I Built the Dragon Palace at the Bottom of the Bluestone Pond

The protagonist is a loser, oh no, saying he is a loser is just to praise him

After reading this book, the more I think about it, the more uncomfortable I feel. I still want to come back and scold him. He is a garbage protagonist. He is a waste. Ugh, what a waste of time.

The writing is too detailed. It took so long to weave the net and return it to the water. As a business article, these should be skipped. Just mention a few strokes. Also, don't arrange so many levels at once. It's enough to see the upper, middle and lower levels. There are also prehistoric times. It's tiring to see so many levels. Don't be so hasty in the construction of the Crystal Palace. You are the lowest level monster. You have to work hard for a few years and practice a few spells. Because fish can also make clouds and rain to accumulate merit. Then dig a bigger river. Understand. Let's take a look at the situation nearby. If ordinary people just learn the written language of this world, construction will be secondary. Although there is a system, high-level crystal stones are too easy to come by. If you don't do well, you will be taken care of by the strong. Don't be carried away by the system. Now there are fewer and fewer system texts. You can do whatever the system tells you. How can it be more fun? The most popular simulator now only reincarnates once, and then learns everything by relying on the protagonist to steal and steal.

Don't be too funny and clever, otherwise it will feel a bit embarrassing and a bit nondescript. I feel that you want to create a relaxed and cheerful writing style, but it feels a little awkward. Should we make him more normal or more passionate? A little bit of strategy and calculation? Farming or something like that (dog head saves life, don't spray, don't spray)

Although I am a newbie, I think the settings are really self-consistent. Shennong tasted it and didn't say it was poisonous. He only said it was boring (┯_┯). Some book friends complained that the settings were reasonable and almost broke my defense. You could open the settings and let me see which one you like. . Isn't there anything in this book that will make book lovers happy? Could it be that the story I wrote with my luck pen is really a piece of shit? I don't believe it! ! ! The author felt guilty and punished me to go to bed early at night. ⊙ω⊙

What exactly is a star soul? You need a star soul to use magical powers. The lottery is called a star soul. The prize you draw is also called a star soul. What is the upper limit of the number of creatures under your command? If you have a star soul Qizhi, you can directly join your command. But if you don't have a star soul Qizhi, it will be considered part of the star soul after conquering it. Can you communicate in the sea of consciousness? There is no specific description. As a farming novel, there is not much development. The protagonist does not help his subordinates at all except for system rewards to improve their qualifications. Weapon skills are not written at all. They keep writing about someone's improvement, which is completely wrong. The most outrageous thing is that after transforming into a dragon, he has become a dragon monster. , The potential is not as high as the two lobster brothers. I really like to read this kind of article about farming and developing forces, but so far the setting of recruiting brothers is not clear. The development is just a dragon palace. I wrote two chapters for one development policy, but the fourth and fifth chapters were not implemented. I hope the author can work hard. Well, this system is really a failure. It limits the conditions for development. You must meet the conditions to establish a force to get more rewards. The rewards given are also very restricted. You have to use Star Soul to cast it. It just gives you a target and suddenly tells you that you cannot start progress if the conditions are not met, which makes development delay again and again.

Otherwise, it would be worse than a lobster if it didn't transform into a dragon. Even if it has to fill a hole, this paragraph is disgusting. Poisonous escort

I can understand your two and a half stars for an ordinary little carp But three stars after you turn into a dragon? How many lobsters are there? Five stars! . . . . . Seriously, your book is doomed Two hundred chapters is considered a lot

The protagonist, a carp that transforms into a dragon, has a mid-level three-star potential, which is not as high as that of two lobsters. This book is no longer available.

After reading the introduction, I feel that it doesn't work. Dawei Tianlong is the spell used by Fahai in Green Snake to eliminate demons. Dawei refers to Dawei Deming King, and Tianlong refers to the heavenly dragons. It's none of your business as a little country monster.

Tell a joke, a pure dragon is not as talented as a shrimp

The strength of the protagonist ☞The introduction is awesome, but the text is trash! I don't understand, the introduction is very impressive, but the text is all kinds of edgy!

I didn't see that Gou, it was exposed later, and the protagonist and the system are quite useless.

? ? ? ? ? Did you write so much just to make the protagonist suffer? There is absolutely no need to deliberately suppress it.

The qualifications for the protagonist to be promoted to dragon species are lower than those of the shrimps and crabs under him. Later, it was said that the protagonist's paper bloodline for being promoted to the middle-grade three-star dragon clan was extraordinary, but the immortal dragon king was only a low-grade eight-star (no matter how many shrimps and crabs you had were all top-grade seafood), I really couldn't complain and just clicked x and left.

Is it possible to start writing a book some years later from the introduction? ? ?

I strongly recommend the author to read "Starting with White Carp". Although the plot is quite boring and there is nothing to write about, the writing style is quite good and the descriptions are spot on.

Let's judge whether it's poisonous or not. If you have a chance to draw a lottery and don't choose to upgrade, the silver carp will directly become a white dragon. The white dragon is a real dragon, right? It's middle grade? Worse than those two shrimps, isn't it poisonous?

Before I read the book, I read the reviews, and they were all bad news After looking at them, the main drawbacks are the unreasonable qualification settings and the system itself. The latter can be changed. Since the author said that the settings of the former are self-consistent, it is better to explain it. Let's retain people first. Don't make any foreshadowing. Everyone has gone and can't wait for your foreshadowing.

I really can't stand the system. It asks you to do this and that inexplicably. It's frustrating, but the protagonist is still very happy.

Dear book friends, this is a new and tender seedling that is waiting for care. Please don't hesitate to click and collect it when you pass by. Thank you very much!