A Star of Substance

The story is too bland, and picking up girls is just like a greasy middle-aged man.

Rabbits eat grass from the edge of their nests and won't let go of any grass. In what age are you still writing articles like this? It would be unreasonable not to pounce. If you still write it like this, then keep fighting.

The part with Wu Yuyan at the beginning was written so innocently, but then he turned around and turned into a stallion. It was so disgusting.

This woman at the beginning is so stupid. With an agent and a company, she wouldn't be so stupid to say this publicly.

The beginning is good, it's just a song text, it's a bit story-driven and a bit narrow.