From the Power of Space to the Heavens

The Douluo chapter has many poisonous points. First, the protagonist experienced Tang Hao's suppression when he was a child. Why was he so arrogant when he was in Slime Academy? Is this exaggeration? Are you confident that you can suppress Tang Hao? The original author, Tang Hao, has been paying attention to it. Second, when I was a child, generally an adult would not target the protagonist in this way, even in disguise. Later, I met the protagonist again and talked about the past. This is obviously not right. It seems that the original protagonist is petty and selfish. Even if Tang San himself has this character, he should have a basic disguise. Yue Buqun can pretend to be a gentleman. Tang San seemed to have no city at all, and the more he lived, the more he went back. Third, why can't we respect the original characters? The confrontation between the protagonist and Tang San really seems childish and imposed. I came here for the fox demon, and I was a little disappointed after looking at the front.

It's a bit clever. Basically, all the characters in the original version have been changed into villains to highlight the rz pig horns. This thing can be read into three chapters, and they are all Shennong-level characters.

The writing after 100 chapters is so long-winded. I insist on writing a few sentences in a literary style, which is nonsense.

Is it necessary for one or two transition words to occupy a line each time? But..., So..., It's a pity..., Not to mention...; Is it necessary to write so many additional psychological activities and irrelevant descriptions between two sentences? Some even last several pages. Isn't it nice to be concise and clear?

1. It's okay to spray, and it's justified. 2. Squirting is allowed, but personal attacks are prohibited. 3. Spraying is allowed, but spreading to other book friends is prohibited.

Sit down, do you want to write well, then take a look at the shortcomings I have proposed for this book for you. After the third golden paragraph, you started not to write seriously. First, you said that the protagonist lived alone in the Star Forest for six years with hatred for Tangshan and his son. He experienced countless life and death, and was covered with scars, but he finally survived. But in this case, the protagonist has not developed a dark character? ? You have to know that the protagonist spent six years jumping between life and death repeatedly, and he still survived with hatred for others. Under such circumstances, the protagonist has not yet developed a dark character. Do you think this is reasonable? ? ? Even a naturally optimistic person would probably turn dark in this situation! ! Of course, the protagonist also tortured Tangshan afterwards. But what I want to talk about is the protagonist. I have only seen 30 pictures, but I have seen several times here where the main character is crazy and loses control of Bigger. This makes people feel that it is very dramatic. The originally aloof image has instantly turned into a loser! Has your true nature been exposed? Author! Besides, even if the protagonist doesn't turn black in that situation, he shouldn't look like a loser. Aren't countless life-and-death moments and scars all over his body not enough to change the character of a loser? ? ? Sit down and try your best to change it! You can't look at me and feel embarrassed for you! ! !

For example, stretching the space, stretching the tiny space distance to infinity, and no attack can get close Another example is compressing the space, compressing the extremely distant space distance to within a short distance, one can reach the stars with one hand, and can take one step to infinity Another example is the space dislocation, every particle of the body is destroyed. The spatial position of the particle moves, but the spatial continuity is maintained. Only the absolute position in the universe changes, but the relative position of the body particles does not change. Isn't this equivalent to elementalization and quantization There is also the use of space elasticity to accelerate objects to the speed of light. Isn't this a light particle attack? Also, if the target is fixed at absolute coordinates relative to the universe, based on the moving speed of the nebula in the universe, it will probably be thrown out of the Milky Way in the next second. Isn't this relative to space exile? There is also the disconnection of the space continuity of the object attacking the target, and the spatial position of each particle is moved. Isn't this the Great Disintegration Technique? Also, it seems that you are in space position A, but in fact you are in space position C. Move the attack directly to space position B. Note that you are using your ability to move and attack directly, not to open a space channel or something. It is teleportation. In this way, as long as others are not attacking position C, they cannot hit you at all. This is not equivalent to attack immunity.

Are you all devils? ? ? Do you still need to talk to me about the cecum problem? ? ? Some people always say "hemorrhoids at eight years old". Where is the cecum? Wouldn't you go to Baidu to find a flat view to see for yourself? ? ? Take a good look and stop asking about hemorrhoids, okay? ? ? The anal canal is connected to the rectum, and the cecum is at the appendix! ! ! When I say cecum, I mean that the protagonist's stomach was attacked by a spirit beast, which opened a large hole and accidentally nicked the cecum. Later, it was repaired with space and soul power, and it recovered as before. It's not hemorrhoids! ! !

