the author just keeps writing about scooping out feces, completely forgetting what the purpose of scooping out feces is, just to make money and deliver it by courier? There is really no plot about using money to become stronger. If you didn't spend cash before, forget it, but now you don't spend money and wait to die? And the plot is really rubbish. It's understandable that you use Qinggong to wear out your legs and take medicine, but you just spent 5,000 on yourself to buy a very good elixir? ? ? Then why don't you compare it? What other better effects does the good elixir have? As for why so many people criticize it? Finally, Chapter 30 is even more outrageous. A medicine to eliminate evil spirits is worth eight thousand gold. I don't understand the meaning of this plot at all. It's just a waste of money and disgusting. By the way, if you read it, you will probably remember that the protagonist enters the game to ask his brother for an explanation. , Good guy, I can accept this setting of forcing the call to be unreachable in reality, but you, the money you make from picking up shit is enough for you to buy hundreds of them, and I won't see you buying any until you die. Contact your friends, just forget about it, just pick up shit and be happy, ask your brother to pick you up? Everyone says that if the protagonist sells something too good, he will be targeted easily, so wouldn't selling it to his brothers be a good solution? Isn't this something you can think of with your brain?

Author, please change the introduction. It feels too old-fashioned.

Introduction and Content Differences Series, I went to a unique mall, but when it was put on the shelves, it still didn't reflect anything. This is basically a fantasy novel covered in the skin of a game.

Seeing Yu Xiaoman tell the truth, I really don't like this setting. "Gu Zhenren" also has this setting, but it's just the protagonist's enemy. The feeling that he can't die no matter how hard he kills is too discouraging! Nowadays, the female supporting role has the same setting, which gives the impression that the protagonist is just playing catch-up when following the female supporting role! Who is the protagonist?

The author can write more about reality and cheats. After all, many people come here to read because of the powerful cheats. You don't use them very much, and it doesn't look very good. I will support the author with my monthly vote. I hope the author will write better in the future.

The jump in progress is a bit hard to accept. The level has increased too much. A wave of dungeons will directly skip the level. The process depends entirely on the halo of the protagonist.

Saw more than 30 chapters. I still can't see the upgrade progress? It is recommended that the author add a (1/100) after each detail, otherwise you will upgrade for 3000, and then upgrade for 5000. If you know, we don't know, it's very uncomfortable to see. . . If the author made changes after chapter 30, just pretend you didn't see it. If you haven't changed it, please modify it (for example, the fifth level of body forging (20/100), the bladeless sword attack (30/1000), and the collapse of the sky (1/10)). In this way, there is another way to upgrade without writing so much. Either write it clearly and look at the Qi and blood. The mortal realm is 10 points for the first level and 30 points for the second level. As the Qi and blood go up, it will be upgraded. . Your realm is blurred,

This is not a cool article, just a simple article. It's not fun, and there aren't a lot of silly main and supporting characters. If you like watching fantasy, it's perfect for those who like watching games.

It feels like every time the protagonist fights with someone, he is beaten. If the protagonist hits someone and crushes it a little, the reader will feel better. I don't know if it's right to turn off the point, and whether it will be helpful to the author. It can be used as a reference. It means that the protagonist beats the enemy to death and relieves his anger. When the protagonist fights with others, he must have an advantage. He has always been weak, and it feels a little frustrating to watch. After all, he is the protagonist. It is fun to watch, and the reward should be more. 😜. At the end of the day, I wish the author better and better books as he writes, more and more money, and better days as time goes by.

