Start Liver Skill from Skeleton

Overall it's pretty good so far, but the key operations on your phone aren't enough for you to type out those operations.

The writing is okay, but the Special Affairs Bureau could definitely teach them a lesson.

If there is no special sentence, I will give it nine points. If there is a special game, it can only pass with six points. Every time I read it well, there will always be a special game to feed Shi.

The latest chapter is a little better now. It explains why he was willing to compromise with the special situation. However, there is still a poisonous point, that is, he brought out the Philosopher's Stone for a few pieces of information. This is a major compromise. Next time, he will definitely go further. It depends on how the author handles it. I think the protagonist's true identity will be found soon and he will have to fight.

If you squint at this cover of yours, it looks like a human face. It makes you laugh so hard😏😏

Starting from Chapter 45, the more I write, the more it feels like a history.

The ability was okay to use, but in Chapter 40, the protagonist treated reality as a game and went crazy and ran away.

The Special Bureau won't kill? If you want to kill Spade, you will also kill the special game. If you don't kill you, you will be considered your mother player.

This book is not good, I give it 8 points for creativity, and the relationship between the characters is not handled well. Except for the protagonist, other characters are not fleshed out enough. The official version is too stupid. This book is a shame.

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I hope people other than the protagonist can write smarter things. Don't we usually investigate first and then draw conclusions? Don't be stupid unless necessary.

The writing feels a bit contradictory. You already know that you can make the monsters you control travel to reality, but you are now suspicious of the low battery consumption of your mobile phone after playing for several hours.

The writing is very good, but why are there so few people 😰

It was originally good, but it's a pity that it's disgusting to lick it all the time.

Stop writing. The protagonist is being teased in various ways even though he is awesome.

Keep up the good work and write well. I gave the monthly ticket

Are there too many segments? There are basically no commas, just periods. It feels weird and a bit uncomfortable.

Although it ended very quickly, it was not unfinished and the ending was a mess.

{"NickName":"Lonely Hero","UserId":209472123} Dear author, are you writing new books?