Author, I'm very curious, can you explain your definition of space in the book? Let me see if I can open my mind and think about space attack methods.

I frowned from the first chapter, and the more I read, the more I frowned. After dozens of chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. Let's talk about it first. Tang San was a killer in his previous life. There must be something wrong with his brain. You still have to mess with him. Tang Hao is a protector, aren't you asking for trouble? I wouldn't have asked for a place in school in the first place. This way it's safer from the start. As for the issue of going to school, you are gifted with soul power, and you have figured out that your martial soul is so powerful in space. Then you must go to Wuhun Hall to report and hug you. Wuhun Hall will definitely train you. Even if you don't focus on training, you will still be better than yourself. As for Tang San and his son, why don't you just keep them in trouble by quietly spreading the news, and then find an opportunity to steal the fairy grass? It would be great to become a god steadily step by step, it would be comfortable to read, and you could write hundreds of chapters.

I just want to know if this can never go back? Forcing to change the map is okay. . . Obviously it's not finished yet, it's forced to be finished, which seems a bit confusing. . .

He had become enemies with Tang Hao and Tang San at the beginning. It would be unreasonable not to kill these two people later on. If he couldn't defeat Tang San openly, he could also use some tricks in the dark. Tang San was almost at level 30. Xing Dou's Man-Faced Demon Spider was killed before Tang San. If it was handled well, Xiao Wu could be killed on the way back from Er Ming, and the fairy grass would be destroyed even if it was taken away, and Tian Dou's Poseidon's Heart would be taken if he could get it, and even if he couldn't get it, Tang San couldn't get it. After that, even if Xiao Wu is not dead, she can use her space ability to transfer Xiao Wu to Bibi Dong. In this way, even if Xiao Wu is not dead, she can still kill Tang San. She also has to secretly take away the silver seeds behind the Holy Soul Village. When she has the strength to compete with Tang Hao in front of him, Tang Hao's face fed Ah Yin's seeds to the soul beast, and then ran away. Even if Tang Hao was angry, he couldn't find the protagonist and could only be incompetent and furious. Anyway, it was Tang San's opportunity that he could take if he could, and destroy if he could. As long as it disgusted Tang San and his family, they could do whatever they wanted.

I don't want the protagonist to accept Bibi Dong, I feel like she is a lunatic, and if I want to accept Qian Renxue, it's best not to accept Bibi Dong, it's easy 404, if I really want to accept Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, their character design will collapse. Neither Bibi Dong nor Qian Renxue will accept this kind of thing

The writing is a bit disgusting, and the protagonist is written like a victim, which seems to think too highly of oneself. Tang Hao interferes in the competition between the protagonist and Tang San to suppress the protagonist for a work-study student spot? Tang San lost only a few gold soul coins, and it was the same as enrolling in school normally. Do you think Tang Hao will take action? This kind of writing method forcibly makes the characters become intelligent. Moreover, the protagonist is innately full of soul power, and there are only a few of them on the mainland in a hundred years. Tang Hao suppresses him instead of wooing him, which is a typical behavior of Shi Lezhi.

The Douluo chapter is all ordered, but this ending always feels awkward. Come on, I haven't read Fox Demon and Zhu Xian yet, so I'll wait until the next copy to read it. This Douluo chapter is really beautiful and it surprised me.

The good thing about the protagonist's style of doing things is that he is too murderous, and there is no room for things to be done even if there is a small conflict (you don't leave a thin line in life, just teach him a lesson for small things, and those who have been taught will not dare to mess with the protagonist after seeing how powerful he is, but he just Even if he is offended to death, he will kneel down and kowtow at every turn. If he can't win now, he will fight the protagonist to the death) To put it bluntly, he is a mad dog (probably he has become mentally ill after six years in Xingdou). A small conflict will define the opponent as a mortal enemy

It's a bit funny. The author is too pretentious. The protagonist has not yet cleared Douluo. He dies of frustration and then travels to other worlds. It's not that Demon Fox is not good, it's just that the starting point is the home of most Japanese two-dimensional comics, and domestically produced ones are not popular, let alone Chinese comics. It can be expected that the performance of this book will get worse and worse. From now on, either use love to generate electricity or enter the palace. There is no other choice.

