Start Leveling up from Lumberjack

The protagonist is the one who always answers questions and talks too much nonsense.

The pig's trotter mentality has never changed. It's a pure cow and horse.

The appearance of that princess is definitely a failure. If this kind of plot is not written well, it will easily dissuade readers!

Why doesn't the protagonist practice martial arts? It's not said that the protagonist can't practice martial arts, right?

Is your Joe the same as the Joe from Samsung Cave?

The overall writing is OK, 13 old bookworms identified it as "food and grass"

Although the first chapter does not fit with the introduction and label, you need to understand the problem that the author has gone too far on the road of Dihua. The author is not a human being in the first place. Please understand

Starting from Chapter 47, things took a turn for the worse. The plot writing didn't look like it was written by one person

Hay, if you are not well-read, you can read it, but don't have too high expectations. 1️⃣The world view setting is novel, multiplayer different world game + dual systems, coupled with the ancient in-game attributes and props brought to reality, the setting is quite attractive. 2️⃣But the writing of the fighting scenes is very low, and it looks like a newcomer at first glance. 3️⃣The normal dialogue scenes have a human-machine feel, especially during the fight scenes, there is a lot of bullshit. 4️⃣The character's facial makeup makes it clear that he is not a good person at the first meeting. Is this considered an advantage or a disadvantage?

It doesn't look good. Will the male protagonist only use violence to solve problems?

This is a stand-alone game, otherwise I wouldn't be able to continue playing it.

So far, it looks okay. The protagonist is mainly leveling up in Shilipo. There are few people and things involved. The full picture of modern society and the game world has not been unfolded. There are not many characters and players. Whether this book can be written well depends on whether the author's hard power can support the framework and write the story and characters brilliantly. As a reader, I can only say good luck to the author.

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