The male protagonist has broken through the fourth wall. Although it is not stated in the book, the male protagonist does know that he is the protagonist and he will not die. When the real body has not entered the world of divine martial arts, it is understandable to occasionally commit suicide. After all, death in the game only has a high probability of death. As the European Emperor, I will never die. After having a source of life, there is no scruple about committing suicide. After all, if you have an extra life, the big deal is to load files. I didn't expect that my true body had entered the realm of divine martial arts and my life source was gone, yet I was still playing a game with myself. After triggering the mission, the first thing I thought about was whether I could complete all the missions. Is it just a matter of reaching the peak of Dan Formation? How can I not just surrender in front of me at the third level of the Qi Sea Realm? The author has long told me that I will never die. Even if I am near death, the reward after completing the mission can bring me back. He is so confident! What? Has your body been hollowed out by supernatural powers? It's okay, the author will definitely be able to think of a way to save me before I die. There is someone above me! It doesn't matter if I pull out the demon-breaking knife. Someone will pull it out sooner or later without me. The demon general will definitely break the seal anyway. Was Zhou Chisheng corrupted by the demon? What does it have to do with me? Maybe my actions have had some impact on others, but I will not blame myself for all the results, and I will not feel guilty about it. Isn't it enough to help you escape? You can also get a lot of rewards, earn money with your blood! As the protagonist, my future is bright, and the path is prepared by the author. I just need to be reckless. Everything I should have will be there, and we all have a bright future. This is Lu Yu, a being who has broken through the fourth wall. The above is the legacy of Shennong. The following is an encouragement to the author. Come on, think more about it. If you were Lu Yu, wouldn't you be afraid of death?

If Goldfinger Mall can buy everything in the game with gold coins, the protagonist can open an auction house for players. They only sell real currency and use it to recharge. Anyway, you can buy cheats and anything else. You just need to practice quietly or kill monsters to gain experience. There is no need to go here and there anymore.

Forced wisdom. In the first chapter, it was said that when the game dies, reality will die as well. This is how stupid people are to believe that this is just a game. How many people can play a game that can kill people? The biggest force in the future will basically be the army.

I really can't stand a logical problem: my friend has already said that the game may be dead, and the protagonist's telegraph in the mall only costs 100 yuan. In the early stage, the protagonist has no skills and resources. This friend has been playing since he was a child, so he never thought of asking friends for help. If you want to write about the main character growing up on his own, can you not write anything that can connect him with his friends? . . . . Not to mention that after writing dozens of chapters, I didn't write about the cheats in shopping malls. In reality, the protagonist's appetite and strength have greatly increased. I want to lower my intelligence and describe the reasons why the protagonist is not aware of the game.

The previous story is okay, but the plot of the town is a bit confusing. I don't understand why a little beggar is added. The little beggar wants to use the protagonist as a shield when we meet him at the beginning, but later on he spends a lot of money to save her. The key point is that the little beggar is a woman. You have to write her as a male. Even if she is killed later, I think it can still be watched. And it is clearly said that the little beggar is still a woman. He had to hide himself, but he was immediately exposed in order to save the little beggar, and the money system is indeed a bit broken. Personally, I feel that the author's writing and plot are good, but there are too many old routines. I hope that the author's next book will not have so many poisonous points. After all, reading the same routine too much will cause aesthetic fatigue. Come on, author, I am still very optimistic about you.

The beginning is good, five-star praise; But it has nothing to do with the krypton gold theme written in the introduction; It says at the beginning that sending a message is expensive, 100 points coupons, and selling iron essence 4 thousand gold = 40,000 points coupons. Didn't you think of sending a message to your friends? When I get injured at the third level of body refining, I need to buy a high-level healing elixir worth several thousand gold? When the injury is healed, go dig for iron essence, but when you are tired, buy high-end elixirs? The little girl is sick and buys high-end elixirs? The previous plot is really good. Once the money system is added, it collapses instantly. If you feel the same way, give it a thumbs up.

There is no need for golden fingers, the upgrade is slow, there are many levels, and there is no fun to see. What's the point of writing well? This is an online novel.

It would be nice to have one of the ten chapters that is about reality. If it's not to show off in reality... Then why are you reading this novel?

After reading dozens of chapters, this book clearly feels like a book written by a newcomer. The advantages and disadvantages are obvious. The book has good ideas, but there are many logical errors. Some authors realized that they did not fix them in the later corrections, but made them even worse. The character creation is relatively weak, and the dialogue is monotonous, like the dialogue of game NPCs, including the protagonist, and lacks emotion. But overall, it can be said to be readable. As long as you ignore some logical errors without using your brain, it can also be said to be a good book.

The pacing is slow, the plot is mediocre, and there is no golden finger. I want to see the cool novel withdrawn.

I came to Qidian with the intention of reading novels, but I found that the reviews were more exciting than the novels.