After reading the Douluo chapter, I couldn't hold my breath and couldn't spit it out. It was so uncomfortable. I was dominated by hatred in the past, but I came back to cause trouble. The plot is reasonable and quite satisfying. After that, I regained my original intention and understood that it was okay to do what I did, and it was okay to have affairs with several women. I faced my heart calmly and did not say one thing and do another. After all, Douluo would not come back later. High energy ahead! I will leave the Douluo section later. I won't talk about other rights and wrongs. I will just talk about the various threats from the Rakshasa God, the injustice of the Shura God, the inability to protect everything I love and cherish, the powerlessness, humiliation, and the dignity of being given alms! I was forced to use my life to amplify it, and I let out all the cruel words, thinking that I could have a hearty climax. Result? A lot of nonsense, a lot of reasoning, a bunch of unrelated villains and gods were killed, some rules were made, and some funeral arrangements were made. Then what? If the protagonist has no backup, what kind of tragic ending will everything related to him and everything he cherishes have after his death? In the case where the amplified summons can crush everything and say harsh words, the Rakshasa God who caused this situation is treated lightly and only compensates for a divine position, and the Shura God who protects the Rakshasa God also compensates for a divine position (you must know that maintaining the rules and shielding criminals is even more hateful). Then what? No more😱😱😱That's it? That's it? That's it? Frustrated!

Why do so many people like to write about the fantasy world of garbage sewers like Douluo? Just because there are so many female characters? It's really the lower body that determines the head😓😓😓

I read this in another book "Guess why Tang Hao drags his wife around even though he knows that she is a 10-year-old soul beast?"

Chapter 34: Leaving, I don't know yet whether this book is a harem, whether there is a female protagonist, whether it will take a girl to time travel, currently the protagonist has not recommended a girl, just for the current protagonist's behavior of taking a bite of a girl when he sees one, I don't want this protagonist!

It looks strange, the genre camps are a bit chaotic First of all, let's talk about the novice villages. There are not many novice villages in the Holy Soul Village at present. Now Douluo fans have entered the period of fighting between gods born in different camps and original plots. The biggest feature of this type of book is the early stage. At least the first forty or fifty chapters are all original plots, and then after forty or fifty chapters, the plot of the original Shitadake Academy will be involved. The novice village in this book is the Holy Soul Village. Generally, there are two routes. One is to go to the Junior Soul Master Academy there and then Shi Da Ke Academy; the other is to join other camps and develop. I used to spend six years in the junior soul master academy there. At that time, the popularity of rogue rabbits was quite high, and staying there was just digging rabbits. Now that Rascal Rabbit is not very popular, there is no plot to stay there for six years. Because the Rogue Rabbit, like Doupo's Gu Linger, was captured when they were young, and it was still popular to poach the Rogue Rabbit in the early days, so I compromised with the plot and spent six years to change the rabbit. Even if it doesn't take six years, it will take a few days to defeat Rogue Rabbit quickly. As a novice village, one of the ways to play in Holy Soul Village is to dig out the original heroine, just like the beginning of the Xiao family in Dou Po, where they dig out the original heroine. Obviously, the author did not interfere with Rabbit's six-year elementary school career. The author took the route of enmity with Sancute. Theoretically speaking, since we have made a feud, we must find a hostile force to join us. It is better to follow the side plot of Qibao Glazed Sect, or go directly to Tiandou to meet Qian Renxue, and then start the side plot of Qian Renxue. You have made enemies, but you still don't leave. Instead, you continue to prepare for the plot of Big Shit Academy. This is the biggest unreasonable thing. After seeing this, I feel that the author must be a new author. Those who play the side plot of Shit Dako Academy are now more and more backstabbing old silver coins. In the previous confrontation between the author and the six-year-old San Guege, Tang Dachui shamelessly and secretly attacked him. If he was too good at Shi Dako Academy or his hostility to Tang San was too obvious, would Dachui attack him directly? It seems contradictory. He was shameless in the past, but he immediately became a good person in the back. The mainstream of Douluo fandom is divided into three groups: enemies and enemies, which indirectly cannot avoid a big problem. You are too good. What if Tang Dachui shamelessly attacks you? So most of the passable Douluo fellows directly join the big forces, such as Bibi Dong Pope Palace, Qian Renxue Enshrinement Hall, Soul Beast Forest, and Seven Treasures Glazed Sect. These all have thugs with level 95+. Or direct system text or plug-in text, allowing you to directly or indirectly possess the strength of Titled Douluo. Then let's talk about Shitadako Academy's backstabbing style. Shitadako Academy's biggest backer is Sledgehammer, but Sledgehammer can only make one honest move, and he will be exposed and wanted for doing so. So the relationship between Zou Shi Da Ke Academy and San Cut Cut is apparently better in the early stage. Because you are too good and you are hostile to San Cut Cut, what should I do if Sledgehammer is shameless and helps kill San Cut Cut in advance? So this is the reason why the backstab flow was born, and it is generally more rational. Or just skip the plot of Big Shit Academy. In the middle of the indicator, there will be super thugs following you, and then you will slightly go through the side plot of Big Shit Academy to enhance your sense of presence. On the whole, it's not that the author's writing is not good, but that the original plot is not good. I don't have the ability to create original plots. I followed the route of Shitadake Academy map, and I was hostile to Sancutejie in the early stage, but I didn't join other forces. It felt strange. It's like forcibly merging several Douluo fanfics from different factions. I stopped watching Shitadako Academy after seeing it. You can guess the plot of the following episodes just by looking at the chapter names. This reason is also one of the reasons for the decline of tuanliu. Nowadays, Douluo fans who have many original plots generally play like this. The original plots in the first forty or fifty chapters indirectly tell readers, believe me, I have original ability. These contents are not in the original work. Then in the mid-term, we will follow the plot of Shitadako Academy, pretending to be cool, poaching beauties, making trouble, and cutting off opportunities to cut off opportunities. Just to make it feel better. Finally, I'm looking forward to the author's next book. The author's writing skills are good, and his original plot ability may be due to a new author. The plot of Shit Big Academy is understandable.

