I Never Wanted to Live Again

Come on, urban literature is now dominated by their single female protagonists.

Lao Zhou has a way of writing female characters, which is PUA. If you want to achieve success in urban writing, the protagonist must not have a dog-licking and compromising mentality. Instead, the woman can have it. This is abnormal, but the sense of substitution is extremely strong and refreshing, so you can learn a little bit.

Ah... Isn't this a harem story? ! Why did it become a stallion story? ! ! Meet one and love the other? ? ? It's a bit toxic and boring. There could be more female protagonists, but if there are too many, it will be boring. The characters are not well drawn and it's not interesting.

I'm opening a separate post to thank the little sharp master for the reward. Really, I was rewarded by a platinum master. If I don't write it down well, I always feel sorry for the master! During this period, I am also grateful to the brothers who have supported me all the way, including old friends and new friends. I am just a small author, and there is no need to talk about lofty ideals. I will work hard to write a good book until it is completed. I have nothing else to ask for! Thank you everyone!

Author, your book is terrible. Specifically speaking, it is not simple where it should be, and the details are too short. What kind of readers do you want for this book? It must be the harem. But your first heroine, Wan Wan, is inexplicably full of favorability. What do you think about this? Of course, this kind of thing definitely exists in reality, but in novels, logic, goodwill, distance, and proximity are required. These three changes, you have not given any details. There is also the tutoring student, good guy, who is more direct and gets started inexplicably, which is even more fierce than the previous Wanwan. The details above are not enough. The real feeling of discomfort. The tutoring girl gave the protagonist a watch worth tens of thousands of dollars. This was the year 2000. I really didn't understand. What kind of class does it take to bring you and me so close to each other? The tutoring girl doesn't think about this problem, so the tutoring girl's father doesn't think about it? Giving a student a watch worth tens of thousands of dollars without even considering what the child's family would think? But what poisoned me in the end was that, when recruiting employees, they offered an annual salary of 200,000 yuan plus 5% shares. I'm afraid you've forgotten how you managed to get 200,000 yuan. How much was Brother Ma's annual salary in 2000? How about you add some more, add some more shares, and go directly to recruit Brother Xiao Ma? You want to give readers pleasure, not readers to come and see you for fun. Give 200,000 additional shares to an employee who is willing to be won over by a woman to work day and night, you are really awesome. I'm afraid there's no one left in this world. Previously, I kept saying that I would go to the university to recruit good talents. As a result, your forward-thinking vision allowed you to see this? After reading the above ten or twenty chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

Entrepreneurship is written like a play. You beat up a gangster, and then the gangster took a dozen people to mess with the protagonist. The protagonist arranged for the gangster to be the boss. There is also a woman who can hardly support herself, and the protagonist also arranged to be the boss. How capable will this woman be? Just find someone who makes games and be the boss. The protagonist can successfully start a business by relying on these things. I believe you.

Do female characters appear too often? I haven't written much about the previous one, so another one pops up! In the end, there was only a name, no image imprint at all!

This... Dozens of people write about a lot of girls together. Is this a supermarket wholesale business? 7

Is it too much to copy the first chapter? Couldn't anyone see it?

Damn it, can anyone who is a drug addict give me some advice: Is this book a pornographic novel disguised as youth and rebirth? I just saw a TV host pinching the protagonist's butt... Is there really no need to write about it, instead of relying on a female character to highlight the excellence of the protagonist? This is just over 10 chapters, and I haven't entered college yet. It really disgusted me! Is this the case later? I would like to ask those who have watched it to tell me that I dare not watch it for fear of vomiting...