Let me make a complaint. Didn't you introduce the game at the beginning? Are you saying that immature game technology will kill people and cause cerebral palsy? Are you sure this game can be released? ? Later, when I entered the game, I became a guardian and learned boxing and talked about the realm. Well, there is no point in playing the realm without playing levels, but then why did I say that his friend was in Tianfeng Academy and he was a guardian? ? Why is it different where you were born? There are still players drinking porridge on the ground in humiliation? Aren't you a time travel game? Disadvantages of Chapter Three

From the beginning of the plot of the stone demon, everything has collapsed. When I read Chapter 31, the price of goods collapsed. It is a very good book, but I insist on dragging out the plot. I earned more than 20,000 gold coins. I first made two healing pills of 5,000 gold coins, and then made an 8,000 gold coin pill to drag the oil bottle, and repaired it myself. It only cost two or three thousand gold coins to refine. I said the villain was strong and didn't dare to expose him. I didn't spend money on training. Instead, I went to kill the stone demon. The dozen or so kilograms of refined iron I saved were all used for healing pills. Don't you think it's not good for you to use it to practice? Isn't it better to dig sand to become stronger when you are strong? A chicken drumstick costs eight coppers, and one gold coin costs ten thousand coppers. First, you spend eighteen thousand gold coins to buy healing pills. You are only in the body refining stage. You are only here, but your prices have already collapsed, and the mall has no sense of existence as a golden finger...

Why does the author always like to jump between chapters and rarely write the connecting content in the middle? This affects the reading experience very much. Can you skip the content? ? Chapters 123-124 skipped another section, and there were many skipped before. Others are talking about all kinds of words, but you just skipped it. . . (Write the ending and the beginning together, don't jump so far)

The main attraction of this book is that there is a separate shopping mall for krypton gold. The author seems not to have taken advantage of it. He has not taken advantage of this key point. In the early stage, it does not seem to be very exciting and cannot retain people. I don't know what will happen in the later stage. I guess the previous book is more suitable for writing about souls traveling into the game world. The mode of playing games with a helmet is incompatible with the writing of this book, and it does not look like a game.

I always think of an embarrassing bug when watching online games. In games such as Swordsman, after playing for a few years, you should be very proficient in skills and so on. In reality, the combat power should not be weak. Although you have no internal strength, aura, etc., Simple skills can already make you extraordinary. However, many online game novels avoid this problem. I can think of it every time I read an online game novel, so I have no interest in online games. What do you think?

I didn't feel anything at all when I started reading it. I just listened to it while working. Since I was short of books, I gave up on it. By the 20th or 30th chapter, I was attracted. Now that I have read more than 60 chapters, I feel that the story is very well written. I don't know what will happen next, I hope the more I write, the better 🙏

The setting is pretty good, and the writing is also good. But I don't know if this is the first time for the author to write an article. There are many bugs. At the beginning, a young master appeared within a few days of practicing. There are different descriptions for 3 days, 2 days, and 1 day. At first glance, it seems that I didn't take notes and just relied on memory. Even if you are a bit player, you still have to be serious. Then the main problem is that the setting of the golden finger has not been considered. Since the iron essence was stolen, the golden finger has had problems. At first I was unwilling to recharge 10 gold coins, but later I spent 5,000 gold coins when I was injured. Moreover, when you have money, you don't have to think of ways to buy things and practice cultivation first, but you don't know what to do with it if you save it. If you are injured, you can use low-level medicine to heal yourself, but you will only buy high-level medicine.

You can become a billionaire all of a sudden. Is the protagonist's IQ insufficient? I don't understand.

It's not five thousand. It's ten thousand. I bought it twice. Including what you mentioned about saving the tail, that's twenty-eight thousand. The top level spiritual weapon only costs 4,300, a single elixir, tsk tsk. Prices are skyrocketing. How long is 10,000 enough for cultivation? If you have to commit suicide by force, is there no way to slow down? Do you have to pay it all? His actions and practices are actually written according to the real world, but in these chapters, I suddenly lost my mind. The author's approach is really mind-blowing. ⁄(⁄⁄⁄ω⁄⁄⁄)⁄

I feel pretty good after reading Chapter 70! 🙂