The old lady's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long. Six thousand words are written about the siege of the Motie mercenary group. Another six thousand words are about the rescue😴. Another six thousand words are about asking the people in the mercenary group if they want to resurrect the dead, and then they are resurrected🤔

If nothing else, I am just curious, and there is no divine test, how did the four thousand years come about? Especially how did the first ring of ten thousand years come about? And for an attached soul bone, the fifth soul ring lasts two thousand years?

For example, if you write "I want to buy a piece of soap", just one sentence is enough. The author can tell you "how the soap is made - what raw materials it is made of - what the raw materials are - how the raw materials grow - where the raw materials are grown - who grows the raw materials." You can explain it, but there are too many, and it can be mentioned from the North Pole to the Antarctic.

I wonder if there was no outline at the beginning, and then the character of the protagonist changed to that...

Shennong, come out quickly 😆

The plot is still very good, but there are too many psychological descriptions. In fact, the Douluo chapter is okay at the beginning, but it becomes more and more broken later on. The plot becomes incoherent and has strong divisions. The ending is too sloppy, and the protagonist's character is too multi-faceted and too out of the ordinary. It may be that the author just started writing the novel, and the writing is a bit poor. I hope the author can work harder. As for the heroine, a harem is okay, but it cannot be written that the heroine falls in love with the protagonist for no reason. At least there must be a plot like Hu Liena's. She is in danger at the beginning, protects Hu Liena, covers her evacuation, and then falls in love with her. This is okay, at least there is foreshadowing. There is no foreshadowing like Ning Rongrong's, and she falls in love with the protagonist out of nowhere. It feels weird. Also, the psychological thoughts are too long-winded, which seems to lower my IQ, especially the fox fairy chapter. I hope that when writing the protagonist, I will focus on the details of the battle, the emotional dialogue of the characters, and the author is a bit unclear about the truth. There is also a new copy of time travel. The author has a deep understanding of space, and then discovered the heavens and worlds, and then used his own cultivation to forcefully travel across the world.

The author finally finished it, and it ended with flowers 🙂

Although the life span and strength of the soul ring written in it are somewhat inconsistent with the rules, the character of the protagonist is very awesome (I don't know how to describe it, so I can only use the word awesome). Although I only read the first part, the character and style of the protagonist are well written, and he is not influenced by others at all. He is a little bit like Fang Yuan (note: I only read the first part). They can be regarded as one of the top ones in fan fiction.